Webnovel Author: Eugene_OMalley

Eugene_OMalley

1yr

Replied to Devilngle

In the end, only one girl will be chosen. But along the way, it's anyone's game. I still haven't completely settled on how things will end.

ch 0 1 I am a Rock

Waiting to be Free

Urban · Eugene_OMalley

Eugene_OMalley

1yr

Posted

The story has a decent balance of different elements. It does well in showing that its MC is a world-weary man, while preserving the mystery of his experience. Each setting is well crafted to paint a good mental picture. And the way it's written, the character's inner turmoil can be clearly felt. The pacing is relaxed, but nothing to complain about. Only gripe is that some of the MC's self loathing inner monologue seems to be rather heavy handed and melodramatic. Aside from that, I think this is shaping up to be a good read.

The Guardian of Rynnlee

Fantasy · NobleQueenBee

Eugene_OMalley

1yr

Replied to Slime_King

A cyclops is a monster from Greek mythology. Physically, it's similar to a human, except for the fact that not only is it a giant, but it has just one eye in the middle of its head.

"Yeah", he sighed, "M-my older br-brother is K-Kenshiro the Cyclops."

Waiting to be Free

Urban · Eugene_OMalley

Eugene_OMalley

1yr

Replied to NobleQueenBee

You are welcome, faithful reader

ch 79 Black Box Warning

Waiting to be Free

Urban · Eugene_OMalley

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Commented

Needs a comma after 'Dear'

Elias's gaze became far off, "Dear Zephyra has no control over the thoughts of her subjects, least of all the one in front of you."

Empress of the World

Fantasy · NobleQueenBee

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Replied to FluffyHaremPlz

Just the one. However, we are copious amounts of chapters away from a definite conclusion. And by the time we get to that point, I hope that the one who gets chosen will not only make sense but be mostly agreed upon that she's the best choice.

ch 56 Philia

Waiting to be Free

Urban · Eugene_OMalley

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Replied to Yaxael

Geez, what did I do to inspire that gif?

Waiting to be Free

Urban · Eugene_OMalley

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Commented

Could probably drop 'It's useless" with the past sentence

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omwah

Fantasy · dead_oop

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Replied to ChrisMit

And you can't smell your own s**t on your knees

'It's all relative to the size of your steeple', Benjiro quoted in his head pretending he was more lost in thought than he appeared

Waiting to be Free

Urban · Eugene_OMalley

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Commented

Should be 'bloodied clothes'

He ran throughout up to the junction with blooded clothes when Jeremy saw a skateboard.

客服药物 (Eh. Will be rewritten)

Fantasy · BrewingFantasies

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Commented

I think the word should be "followed" not "flowed"

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客服药物 (Eh. Will be rewritten)

Fantasy · BrewingFantasies

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Replied to ChrisMit

Sorry about that. I just figured out that by changing my genre to female leading, it would be classified as romance, which this is.

ch 12 Paper thoughts

Waiting to be Free

Urban · Eugene_OMalley

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Replied to ChrisMit

It doesn't taste fantastic on its own, but it really adds a lot of flavor when added to soup broth.

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Waiting to be Free

Urban · Eugene_OMalley

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Posted

You do very well in describing your world and characters. The imagery you create just makes them seem so real. Just be sure to check your spelling and capitalization and break up your paragraphs when you have dialog. Otherwise, this story shows much promise.

The Tribrid Girl

Fantasy · Darkswan

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Commented

Should be 'practice'

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I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

Fantasy · mattfuncool

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Commented

That should be "Oh, how I pity you, my friend. So tell me more. I'm interested in hearing."

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I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

Fantasy · mattfuncool

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Commented

Could probably say "As you can see there is much I don't understand"

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I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

Fantasy · mattfuncool

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Commented

Could probably lose 'if you think I intend to disrespect you by lying.'

"Queen Luann if you think I intend to disrespect you by lying, I had no such thought as what I have told you is true."

I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

Fantasy · mattfuncool

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Commented

Should be 'those two' and add a question mark

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I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

Fantasy · mattfuncool

Eugene_OMalley

2yr

Commented

Add question mark

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I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

Fantasy · mattfuncool

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Waiting to be Free

The Guardian of Rynnlee

Waiting to be Free

Waiting to be Free

Empress of the World

Waiting to be Free

Waiting to be Free

omwah

Waiting to be Free

客服药物 (Eh. Will be rewritten)

客服药物 (Eh. Will be rewritten)

Waiting to be Free

Waiting to be Free

The Tribrid Girl

I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

I am the King of the Undead (has now been moved)

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