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oh but do you, I will look at your other novel and find out if that is true (don't fail me.)

This is a comment mainly for the author. I feel like the villain element is lacking as you say that this book will not lack villain atribute but a true villain would do things not even the devil would do athe main character in your book is held back by your morals as you let them be free for the most part but I cannot say that the main character is a true villain. I do have to aploud you 👏👏👏as you are doing a better job at displaying a villain like character than all the novel writer I have seen. You have not beat them by a small margin you bet them by a league. So this is a good novel but it just falls short of some of the expectations I have for the villain.

now I'm curious what a yandere harem would be like in a novel. Good job author if I ever get the chance I will read past chapter 51 this is one of best I have read.

so far it's been the perfect novel I've been looking for and I hope it continues to be. most novels arnt that good after they reach the middle but this is very great so far and is recommended.

honestly I love everything about this novel besides one thing that bothers me every chapter as I read very far into this I finaly stopped reading it the gender bending I just couldnt pass over it

Very great overall sadly theirs only so many chapters for free but this can be one of your favorites if you give it a try but to continue be prepared.

very great novel but i hope you can start working on your other novel "wait my juice can save the world?" it was very good but you dropped it hope you can try to update it a little. This novel is also very great thumbs up👍

SAO right? I'm talking about the thing I'm commenting about

I need more chapters why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why why

or they might think it is part if they are confused.

I suggest changing the cover to English otherwise people will think it isnt

sorry I cant leave another review so all I can do is give you some suggestions from here please update some more

1 chapter I need more chapter 2 chapter not enouph 4 no 8 no 16 no 32 no 64 no 128 no 256 no 5012 no 1024 no 2048 no 4096 no 2000000000000000000000Trillion maybe but 1 is deadly it's a odd number plus I want more

to be honest I wouldn't recommend this much and I might abandon this most likely as I am only doing this cause I just want to type things I am not ganna use mutch description and this is probably not tou guyses type of book so no bad comments and I told yah of you dont like this also you guys can copy the plot if you want I dont realy care as long as you guys make it better and leave me the name at the bottom.

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great so far hope it continues as I usually think I find a great novel then it turns trash at Chapter 90 but this is extremely great so far.

great novel so far and hope you can update faster or at least keep the same speed . vvvvv. f