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  • The Sword Path

    The Sword Path

    Video Games

    A talented young british martial artist , Arthur Ashton is waiting on the world changing VRMMORPG " A New World " in order to put his talent in the sword to good use . How will he forge his path through the numerous hardships that will come his way within the game ? How will he establish himself as the best player throughout the world ? This is the story of Arthur Ashton in his rise within the virtual world .

  • The Other Dimension's Knight

    The Other Dimension's Knight

    others

    The Holy Grail War, a nearly omnipotent wish granting device sought out by many magus of the modern era. As the shadow of the 5th Holy Grail War looms over Fuyuki in Japan, Alexander Cyneric finds himself summoned as the second servant of a red-haired beginner magus. But his status as a Grand Servant proves that he has been summoned for something more dark and dangerous than the Grail itself. A Nasuverse fanfiction that starts with the 5th Holy Grail War in Fuyuki. .

  • The Road Of The Summoner

    The Road Of The Summoner

    others

    4.7

    A genius of his era , Lyde , is interested by the game God's Domain . With his hacking skills , he manages to give himself a supreme class . This is a RSSG fanfiction .

  • Other Dimension's Knight

    Other Dimension's Knight

    Anime & Comics Romance Action Harem Adventure Nasuverse TimeTravel MagicAndSword

    4.6

    The Holy Grail War, a nearly omnipotent wish granting device sought out by many magus of the modern era. As the shadow of the 5th Holy Grail War looms over Fuyuki in Japan, Alexander Cyneric finds himself summoned as the second servant of a red-haired beginner magus. But his status as a Grand Servant proves that he has been summoned for something more dark and dangerous than the Grail itself. A Nasuverse fanfiction that starts with the 5th Holy Grail War in Fuyuki.

  • The Spearmen's Journey

    The Spearmen's Journey

    others

    Satisfy is the revolutionary virtual reality game that just opened up to the public, and our hero Lyde is ready to lrt himself go on an adventure, forging his legend in the way. Overgeared fanfiction.

  • The Dragon And His Priestresses

    The Dragon And His Priestresses

    Anime & Comics Harem Adventure Romance Anime Overpowered MC Multiverse Fan-Fiction

    4.6

    A man reincarnates into a world similar to his own, but notice a game called YGGDRASIL welcoming its first beta players. Not letting the opportunity go by, he as the Ancient Dragon will rule over the 9 worlds of the World Tree, waiting for the end of this realm, and the start of a new one. But Fate has decided to interfere with him.

Moments

Just taking nami and robin makes more sense, especially if you are hesitating between monogamy and polygamy, but you do you. View More
Ultimate Fruit · C22
4 days ago
I rarely have seen in my life someone being as delusional as you, as literally dumb as you, not capable of understanding even the simplest of things, and having as much bull**** arguments as you, none of the stuff you say means anything, and you apparently don't know basic behavior study. No point talking with someone who thinks like a child. View More
Sinful life with the strongest system · C1
1 week ago
You rewrote everything ? View More
Starting life in another world · C7
1 week ago
That's reality, even if you can't handle it, it'll stay true so grow up buddy.

Women are as bad as men, simple as that, there's the equality, it's just that currently there is a lot of problems in relationship because of them. It's simply because since the ' I do whatever I want with my body' outrage, they have much more power in relationships, so they're obviously going to abuse it.

What I said isn't sexist, it's called reality, guess what, men and women are different. You're aren't a 'believer of equality' if you suck up to women, thinking they're some kind of saints. Anyway instead of the very rude comments you've made, I just hope you wake up from your dream before you get hurt by reality, glass houses can only do so much when confronted against life. View More

reb1: that's said if you think and have and have that outlook on life and women when as there are actocities but their is also beauty and saying that is pretty sexist and for a guy who believes in equality and no stereotyping that's just plain massaganistic and borderline sexist and i don't want to make people one way or another cause that's not but still though that's kinda of a dicky thing to say when you put someone in a categorie just because of something you saw or heard or experienced when it came to women which is not right to do so and women ar human and you are human we are all of one union and we should but people like you who do this are disgusting so just die

Sinful life with the strongest system · C1
1 week ago

philippespalla: it doesn't have to be the 'absolute' fire Just use the 'common' fire he used in the arena against joshua at the beginning of the story or the fire he used against the hero group earlier.

Gacha Sovereign · C99
1 week ago

Zeyziel: By far this has been a very stupid chapter, holding back for what reason in this situation. I just might drop this story...so stupid

Gacha Sovereign · C99
1 week ago

TheHiddenSword: As mentioned by multiple people in the comments, can you stop making your characters look completely retarded just for the sake of plot ? He has like a million way to defeat them, but he's trying to attack them in the field they're good at. Like the author you're trying way too hard at making some sort of drama although it's the most cliche way ever, and cam't even do it properly. No assassins would play with their targets, they kill with efficiency and quickly then get out, there's no ' strength assassin 'or bull**** like this, assassins are reliant on speed, stealth and lethal attacks, what does it mean a 'strength assassin' he can be stronger than the rest but they look like mercenaries instead.

Once again there's too many problem in the power scales in this novel, like most novels where the authors desperatly tries to put ranks or anything of sort where trying to put labels on people when considering their fighting capabilities is just ridiculous for so many reason that I'm even too lazy to list them out.

So that's one more chapter that simply is to throw to the bin, and it's not the first one in this novel, it's been a while since I've seen an author trying yet still jumping into every basic cliche ever, usually they either dodge them or willingly go for them.

Gacha Sovereign · C99
1 week ago
As mentioned by multiple people in the comments, can you stop making your characters look completely retarded just for the sake of plot ? He has like a million way to defeat them, but he's trying to attack them in the field they're good at. Like the author you're trying way too hard at making some sort of drama although it's the most cliche way ever, and cam't even do it properly. No assassins would play with their targets, they kill with efficiency and quickly then get out, there's no ' strength assassin 'or bull**** like this, assassins are reliant on speed, stealth and lethal attacks, what does it mean a 'strength assassin' he can be stronger than the rest but they look like mercenaries instead.

Once again there's too many problem in the power scales in this novel, like most novels where the authors desperatly tries to put ranks or anything of sort where trying to put labels on people when considering their fighting capabilities is just ridiculous for so many reason that I'm even too lazy to list them out.

So that's one more chapter that simply is to throw to the bin, and it's not the first one in this novel, it's been a while since I've seen an author trying yet still jumping into every basic cliche ever, usually they either dodge them or willingly go for them. View More
Gacha Sovereign · C99
1 week ago
This king is back View More
Starting life in another world · C0
1 week ago
Einlion's story rip off for the beginning but worse.... way worse. View More
revise · C1
3 weeks ago
I never understood why so many people can have a problem with his and her ... it's the most basic thing View More
Sun Prince · C1
3 weeks ago
Unfortunately real life isn't like this. In terms of relationships, woman are far more realistic than you think. Making a woman happy includes having money and power to some extent. Not all woman are gold diggers, but there's literally no woman who would go for a broke dude, even if he can please them as a woman, simply because he can't support children nor a family.

If you think that woman want some sort of romance, you're heavily mistaken. Everyone wants it all, men or woman are alike. Woman wants romance from someone that is handsome, rich and so on... Unfortunately riches and power usually comes at the expense of ignoring relationship with family, which is why they're desperate. The ability to support a family correctly comes first, it trumps everything in terms of what a women is searching in a men. Being able to please them is quite far from the top, but when you already have what is at the top, greedy humans tend to think that they're miserable for not having the rest. View More

EroJaki: Money and power would make even the man half happy, and the gold digger very happy.

But to make a woman happy as a woman. it means something else that can't be bought with money or be taught.

(In real life, most of the rich wives are desperate because their husbands don't give them time or being busy with their jobs.).

Sinful life with the strongest system · C1
3 weeks ago
pure water blocks electricity and even seawater can't get hurt by lightning either. It directs electricity so he can just redirect the attack towards the sky or something View More
Ultimate Fruit · C15
3 weeks ago

Don_Dokhmesy: I just hope another studio buys the Elder Scrolls already and Bethesda go bankrupt

Dragonborn Saga · C468
3 weeks ago
I find the concept very good, I feel like the two universes are good as a crossover. View More
The Bow of the Vale · C6
3 weeks ago
Well, depends on what you think of life, but in this case, I literally described what happened. I don't think I have a bad view on woman, it's just realistic, nothing is all pink in life, certainly not human beings. View More

DragonkingKyo: wow someone has a bad view on women

Sinful life with the strongest system · C1
3 weeks ago
Money, power and so on actually makes a woman happy. Thr MC just got a pretty face, so he actually can't bring anything to the table. The MC would be just a toy for her because she's frustrated with her husband. In the end both got played lmao View More
Sinful life with the strongest system · C1
3 weeks ago
Mc is not someone from earth
There is no lemon
There is a harem but the situation is vastly different from a typical one.
There is barely any cliche
The MC isn't weak-willed

Are you sure you read the novel ? View More

200000000000000011: The craze of today's writers is to pick up and add clichés to it, like MC being someone from Earth who reads and watches manga and anime, or adding useless harems to the story or this lemon **** they call, or does MC doggie. behind woman, it hurts the dignity of a man you know? And another I don't know who was the retard to say that every man's dream is harem ... my dream is to reincarnate in the immortal world in search of strength and not this garbage harem

Other Dimension's Knight
4 weeks ago
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The Rise of the Strongest Vampire Prince of Darkness ( WB-JPN )
4 weeks ago
Thank you. In fact, the main point was that the MC was slowly becoming what he was depicted as in the game, while the others are already what they were in the game since there's nothing else to them, they were created. After that, I decided to make it so that he actually doesn't love them really, he basically created perfect women ( in his mind ), so he will inevitably love them in the end, but right now he doesn't really see them as actual person yet, just, like you said, images of what he deems as perfection. The reason why I wrote 10 is because he is confused about what is a perfect woman in his mind ( to be honest I don't think anyone can know ) so he made 10 just to be sure, although it was more unconsciously I would say.

Also for the virgin part, it was in the game, like he doesn't play the game to f*ck obviously as it was still a game, but for the 10 priestresses, it was real, so from their point of view, it has been 10 000 years and they haven't done anything, whether or not the MC is a virgin has never been disclosed.

The background is going to be revealed later ( although I don't have time to write right now ) and that will make it less cringy, also the story went from being written with knowledge that it was a game before, to being written as if it was real, showing that although it is in 3rd person, it is written from the perspective of the 10 priestresses, since they're the one basically doing important things right now.

In conclusion, you are right, but even if it is possible that it is simply badly written, that was the actual aim to some extent View More

NulZilch: This would be criticism post based on chapters till here

Honestly it's quite offputting the way you have written the story. The MC behavior is like an old married guy, and rather than being explored/shown characters traits are explained to us. This is quite unattractive way of writing about them. Not only we know they were fake NPC your way of writing doesn't let them be alive as well. They still feel like code.

MC didn't spend his time with real people in game. He should first be exploring and getting used to with his harem. Just read the overlord LN and see how the MC have troubles adapting to his creations and how he see them as his kids.

MC starting as normal and immediately planning of marrige and children seems ridiculous. Dude is even saving himself for marriage like a trad christian, lol. Their marriage and kids plans seems irritating when we don't even know anything about them. Readers should be giving a damn about them. But their romance parts feel cringy/awkward/hilarious/pathetic/fake because we have a perspective that he created them. He doesn't love the real them, but something he created in lines of codes. That's just sad. A man clinging to his codes as waifu that he wrote to be perfect. Other fics have MC as shameless and se*x maniac, but that actually eases readers into the story and we can digest the serious stuff later because by that time you care about characters. Your MC actually loves them and honestly once again that's just sad.

If you wrote your MC to be a loney sad man that is called loser/pathetic by others than that's okay. And i don't meant this in a sarcastic way. We can read stories about sad MC who learn to be happy, but i am guessing neither you nor the readers came for such a thing.

Good attempt at story though. Few overlord fanfics around.

The Dragon And His Priestresses · C5
4 weeks ago
Thank you, I thought that it might end with a completely overpowered character with no reason. Space marines are technically just military from the future. They don't have anything specifically overpowered, atleast normal ones. Then again there has been sort of heroes among space marines who are definitly much more powerful than normal ones so at the same time maybe they can actually get stronger either by themselves or by genetical augments.

I personally think the catachan trait is stronger than being a space marine in the long run, or more specifically compliments it well. Being a space marine is like improving massively every base stat and then you can start getting stronger from there. Although I could see the Imperium destroying or enslaving krypton with ease, i can't see a normal space marine trashing superman in a one on one. What I don't understand is what the krieg traits adds that the catachan doesnt ? View More

King_Of_The_Dead: I'm going to try and keep it as Canon as possible, from a Space Marines perspective at least, though they don't have any specifics on a Space Marines power in the wiki, so it'll be hard to keep it completely canonical. But even then I don't think Space Marines are THAT overpowered. It's the Primarchs that are ridiculously OP. And the MC most definitely is not a Primarch.

Space Marines are very strong and most definitely bicep curl literal tons, but so do a lot of people in Marvel and DC. Like, I don't think a Space Marine could outmatch Superman, for instance. I'd put a Space Marine around 10-15 tons in terms of strength level. Anyway, I'm not looking to Nerf the MC, if anything, by adding Catachan and Krieg DNA, I've made him more powerful than a regular **. Add the Healing Factor he has into the mix...and well, he won't be dying anytime soon.

Anyway, thanks for the review!

DC/Marvel: Space Marine
1 month ago
Thank you, I thought that it might end with a completely overpowered character with no reason. Space marines are technically just military from the future. They don't have anything specifically overpowered, atleast normal ones. Then again there has been sort of heroes among space marines who are definitly much more powerful than normal ones so at the same time maybe they can actually get stronger either by themselves or by genetical augments.

I personally think the catachan trait is stronger than being a space marine in the long run, or more specifically compliments it well. Being a space marine is like improving massively every base stat and then you can start getting stronger from there. Although I could see the Imperium destroying or enslaving krypton with ease, i can't see a normal space marine trashing superman in a one on one. What I don't understand is what the krieg traits adds that the catachan doesnt ? View More

King_Of_The_Dead: I'm going to try and keep it as Canon as possible, from a Space Marines perspective at least, though they don't have any specifics on a Space Marines power in the wiki, so it'll be hard to keep it completely canonical. But even then I don't think Space Marines are THAT overpowered. It's the Primarchs that are ridiculously OP. And the MC most definitely is not a Primarch.

Space Marines are very strong and most definitely bicep curl literal tons, but so do a lot of people in Marvel and DC. Like, I don't think a Space Marine could outmatch Superman, for instance. I'd put a Space Marine around 10-15 tons in terms of strength level. Anyway, I'm not looking to Nerf the MC, if anything, by adding Catachan and Krieg DNA, I've made him more powerful than a regular **. Add the Healing Factor he has into the mix...and well, he won't be dying anytime soon.

Anyway, thanks for the review!

DC/Marvel: Space Marine
1 month ago
Basic spider man has a capacity of 10 tonnes ????? Can I get a source on that ? View More

WolfLord: I just realise something a space marine in power armour would struggle to match a beginner Spider-Man in physical strength basic beginner Spider-Man has a strength capacity of 10 tonnes and all the all the strength feats I've read about Space Marines in the Black Library books and other space marine law would put them around about that range to he's going to need those super serums

DC/Marvel: Space Marine · C2
1 month ago
Reading Status: C0
Very worried about that novel. Depending on how the author takes it, it could easily be thrown out of the window because of power levels. A space marine even in his base form is several times stronger than a normal humans and akso is genetically enhanced on many other points. Also, stronger marines are also ridiculously overpowered considering what kind of beings they fight. But I feel like the character will either get heavily nerfed or heavily buffed View More
DC/Marvel: Space Marine
1 month ago
The girls just got hit by what's called Karma. Nice job. View More
Gacha Sovereign · C76
1 month ago

PrimalGod_Of_Fluff: I agree, but let's be honest here, there has been much worse marked as R-18 or NSFW and the like. Where they just say they put there dick in and cum in the next few words.

My Name Is Lucifer · C34
1 month ago

TheHiddenSword: A poorly written s*x scene. There's not enough t*nsion. Remember, you're not writing p*rn. The whole appeal of the scene should be focused before the act. 90% of the scene is before the act, you can even skip the act if you want. There's not enough description of the environment, the emotions. When writing those sort of scenes, you need to describe the feelings of the characters in details, the visual aspect, what the characters feel as in the 5 senses, the vocabulary needs to never use the actual words, it works better when not being frank, you need to use metaphors to describe the situation.

My Name Is Lucifer · C34
1 month ago
A poorly written s*x scene. There's not enough t*nsion. Remember, you're not writing p*rn. The whole appeal of the scene should be focused before the act. 90% of the scene is before the act, you can even skip the act if you want. There's not enough description of the environment, the emotions. When writing those sort of scenes, you need to describe the feelings of the characters in details, the visual aspect, what the characters feel as in the 5 senses, the vocabulary needs to never use the actual words, it works better when not being frank, you need to use metaphors to describe the situation. View More
My Name Is Lucifer · C34
1 month ago
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My Name Is Lucifer · C34
1 month ago
How do you write a paragraph comment ? View More
The Wish of the Dragon · C104
1 month ago
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