kharit

2mth

Posted

I know reviews on here are different so 5 stars doesn't mean 5 stars somewhere else. however I still put 5 stars for everything because I do believe for the people who read here and what tends to do well that this is a good book to read. the progress is fast enough for the readers on here to enjoy but also not too fast where it turns into a fast food fan service novel. there is a good plot and the universe is very bog and intriguing enough to keep exploring inside and outside the origin expanse. I do love the depth that is coming into the characters after the initial showing of their most outside and basic characteristics. and the way power is developed and keeps getting more complex is also very interesting and fast enough to enjoy without making it too easy on the mc. overall a very good book for the type of audiences on here to enjoy. not up to the level of Supreme magus or shadow slave but close enough to deserve an amount of respect for the authors originality and skill. hope you like my review because I don't do this often author San.

Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!

Fantasy · HideousGrain

Their vitality will also increase, allowing them to live for decades to come. There are also rare occurrences when those who had consumed this flower would revert to their youthful selves, allowing them to recover the strength of their younger days.

Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate

Fantasy · Elyon

kharit

8mth

Commented

she knows he has abilities...where did she think he got them? she should know by now that he was healed and saw all his skills

"I promise that I will do my best to make you happy. I know that for the longest time, your goal has been to go to Elysium. I respect that, and I wish for you to succeed as well. However, know this, I have liked you for a very long time."

Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate

Fantasy · Elyon

kharit

9mth

Commented

great lol

'Oh, it was my bastard.'

Twin Reincarnation: Epics Of The Worldline

Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious

kharit

9mth

Commented

I think this would be better with more articulated sentences

[Many beings of absolute purity do not like the acts of the bad girl but the hot boy killing in a good way is pleasurable to them.]

Twin Reincarnation: Epics Of The Worldline

Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious

kharit

9mth

Commented

I would like to also know the answer to this question

'Why isn't there a fucking time skip button here?! What's the bastard narrator doing instead of showing some beautiful~ smut shit?!'

Twin Reincarnation: Epics Of The Worldline

Fantasy · H2Oz_Anxious

kharit

1yr

Posted

idk about this book. it gives me mixed signals. it seems realistic about cliches on one hand and on the other I want to argue against everything it stands for. it's a conundrum. however it is an original take on cliches so it's worth a shot to open your views on other books.

[Nightmare]

Fantasy · Margrave

kharit

1yr

Commented

I love the completing her sentences part. it's great

"Need to leave. I hope your failed delusions of popularity and power were worth Helix's life."

[Nightmare]

Fantasy · Margrave

kharit

1yr

Commented

I did like your other book however I'm getting a very childish vibe. and I do get it because they are children but I'm just not used to this. I just hope it goes away soon

"T-That's right. We came here to fight, not to watch," Andy muttered as he raised his staff and aimed it at the Undead that was suffering from blindness. After saying a short incantation, a ball of flames the size of a tennis ball appeared at the tip of his staff.

Strongest Necromancer Of Heaven's Gate

Fantasy · Elyon

kharit

1yr

Commented

didn't blame him? he's pretty much scum bro blame him all you want

　Well, I didn't blame him because he was dealing with those women, but I blamed him because he was spending so much money...

A Certain Milf Lover

Fantasy · IndianWriter

kharit

1yr

Replied to Sir_ClankAlot

nope. its even worse. could be a fake or doppelganger. until the end you never know. anything is possible with plot

...Left alone in the collapsing tower and with no more light to shine upon her, the beaten, broken figure of Changing Star disappeared into the shadows.

Shadow Slave

Fantasy · Guiltythree

kharit

1yr

Commented

who is them? that's the question

"Don't hesitate. Just follow my lead. Breathe, carry the breath of the world through your meridians and unlock...your true Swallowing Skill. Heaven is right. You're different from us. You're like them. So I'm convinced that one day, you can master...The Breath." Shenzhuo smiled at Xinzi and put his left hand on his son's shoulder.

Reverend Ecstasy

Eastern · Evil_Dao

kharit

1yr

Commented

it's personal opinion I'd be surprised if a lot agree

"The notion that only sorrow enables men to value happiness is yet another man-made fallacy. Do you need to know pain to understand that you're smiling?"

Reverend Ecstasy

Eastern · Evil_Dao

kharit

1yr

Replied to

no character development in ten chapters? omg report to the authorities Imediately!!!

Playboy Cultivator in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Margrave

kharit

1yr

Posted

I read harem god first and then this. I get the idea of hating tropes and everything however in my opinion you're doing a great job at making the tropes look like jokes and its increasingly entertaining. keep it up. I hope you can stay being an author instead of having to get a menial job. I will use you're success as an inspiration to do the same. best of luck

Playboy Cultivator in the Apocalypse

Fantasy · Margrave

kharit

1yr

Commented

I'm not an author so I don't understand the pressure however you write how you want it to be and look at comments for inspiration or introspection. read the negative comments and just ask yourself if you portrayed it wrong or if they misinterpreted it. there is no need to take toxic comments to heart. they are still paying even if they don't like it lol fuck em

I hear his [real phobia] is sickening, he's pathetic for not sleeping with Caitlyn in the first ten chapters, and he has sick fetishes for having Caitlyn please Lindy midbattle [for survival].