Webnovel Author: Darwin111111 - Fanfic Collection

You could say that I lost my sense of writing... Although honestly, if I tried really hard, I could write something... But I guess I should try again but with something simple. A Ones-shot, or a story. Completing a story would definitely help me see the important things. Eh... I don't promise that I will continue it, but I will try to write again I guess. Work has kept me busy.

The manga that the protagonist is haunted by is a parody. Nobody denies that, it is VERY obvious. It's hard to take her seriously when the protagonist doesn't. Just as it is difficult to take seriously a protagonist who bases his actions on 'X fictional character would do in my place', mainly the parodies... And the problem is that he says it, because of how he is written, as if it were oh really.

I mean, I totally understand you. I read the Chinese and... Well, as always the idea is interesting, but the radical Chinese way of thinking always damages things or takes it to a point of being very stupid. Let's be honest, these are authors writing quickly without considering much, because even for a healthy Chinese person to think about killing because someone does something wrong to you is going from 0 to 100 very quickly.

I don't know, I skip it or something. I don't have it so present in my mind, because if I remembered everything, I wouldn't be reading it two years later here.

I remember why I stopped reading it when I was on the other page. It was for this. Do not continue. I think the reactions are over.

This is the problem with Chinese fanfic. They want to have it all. If I had allowed you to confidently keep the crew with you even when you give them your power, taking away their power if they betray you, it would be fine. But they necessarily add (even if your partner has it, you will have the power)

This is just something I heard, but I'll say it: I saw a video where the host asks the police officer what it feels like to kill someone. The police officer said nothing, not because it was a lie, but because if you think about it without purely thinking that it is wrong, it is true. The problem is what comes after. You begin to feel like that person you killed is looking at you, judging you. And then you realize... Kill someone's brother/son/father. That's where guilt and the desire to make amends for what you did comes in. Probably feeling like a monster is less 'I'm a monster' than 'I feel like a monster'. Because feeling is one thing and another is self-recognition... Eh... Self-perception. And that's what I heard and created. I hope it helps you with your story. You have to listen to everything to make one 👍🏻. (Translated into English from Spanish)

Man... It's a little disappointing that it's the typical turn-based fight.

I read the whole thing and it honestly sucked. Not because it's bad, but because it's not what I expected and therefore it was boring. I mean, I forced myself to read it.

Yes... Is his hatred so high to the point of bullying her and trying to hit her? What horrible things will the protagonist of the dating game do?

That is, Kakashi, a jounin of the most OP in perception, could not notice a genin. I mean, it's not impossible, but you could have narrated that he trained with his father to the point of being able to prevent a Jounin from discovering that he is watching him while traveling along a route taking care of people.

I mean... It comes out just because. 👍🏻. Don't mess around, I want to be the explanation for her.

Pride in something is not a sin. Be proud yes. In general, feeling too proud of something you do.

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Well yes they are OP. Sorry for not responding. I'm literally on my cell phone on the online page. This has the defect of not being able to comment on specific paragraphs.

So much training and preparation... I thought there would be more.

Wao... El apocalipsis no ha comenzado y el ya tuvo el nivel mental de matar personas... Aun sin pasar dichas dificultades y privaciones de... Bueno, derechos y ventajas de vivir en una sociedad.