Webnovel Author: Cinna_4 - Novel Collection

Cinna_4

3mth

Posted

Already an intense start to the novel. The worldbuilding is very interesting, especially the visuals of the story. The world background is very vivid and is described in such a way that would be easy to imagine for the readers. Definitely looking forward to the development of the characters and plot progression.

Surviving the Deadliest Magic Academy

Fantasy · Gardbet

Cinna_4

3mth

Posted

I really like the writing style of this novel. I have been an isekai fan for a long time, and reading this book made me feel nostalgic for the first isekai series that I've experienced. I like the MC so far, and I have no doubt that the world would be expanded more and characters would be developed. So far, it's been a good read[img=recommend]

Cinna_4

3mth

Posted

So far it's been a good read. I am interested in seeing how the characters would be fleshed out even more, especially the MC. The dialogue and worldbuilding has been solid, and am looking forward to seeing how everything would develop.

LitRPG: An Unexpected Beginning

Fantasy · Darkodia

Cinna_4

4mth

Replied to Darja_Renen

Wow, thank you for your kind words. I will try to make it even better than I already is[img=strong]

Destiny's Shadows: To the End of All Beginnings

Fantasy · Cinna_4

Cinna_4

4mth

Posted

I will say that I am very interested in the worldbuilding of the story. It's probably the most intriguing aspect of it. I do think the dialogues could be better and delivered more smoothly. That said, there is big potential for the story to be way better than it is now. I have faith that the author can improve this series and make it peak. Good luck!

Cinna_4

4mth

Replied to Allen_Clay012

Thank you! I do want to focus on establishing the roles for each character very carefully as well as the world, so it is kind of slow. But I'll try to make it very rewarding in the future[img=gift]

Destiny's Shadows: To the End of All Beginnings

Fantasy · Cinna_4

Cinna_4

4mth

Posted

Always been a fan of great FL characters, and am always regretful thay we don't get too many well written ones, especially this generation. Which is what makes me appreciate novels like these, that have genuine depth to those characters, and are not only fun to follow, but also very inspiring. Keep up the good work fr[img=recommend]

Cinna_4

4mth

Posted

Really intrigued by the start of this novel. The descriptiona of the setting has been really good, and the mysterious aura really captivates the readers. A really solid work so far

Cinna_4

4mth

Replied to FryingDragoon

Really appreciate it, I've read yours too, and I was glad to see that our works have some similarities hehe. I'll definitely try and make the story even better[img=recommend]

Destiny's Shadows: To the End of All Beginnings

Fantasy · Cinna_4

Cinna_4

4mth

Commented

Interesting start to the story. I really like the pacing so far. Very vivid, and the descriptions for the world and characters have been perfect, it's very easy to imagine the scenes. Really like the MC too, she already seems fun, despite living a tragic life. Gonna keep reading this fr

ch 0 1 Chapter 1: "The Wrath of gods"

Cinna_4

4mth

Replied to FryingDragoon

Kind of yes hehe, but good morning to them would be something like a very surprised term for us

Now, any normal vampire would not say "good morning", for very obvious reasons. Which is why when one says it, it is with the intention of having conveyed something so mind blowing and so unbelievably good, that it enters the realm of impossibility.

Destiny's Shadows: To the End of All Beginnings

Fantasy · Cinna_4

Cinna_4

4mth

Posted

Interesting start to the story. Looking forward to seeing more development of the MC and especially the worldbuilding. Keep it up

ABOVE THE GODS (Eternal System)

Games · Debaxoid_Prime

Cinna_4

4mth

Posted

Just read the official first chapter, and quite enjoyed it. Really interested to see the future dynamics between the new friends, especially with stories with young kids as main characters. I can see a lot of potential in terms of development and growth. I didn't read the info and lore dump, but when I scanned through it, I saw a lot of information and shifts in the world throughout the course of history. I find that to be very impressive, though I wanna keep myself in the dark longer and keep reading with more mystery unraveled.

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Cinna_4

4mth

Replied to Naphide

For sure, I'll keep reading your work. I have faith that you'll be able to continue it really well[img=recommend]

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Cinna_4

4mth

Posted

Caught up immediately. Quite an interesting start to a story. Good usage of language, very diverse vocabulary as well. I am curious as to how the world would expand more, and the quests the characters would go to, and their developments. Can't say much as of now, too much is a mystery as of now, and since chapters are short and a faster paced than the average novels. But I'll wait for the story to progress further before giving a concrete objective take.

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The Genesis Trilogy

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Daughter Of Retribution

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Destiny's Shadows: To the End of All Beginnings

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The Apostle Of Time Returns

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