Webnovel Author: FreddyDeathBear - Novel Collection

I thought the system specifically told him when he first got it, that "assassinating those around the protagonist" was a way of going about things without directly killing the protagonist, thus not being affected by whatever dumb rules of the protagonists halo.

can you input something signifying a time skip or something... trying to read that really confused me as it came out of quite literally nowhere. If not that's fine too but it would help out quite dramatically for new readers.

still confused... wasn't poison doulou unable to even use his martial spirit because of MC's skill?

didnt even try to bargain... with the 'Grandmaster's' personality he would've heard him out. After all even though he's a tyrant, he dislikes trouble. And considering the MC's strength, it seems like unnecessary trouble to even suggest the first option. He'd at most present an accord(deal), for instance... "you clearly came here for a reason, seeing your strength and ruthless bloodshed, I have to ask what you're after. Whatever it is, with my ability I'm willing to exchange it assuming you work for me and if that isn't very interesting to you, then you can choose to fight in the arena against the champion... considering there's a current lack of contenders". That makes much more sense for his cunning and deceptive personality than just straight forward "do this or die". plus this is becoming more and more Chinese as we progress... 1000 catties? really? I have no issue with it, besides the fact you used different measurements originally. I also have to agree with a previous comment... this chapter is BEYOND forced... it's the equivalent of watching a non gamer play a game. Incredibly frustrating and you have to force yourself to endure it. Forgive my rant... I am currently in an annoyed state.

... Is every iron related object going to be Iron-Man? I mean Iron-Man Door, Really? I've ignored it so far but it's quite literally every time Iron appears... love the novel, the way it's going is quite well. But I mean... it shouldn't be that hard to disassociate Iron-Man from iron objects.

kinda hoped he would've kept one alive to extract the German language from... would've helped him somehow I'm sure. like for instance eavesdropping on conversations or reading battle plans... etc.

so the 30 points he gained from eliminating the 3 people from the enemy guild just don't exist I guess... alright... I guess it doesn't matter that much... my consistency will be forever thrown off while reading this but otherwise it's still pretty good.

now at 90 points total... let's see if the author is consistent.

used the wrong name in this chapter during a fight. Long Fei is injured and lying on the ground, weaponless... you probably meant the MC, who has a short sword and is almost unrivaled in terms of speedy attacks... it also makes sense as the character that engages in combat with Shen Lun is standing in front of Long Fei.

I mean, I understand that the MC is pretty much just grinding his death streak... but can all of the side character stuff NOT take so much space. I'd rather read the story of the MC instead of the story of every other thing happening in this world that has quite literally NO EFFECT on what's happening with the MC. To me, these past few "auction" chapters have been nothing but filler.

can we not refer to a single character as "fresh meat" when quite literally ALL OF THEM are there to sign up... which would make ALL OF THEM "fresh meat" and even if they're already working for the military, who in their right mind would randomly harass a bystander, IN FRONT of a high ranking individual. even if she wasn't there, the fact remains that they're there to sign up, and pulling a stunt like that is basically just signing a death warrant during training if you happen to be put together... people hold grudges after all.

went from suitcase computer to notebook computer... why?

the only plot hole I've noticed so far is that they somehow know he got married... even though he didn't tell anyone, and there wasn't any sort of celebration... "oh well they might've discovered it when passing by the town they were at, or maybe have people spying on him." first option is unlikely as it was pretty much destroyed within an hour after they left, and the second one makes even less sense... who are they going to have under their control that can spy on a random alchemist if they're all low level cultivators. a human? well they would rather die than anger a cultivator they're unfamiliar with, so that's not plausible. even if it was a cultivator would notice something if they were being followed for that long. once again, nothing against it, I'm just really trying to figure it out. 😂😅🤔

live explosives, aimed at high level personnel... and you tell me this is a drill? right... I guess killing high rank officers in a drill would make the practice more "effective"... Totally not cripple military operations for a while until a replacement is available, or hinder further training due to injury and lack of manpower...