Webnovel Author: BlackDragneel - Novel&Fanfic Collection

I don't even know how this got into the rankings and don't feel like writing a big ass review. So, two words Dog doodoo. Story is so bad it's like eating a favour less Curry.

Mad confusing story, Mc's background is non existent. Most of the time was spent feeling slightly confused. Don't get me wrong the story isn't bad but rather average. It feels like reading a book that you skimmed over and then reading that book's sequel, you kind of understand what is going on but at the same time don't. The three stars is for the decent story but the plot's all over the place.

The story isn't bad but I'm 8 chapters in still no sign of any chat group. A day of school alone took like 7 chapters and the chapters are long like 4kish words. The grammar is good, characters are decent but the snail as* pace kills it all for me. I won't tell you to not read it but you have been warned.

THIS FANFIC IS A COPY OF "DXD:REKIBA". Trash🗑️ people doing even more trashy things. Absolute Re***d.

The author is very talented and clearly has experience. All of his stories are top middle tier. I recommend people to read these because these are better than 90% of garbage on this platform. Excellent story development, good but not best dialect I'd say 7.5/10, 6/10 on the relationship realism and overall common sense which is way better than some of the crap on this app that tops charts. The world background is very good 8/10, character development is I'd say 6.5/10. The problems with the authors's works are the hard focus on jaune arc and rwby, which I don't mind but it would be better to see something else. Another thing is I'd like to see the author make a non OP fic and based on another universe. The op ness of the Mc makes for a semi bland fic that makes fights feel bland. I'd say to refine your action scenes a bit more because in my opinion that is your weak point. Refine the character developments and introduce a bit of realism even if it is anime realism in your works to make the work feel a bit more alive. I wholeheartedly support the author don't be discouraged by my ratings and I hope you continue to improve

A third rate copy of Fate/transcendant with a horny, retarded, overpowered MC whose sole purpose is wish fulfillment. No wonder his family can't stand him. The writing feels incapable of expressing emotions and dialect in a way that feels natural. Sorry to say but this is bad, not trash level but bad.