Mark_Kieran

4mth

Posted

Can not wait to read more it’s very well written

Mark_Kieran

4mth

Posted

The story is very interesting and I do like the premise there are some mistakes such as calling McGonagol the vice principal her title is deputy headmistress calling Neville’s toad Ralph when it’s name is Trevor and calling the house cup the academy cup instead I’m not saying it’s not a good fic it is I just taught I would point these things out

Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

Movies · Kitty_Loves_Milk

Mark_Kieran

4mth

Posted

Can not wait to read volume 2 this fic is really well written there are some bits with the grammar but not very noticeable overall very good quality writing

Mark_Kieran

2yr

Commented

Hmm. Now to rob a few more criminals… it's for a good cause, after all.

Mark_Kieran

2yr

Commented

am I the only one who read x-mas as x-man

It was my first real X-Mas with Emily, and we were celebrating like we should have been since we escaped Hydra. As for gifts, everyone gave something to Emily, The Ancient One, gave her a bracelet with protection spells, I gave her a bag I enchanted to have bigger space than it should have, and I also gave her an invisible ring that allowed me to know where she was at all times, thanks to the location spell the ring had, Fury gave her a taser with enough firepower to knock down a rhino, a big one, and Goose gave her the privilege of letting Emily pet her on her belly, for that day only of course.

MARVEL: GAMER PATH

Movies · CORNBRINGER

Mark_Kieran

2yr

Commented

for some reason I read this as stretched his booty

Batman's body laid on the cemented floor, unmoving. Deadpool on the other hand just put his gun back at the holster and stretched his body.

The Merc with a Mouth in DC (Rewriting)

Movies · FanfictionLover2

Mark_Kieran

2yr

Commented

keep up the good work this is one of my many favourite fanfictions I am especially into game thrones self insert and I think this is one of the best

ch 40 Chapter 39

Game of Thrones: King Business - Tommen OC/SI

TV · PathLiar

Mark_Kieran

3yr

Posted

one of the absolute best fanfictions I've read in the last while with actuall well written dialog and good grammar I dont know how many fanfics I've read that have good ideas but were excited poorly because of the dialogue or the grammar which made them unreadable but this is excellent and very well written

Game of Thrones: King Business - Tommen OC/SI

TV · PathLiar

Mark_Kieran

3yr

Posted

really enjoying this story hope you continue to write it and hope to see what happens when ward gets out and what he does with luffy's powers and can not wait for Whitehalls reaction to the fact that shield has information on him and how he got his powers

Reborn In Marvel as Grant Ward

TV · shashank_bhatt

Mark_Kieran

3yr

Posted

loving this fic I binged read the entire thing and can't wait until the next chapter keep up the good work and I hope to read more fics by you

Steel Waste

Video Games · Niggross

Mark_Kieran

3yr

Commented

it's not asexual its pansexual asexual means you dont feel sexual but might like to have a emotional relationship pansexual is when you are attracted to a personality not there gender or looks

I'm glad that they are comfortable swinging both ways or should I say Asexual for Ororo, shes only sexually attracted to her partner and no one else. Moon girl got footage off Thor and she didn't bat an eye. Jennifer and moon girl were to focused on the hammer. So I presume we might be taking a trip to Asgard for Uru in the future.

Appoplexian in marvel

Anime & Comics · Smithsonian86_

Mark_Kieran

3yr

Commented

Going to the Future

In Dragon Ball as Goku

Anime & Comics · Crook_Shank

Mark_Kieran

3yr

Commented

I mean battle fan

Relics are items of power like Dr. Strange's Cloak of Levitation and the Ancient One's Eye of Agamotto. They have a slight sentience to them so Tom can't just walk in and choose whatever catches his eye. The relics would have to pick who can wield them. He only hopes that at least one of the relics on display in the sanctums will choose him. It would be awesome to be chosen by more than one though.

I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

Mark_Kieran

3yr

Commented

the battle can she used in the film was her relic the eye of agamoto is passed to every sorcerer supreme

Relics are items of power like Dr. Strange's Cloak of Levitation and the Ancient One's Eye of Agamotto. They have a slight sentience to them so Tom can't just walk in and choose whatever catches his eye. The relics would have to pick who can wield them. He only hopes that at least one of the relics on display in the sanctums will choose him. It would be awesome to be chosen by more than one though.

I’m Voldemort (MCU Xover)

Movies · AlienWarlord

Mark_Kieran

3yr

Posted

cant wait for another chapter I'm really enjoying this fanfiction and hope to see more fics by you keep up the good work I think it would be a great idea to find Darwin if he is still alive in this universe and get his power to evolve

Osmosian Gamer(Rewrite Up)

Anime & Comics · DanteMustDie

Mark_Kieran

3yr

Commented

winter is coming

End of a long night

Reborn as Saitama in MHA

Anime & Comics · Suploly

Mark_Kieran

3yr

Commented

"Hey there… I am Kona and I will be your next exam Proctor. I am sure that you are all hungry. I am not as cruel as the Emo Scar Face. So I have prepared a lot of food on the blimp so you guys can rest and relax. The next exam will start after two days."