Webnovel Author: JakeElliott - Fanfic Collection

He's trying to say that you making Ainz a servant is a no go. I ain't even read the story yet, but I wont. I generally dislike MC's that join ones peerage in DxD and don't create their own, even if he is to betray them later on it still leaves a bitter taste that someone that should rival Sirzechs who's the 7th strongest being in DxD, if not surpass him and MAYBE be on the same tier as the gods such as Shiva and Indra whom are respectfully 3rd and 4th. (Great Red + Great Beast being 1st & Ophis being 2nd). To sum it all up, you making a person that has that much power a servant is stupid and many people dislike it. Have a good day :)

I've summed his review up. Writing Quality : Good Character Design : Meh, OP guy is enslaved to someone weaker (Which in DxD shouldn't be possible as they'd have to have more power) World Background : Just DxD ennit ? Update Stability : Can't really judge that as of yet Story Development : The same as many others.