Webnovel Author: ExtraordinaryMe - Fanfic Collection

This is one of the danmachi stories that made me intrested in the sea of trash ideas. Future Rudeus deserve happiness he lost due Hitogami. But the Author wrote the character , not like he is Rudeus at all, it could be any reborn person not showing Rudeus speacil characteric the overwolming magic power and as well magic knowladge and more are kind of added to character like cheat, not part of the character as Rudeus. the Author took the point of conflict in the character in the first chapter preventing character devolpment as well close up as Rudeus. in first place the anime is about him overcoming the fears and trauma as shut in and fat loser, in his second life, so third life should be smilliar conflict.

I have to say I liked the fanfic even though I normally don't like Yuri, the writing is really good giving the fitting vibes.How do you develop her potential romance members along with her being able to give Falna is interesting.But still, I have a few points I would like the Author to take a look at.1. I appreciate you keeping close to the original Shalltear abilities that were written in fandom but sure those abilities aren't all she has so you could add spells or skills that feat vampire or job class,2. She is level 100 as such she and all other guardians have the skill to null all attacks from low-level weapons (not to mention even without it nothing should hurt her).3. I don't get what is her motive to conquer Orario as she doesn't see herself as a superior species to rule over such weak members.In any case, continuing to write you have a good story with good writing,

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The Author doesn't make any sense in his story, if you choose Gojo Satrou's power the mc should be op. Monsters can affect space😂😂 He is strong and talented yet nobody notices him including exclusive . I really couldn't read it longer as it was painful to eyes and brain. Author read wiki of both Danmachi and Jujutsu kaisen if you use elements from both.

I hate it!!! Why did you make him join hestia??!! He need resources right? He need money right?? Then why you ruined the story only to make other hestia famillia story like all other bad stories😭😭😭😐

I thought it was good fanfic when I heard he has fujitora powers but it's dissatisfying the Author limits his power by level. The cliche of joining the Hestia Familia is boring, he should be chosen loki famillia.