Webnovel Author: Akhilles - Novel Collection

Akhilles

2yr

Replied to PSE666

Akhilles

2yr

Replied to The_Celestial_King

True enough. But this is about how the Gods manipulate people. I want to bring this information out in the open. Make it official. Because the real test is about to begin.

"Hear this Maitho and hear it well. I hope it changes your mind," said Raiden, pausing and looking down with an expression that, for the first time, was devoid of any mirth. "Before you, I was the fourth member of the Celtic team."

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Fantasy · Akhilles

Akhilles

2yr

Replied to Blackpaint

Thank you for your kind words!

Pantheon

Fantasy · Akhilles

Akhilles

2yr

Posted

I love how the story dives into the plot without wasting time. You have just enough information about each character before you are give the first twist. This is a simple story. But I think its simplicity works. You really don't need a lot of complexity in this one, since its main focus is on the characters and their drama. Keep up the good work and looking forward to future updates.

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Fantasy · Blackpaint

Akhilles

2yr

Replied to MackenzieNdiweni

Thank you for the feedback! It means a lot :)

Pantheon

Fantasy · Akhilles

Akhilles

2yr

Posted

I want you to succeed on this one, so all the best to you. I think you should try to focus on one character's point of view. But I love the fact that you are going with the mature theme. Great work :)

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Fantasy · MackenzieNdiweni

Akhilles

2yr

Commented

I think the story has great potential. Try to keep the focus on one character so that it does not skip between many points of view. Otherwise, keep up the good work!

ch 0 2 CHAPTER 2: Painted with blood

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