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AkuaSenpai

AkuaSenpai

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God of Fire. Extremely useful. Give caffeine. Author of the webnovel “Blood? Suckers!” and now VWriter. Formerly AquaSenpai. https://akuasenpai.moe/

2021-02-03 Joined Global

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You mentioned you wanted me to show you the change in tenses. So in this line you are speaking in the present using present tense words yet in the next line everything has already happened and use of past tense verbs fills the line. Its not a major deal, just something I noticed. I love the story!
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Really strong opening; it gives off the feeling of very early stories like the Tale of Genji but with a modern twist!
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Welp, well I'm traumatised now. Great opening though, really pulled on my heart strings there!
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I love this very character and dialogue focused writing!
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