Daoist863697 - Profile

I really like novels with this type of theme, but I didn't like the novel (I don't speak English, in case it wasn't translated correctly) -First, I don't like the MC at all, I'm used to reading a lot of things, but the MC's dialogues and the fact that he expresses his love the moment he meets someone doesn't look good, not even the conversations are interesting honestly disgusting -second, it is good that it has *** scenes and that it is the main thing, but doing so many chapters that are basically that, it becomes tedious and repetitive, I think I only saw until chapter 10, I think an image of a woman would be fine as it do some -Thirdly, it would be better to deepen the relationship with the female leads, or some kind of plot, it would be much better, and the *** scenes would not be so boring. I hope you do not take my criticism wrong, I really like novels with this type of theme, that's why I tell you, from my point of view, although I am only a person who reads novels. It is the first time that I do a review, I do not do it often because I am lazy, greetings.