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I was trying to suspend my disbelief and enjoy this story but come on... In the beginning of chapter 1 the old money millionaire 70 year old grandmother bedazzled her car. I'm not joking, 300,000 glass crystals were put on her car. Rich people don't bedazzle their cars. That's something poor people do with their tax returns. Then the MC decides to give her new fortune to her husband in chapter 5. Her husband who makes her sleep on a cot in a study. Her husband who doesn't like her enough to consummate her marriage for 5 years. Her husband who never stood up for her, not even once (in chapter 4 the husband tells her to go to her room and she says that's the warmest thing he's ever said to her). Her husband who's rich but made her publicly beg for money to care for his own servant. She decides to stay with this man and devote her new fortune and life to him even though he's not done a damn thing for her for all 5 years of their marriage. Maybe she'll bedazzle his car for him next.

The author is OBSESSED with female virginity and purity. Like she goes on and on about how awful the she-wolves who have sex before finding their mates. They created a magic system where women lose their power if they have sex. They constantly praise the FL for being the only virgin in the entire werewolf world and talk about how lucky the ML is for having a "pure" mate, even though he's the world's biggest whore. In spite of all that, it was decent until the FL turned super sayian. It's well written at least.

The writing quality is at a middle school level, at best. It's very hard to read because of the low quality writing and frequent rambling descriptions that have nothing to do with the story. (Do we need a multi-paragraph description of Hawaii when the story doesn't take place in Hawaii?) The characters are never described and the ethnicity of their names is seemly random so you can't even be sure how to picture them. It's impossible to get a feel for the world because nothing in this story makes sense. In this world apparently kidnapping, rape, and attempted murder are legal and widely accepted as normal. Also there are no police, because there's no crime when everything is legal. If you want to read this story you need to accept that every single person in this world actively approves of kidnapping, rape, and every other crime. There are no missing people or investigations into doctors suddenly vanishing because crime is so normal that people just disappear all the time. NOTE: The lawlessness I describe above isn't actually established by the author, they'd never do world building to that extent. That's just how everyone acts. No one cares when multiple very blatant crimes happen, even when they happen on video. People just act like it's normal and accepted, crimes like stabbings are treated the way that we treat being late to lunch.

The writing is pretty good. The story is a mess. The MC starts off capable and independent, but the second they meet the ML they get dumber and dumber. The MC, a crossdressing man, tries to fake a royal pregnancy. A 10 year old would know that lie is going to fall apart immediately. The MC also becomes little more than a punching bag for the ML, becoming the end stages of an abusive relationship the first time the ML hurts them. It's hard to explain.

Well written, much much higher quality than the cover would make you think. My only complaint is that there should have been more dog content. More focus on belly rubs and scritches.

Well written, great pacing. The characters are likable and mostly believable. I wish the omega wasn't constantly damseled. He was supposed to be competent and capable, but was just a helpless little nothing incapable of doing anything for most of the story.

27 chapters in and there's been no world building and the mythology isn't established. What's the difference between lycans, werewolves, and hounds? How large are the kingdoms? What level of technology is in the world? What kind of magic exists? How long do characters live? What do they look like? What's the climate like? The characters aren't established. We're told their names and almost nothing else. How old are they? How are they related? How do they feel about each other? What are their motivations? WHAT ARE THE CHARACTER'S MOTIVATIONS? But hey, there's suddenly a romance between two people we know absolutely nothing about. I can't. There's also spelling errors throughout. Characters are described as "clam" and "storage".