Webnovel Author: Explorer_Avalon - Fanfic Collection

writting quality? while there are mistakes they are negligeable. Stability of updates? author loves editing every chapter which resets reading progress in library and makes it hard to acccess the fic because of said editing. clearly author has no concept of a google documents. Story development? for the first 40 chaps it was average after it just straight descend. the story with potential turned bland and uniteresting. you could skip 200 words or couple of chaps and still would have clear idea what's happening. Character design? At first realistic later pessimistic cretin. World background? a lot of stealing from other works so propably author didn't find the need for better story background.

i can't talk about writing quality since i'm not good with that myself since some chaps are locked i won't talk about stability story: mc has too clear memory of things, most people will have at most hazy memory of things they've did in the past if they didn't repeat that thing memories much. Mc also for some fuckin reson just jumps into bed of women, stress can make someone less rational but for **** sake mc is going for sage look but he doesn't care about stds characters are lifelike world background aside from being a little unrealistic it's okay

Could you also read my novel? Tt's still very short (under 8k words)

Writting quality a few errors here and there, i'm not good at gramar myslef so i didn't see grammatical mistakes. I've read the whole novel in 7 hours Story is quite engaging. Mix of sherlock holmes and dense anime protagonist. Characters are lifelike and immersive. Each character and most of the story is explained making a pretty good background.

it's about jeff and his travels tech priest will show up soon