Webnovel Author: maybe_edit - Novel Collection

Not your preferred language? Here to Choose your language.

maybe_edit

male LV 2
2019-11-07 Joined Antarctica

Badges 5

Moments 18

maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
maybe_edit
Replied to Beornhardt
like why he didn't get accepted into the adventure guild, and out of nowhere a good girl appears, like who stops at the side of the road to give some money to a begger and from where the monsters came out to attack his sister and those thieves
maybe_edit
Commented
Your writing is good, you deliver well, but please explane the things you are writing about. I understand that having mystery is good and all, but cant you wait until the later chapters.
maybe_edit
Commented
good start, keep it up. But it is a little confusing at the start
Report user