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MIMI24

MIMI24

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2021-03-14 Joined Global
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MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
sorry for being late to review your novel.

ch 0 2 The Accident

I Wish For the Top of the Tower

I Wish For the Top of the Tower

Fantasy · AthensAwaitsMe

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Posted
The writing is good. It is just the beginning but the premise is good and has suspense. Cleo's backstory needs to be stronger. Waiting for the work to update more. All the bast.
I Wish For the Top of the Tower

I Wish For the Top of the Tower

Fantasy · AthensAwaitsMe

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
Intriguing opening chapter

ch 0 1 The Interview

I Wish For the Top of the Tower

I Wish For the Top of the Tower

Fantasy · AthensAwaitsMe

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Posted
The story was a fun read. Although it had only a few chapters, the premise is there so there must be many exciting things to read. The characters were nicely crafted.
Double play: A sister’s desperate gamble

Double play: A sister’s desperate gamble

Urban · Diamond_sunshine

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Posted
The writing is good and the chapters are long!!!!!!! (I hope I can do that too.) The characters are nicely crafted and their images are cute too. Nice work. Just the first chapters were too packed with information that made it hard to understand the whole system.
ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf

ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf

Fantasy · UelUel

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
keep the good work!

ch 0 -42 I'll stay by you

Half me and half...

Half me and half...

Fantasy · Inemin

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Posted
The writing is good and smooth. The story is a bit confusing. The second and third prologues are long and somehow add to my confusion. But when the story begins, things become clearer. The world background needs to be more explained. It is a multi-realm background and should be taken one by one to be understandable for readers. At first, many characters do many things in many places. Try to focus on the MC from the beginning and let her discover the realms by herself. The first prologue is a good start, but if the first chapter began with Luna, maybe it would be simpler and easier because I really had a hard time tracking the story. All the best.
Half me and half...

Half me and half...

Fantasy · Inemin

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
Why did he go by himself? he could have ordered someone else to go.
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Half me and half...

Half me and half...

Fantasy · Inemin

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
There were two babies in the name of Luna?

ch 0 -50 Luna

Half me and half...

Half me and half...

Fantasy · Inemin

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
So Nakul spent 40 years to do his task and still trying to?
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Half me and half...

Half me and half...

Fantasy · Inemin

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
Intriguing opening chapter

ch 0 -53 Prologue part I

Half me and half...

Half me and half...

Fantasy · Inemin

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
Who is Nala?
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Half me and half...

Half me and half...

Fantasy · Inemin

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
Nice poem

I doubted if I should ever come back.*

Half me and half...

Half me and half...

Fantasy · Inemin

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
Nice opening chapter

ch 0 1 Suicidal

Loving The Temperamental Adonis

Loving The Temperamental Adonis

Urban · Ash20

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Posted
The story is fun to read. The writing quality is good, smooth and detailed. The Fl's personality is likable and the other characters too. good work.
Loving The Temperamental Adonis

Loving The Temperamental Adonis

Urban · Ash20

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Replied to Diamond_sunshine
you are totally right

The maid lowered her head and walked out like a wronged child. Selah shook her head and followed the maid. She had no patience to listen to her previous relationship with a scary man. It was obvious the man didn't love the duchess, but she was still throwing herself on him thus ending a miserable end.

Escaping Her Worst Fate

Escaping Her Worst Fate

History · MIMI24

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Posted
The writing is good and simple to understand. The story development is a bit slow. The first chapter introduces the ML only. There is no action but the fight with a bully which gets solved easily. Give the lead an ambition and let him suffer to achieve it. It was said that the main character had some sort of great power. It will be nice to have him discover himself through tough experiences and not give him the power easily. Overall it is a fun read.
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MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
It was a fun read. Continue the good work!

ch 0 2 Ethan Smith

Double play: A sister’s desperate gamble

Double play: A sister’s desperate gamble

Urban · Diamond_sunshine

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
she was certainly going to be fired.

Avery's jaw dropped as she took in his features. His strong jawline, piercing eyes which were framed by his dark and long lashes, and his full lips had a natural pink hue, adding to his overall attractiveness.

Double play: A sister’s desperate gamble

Double play: A sister’s desperate gamble

Urban · Diamond_sunshine

MIMI24

MIMI24

3mth
Commented
Wow! Nice move.

That was the breaking point for Avery. Her blood boiled as anger coursed through her veins, and before she could realize it, she had already picked up a cup of hot coffee, and thrown it at him.

Double play: A sister’s desperate gamble

Double play: A sister’s desperate gamble

Urban · Diamond_sunshine

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