You definitely made a good novel with how much work you’ve placed. I think I just have a different taste to how novels are structured but judging from everything so far. I could already tell that the novel would get better the more I read. However, the start was just a bit difficult to get into. I appreciate that there was some humor despite the gritty nature of it. It’s definitely a novel for someone looking for a fantasy adventure because it hits the notes people would look for. I’d definitely recommend it to someone if they were looking for something within the genre.
25thJamzy
Blood of Carnations
Fantasy · Alima Mahazabin