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AvaCeciliaGrace

6d

Replied to IReadLots

he goes to places as Law Matani then checks in elsewhere nearby as Horizon days later to make it look as if he just arrived. The logo is Horizon's logo not Law Matani. He's made Law look like a rich playboy with tattoos.

"He's on his way," Nezu says, seeing Horizon turn away from the camera and walk across the room. On the back of his grey UA blazer, he sees Horizon's logo. "Did you really have to put that on the uniform?" he scoffs. Shaking his head at the sight of Horizon's logo printed in the same UA green on the back of the uniform.

MHA: Horizon (Ope-Ope No Mi)

Anime & Comics · keanu_eugene

AvaCeciliaGrace

10d

Posted

30 Chapters in and its just a crackfic. The MC doesn't need to be OP right away but all the author does is make her banter with the system and act like an idiot. Nothing about this fanfic is serious and everything is treated like a joke. Crackfics are just not my cup of tea and author should probably put that it is one in the synopsis. etc etc MC is also an idiot.

ANBU: Card System In Naruto

Anime & Comics · EchoingDusk

AvaCeciliaGrace

1mth

Posted

Story has the same premise as the story 'Ohh Sh*t I'm in Marvel' but that other story had sh*t translation and was annoying af to read/take seriously. So far this story is so much better than that and hope it continues that way.

Marvel: The Foundation

Movies · Darkstar_crow

AvaCeciliaGrace

2mth

Commented

you don't have to keep reintroducing the MC :/

It has been quite a while since the whole debacle with the villain.

Becoming Makima in the Multiverse

Anime & Comics · Savant_Paragon

AvaCeciliaGrace

6mth

Commented

Edward was never arrogant "in" believing that his plans were infallible. changes it to make sense more while still allowing him to be arrogant in other areas.

Edward was never arrogant, believing that his plans were infallible. As a person who will one day travel across countless universes and dimensions, he can imagine the kind of powerful being he will encounter.

Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard

Book&Literature · LazySageDao

AvaCeciliaGrace

8mth

Replied to Demonic_Kaiser

strong descriptions are fine and I don't mind that at all its when it gets to ridiculous levels and there is more descriptions and no plot/advancement. An example of ridiculous levels would be Shinigami of the Marvel World. It was almost trolling/sarcastic levels of descriptions and unnecessary words.

ch 0 4 Another one, Network (1)

Halo: Gravemind’s Survival Guide In Warhammer 40K

Video Games · Demonic_Kaiser

AvaCeciliaGrace

8mth

Replied to Demonic_Kaiser

Please more casual. It gets too long winded and annoying to read like in the first 5 paragraphs. You're not really telling any important information except a few key details and the rest is just fluff that is filling up the paragraphs and i just start skimming.

ch 0 4 Another one, Network (1)

Halo: Gravemind’s Survival Guide In Warhammer 40K

Video Games · Demonic_Kaiser

AvaCeciliaGrace

8mth

Replied to Lord_of_Alloy

As I'm strolling around the hall, I'm looking for Kol because in the original timeline, he brought our big sister Freya without knowing she's related.

reborn as the perfect original, with some tricks

Movies · Busy_Driver

AvaCeciliaGrace

9mth

Commented

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Shinigami Of The Marvel World

Anime & Comics · Cosmic_phantom_19

AvaCeciliaGrace

9mth

Commented

Author must be trolling the readers because this is past reasonable levels of ridiculous. SIMPLE IS BEST. I am dropping this novel even though I really love the concept and am a big fan of bleach/marvel. Maybe if its rewritten or changed ill try to reread in the future but this pretentious, ( or trolling) writing style really kills any ability to enjoy reading it.

ch 14 A New Beginning in Rukongai and Problems

Shinigami Of The Marvel World

Anime & Comics · Cosmic_phantom_19

AvaCeciliaGrace

9mth

Commented

I keep trying to reread this story hoping i'll see it in a different view or maybe a change in mindset about it but i could not for the life of me get past chapter 20. The monologues and MC are terrible

I just couldn't bring myself to thoroughly change it or reword it despite its heavy flaws so a little heads-up for those new to this fic. I just wanted you to know that the story picks up momentum after Chapter 13 - 14, so do try and stick around.

MARVEL: RE-DO

Movies · Draul_TheOminous

AvaCeciliaGrace

10mth

Commented

i get you are trying to write a good fanfic but the way you are writing it is terrible. Too many unnessary adjectives that do nothing for the story and creating nonsensical cliffhangers for no reason. Almost every sentence has too much extra flowery words as if you are trying to write a poem instead of a fanfic.

ch 12 Summoning

Shinigami Of The Marvel World

Anime & Comics · Cosmic_phantom_19

AvaCeciliaGrace

10mth

Commented

you need to stop explaining stuff that isnt important and actually focus on plot. 4 chapters of nonsense

ch 10 A Journey through the Heart of Seireitei

Shinigami Of The Marvel World

Anime & Comics · Cosmic_phantom_19

AvaCeciliaGrace

10mth

Commented

Blake yearned to immerse himself in the profound beauty that had hitherto existed only within the realm of fiction.

Shinigami Of The Marvel World

Anime & Comics · Cosmic_phantom_19

AvaCeciliaGrace

11mth

Commented

would be really cool to see the look on all the soul reapers faces when he turns into a hollow and slaps the fk out em xD

But rest assured he will stay Hollow a majority of the time since it will be his most powerful form.

Bleach: Starting as a Vasto Lorde

Anime & Comics · GloriousMilfHunter

AvaCeciliaGrace

1yr

Commented

Marvel, DC or Star Wars are good options

And one more question, which world will you guys want to go to if you get the chance?

Naruto : Otsutsuki God

Anime & Comics · Cyborg_Shounen

AvaCeciliaGrace

1yr

Replied to CannotSayNo

I should have phrased it better. I meant in the way he says how much he had vs spent. The translater lists it like a math problem but in english we would just say "I only have around 20 stones left after buying this or wasting it on that". multiple times in this novel the translator starts with the total and then subtracts down to what he presently has which its annoying to read

"I have acquired the Flower Wine treasure, taken away Fang Zheng's bag of primeval stones and also got the first place reward. My primeval stone assets once reached up to forty-four pieces and a half. However in the early days of refining the Gu I wasted six pieces and a half, then I used fourteen pieces and a half on feeding these Gu. My living expenses cost half a piece, and today I am probably left with twenty pieces."

Reverend Insanity

Eastern · Gu Zhen Ren

AvaCeciliaGrace

1yr

Commented

Seems like "no harem" won.. So it is what it is.

Psionic (Marvel)

Anime & Comics · Moziel

AvaCeciliaGrace

1yr

Commented

+1 harem ruins stories most of the time

No!

Psionic (Marvel)

Anime & Comics · Moziel

AvaCeciliaGrace

1yr

Commented

actually sharks have the smoothest skin on the planet. clearly this is a mistake :]

Jane gently stroked the shark's rough skin, although it was not really a pleasant thing to stroke, the sensation of doing so to such a large and ferocious animal gave a thrilling feeling.

Primogenitor in Marvel

Movies · Fast_Reader

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