Webnovel Author: McCrunch - Novel Collection

McCrunch

1yr

Posted

Great work, very descriptive with both the environment and character emotions, Very visual and helps with immersion. Writing quality was quite good I had no trouble keeping up with the story. I've read up to chapter 10 and I would say overall good job.

You Are Mine, I'm Yours Season 2

Urban · safa_bukhari

McCrunch

1yr

Commented

ok first chapter. feels more like a motivational speech though.

ch 0 1 Bad Luck Can Be Pretty

You Are Mine, I'm Yours Season 2

Urban · safa_bukhari

McCrunch

1yr

Commented

Bad luck can be pretty difficult to cope with, particularly when it seems to be targeting you and no one else.

You Are Mine, I'm Yours Season 2

Urban · safa_bukhari

McCrunch

1yr

Replied to Firelorn_P_King

Thank you for reading my story, and thank you for the review [img=recommend]

McCrunch

1yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 16 Disregarding the consequences ?

McCrunch

1yr

Posted

Great story grammar was flawless flow was unbroken. Characters where distinctive and likeable. A werewolf story that's actually interesting nice.

My Eldritch Werewolf Cultivation

Fantasy · Jolan_Hildebrandt

McCrunch

1yr

Replied to Jolan_Hildebrandt

thank you for taking the time to read my work.

McCrunch

1yr

Replied to MasterPizza

thank you for taking the time to review my story.

McCrunch

1yr

Posted

Great read, was simple and easy to read and although there was a few breaks in flow, it want too bad. Mc was relatable which is good compared to most other mc's here this one was tolerable. World building was okay but it can be expanded upon but i guess thats epected with only 13 chapters. Good job.

McCrunch

1yr

Posted

Wery interesting plot I don't think I have come across a premise like this which is a plus in my book. Some Grammer errors here and there but I make the same mistakes so not much of an issue for me. great story can't wait to see what happens next.

McCrunch

1yr

Posted

I have read up to the first 6 chapters and I would say so far so good, the world seems interesting, although sometimes the author would refer to the main character as a he and sometimes as a she, which confused me for a bit. The premise isn't anything ground breaking or new but interesting enough to keep me invested. Good job

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Fantasy · ZeroX0666

McCrunch

1yr

Replied to ZeroX0666

Thank you for taking the time to review my work.

McCrunch

1yr

Replied to Winnie_jazella1

thank you for the review 😊

It was the break of dawn, the sun had barely started to rise and the streets were already beginning to be filled with merchants ready to make a day's work. From the old gravel road that ran through the entire village, came walking the slim frame of a young figure.

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Fantasy · ZeroX0666

McCrunch

1yr

Posted

Good read, Grammer was good, read through the story without any breaks.Was able to get a good grasp of the world and main character from only 1 chapter. I would say great first chapter keep it up.

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Action · Winnie_jazella1

McCrunch

1yr

Commented

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

ch 13 Deals (Part 1)

The King is in love

Fantasy · Loctovia

McCrunch

1yr

Posted

Ugh why did I like this so much? honestly I don't have any issues. Even though this was a romance novel it had me on my toes the entire time I read it. Stories with such interesting sub plots are the ones that I live the most. Again I'm not someone who usually reads Female lead romance stories but this is has become in if my fav novels on WB. Keep up the great work.

The King is in love

Fantasy · Loctovia

McCrunch

1yr

Commented

With no reaction from Indicy, Lendon assumed that it was okay and then stepped forward towards the maze…

The King is in love

Fantasy · Loctovia

McCrunch

1yr

Commented

A voice resounded all around her. The woman turned around but saw no one. She was not surprised as this was not the first time she had heard the voice, she knew it was an archaic*. Such messages were rare, but she knew it was from the oracle. The oracle was supreme in the Ant Kingdom. Many people in the Kingdom never had a personal encounter with it but they prayed and wished for things to the oracle, and one of such wishes was to be answered by her, but she still wondered why she was given this message.

The King is in love

Fantasy · Loctovia

McCrunch

1yr

Replied to Loctovia

Thank you for the review alot of interesting buts coming up so I hope you can stick around.

Echoes of the Lost age

Fantasy · McCrunch

Webnovel Author: McCrunch - Novel Collection

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You Are Mine, I'm Yours Season 2

You Are Mine, I'm Yours Season 2

You Are Mine, I'm Yours Season 2

Echoes of the Lost age

The King is in love

My Eldritch Werewolf Cultivation

Echoes of the Lost age

Echoes of the Lost age

DDLETK: Luck versus Damn

ERROR: UNKNOWN CALLERS

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Echoes of the Lost age

Echoes of the Lost age

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