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I was gonna give this series 3 stars since it is not complete and many of the tropes it uses are seen in other cultivation novels. But now 2000+ chapters into the book I feel this book does deserve 4 stars (barely) for its philosophy. This book's mc is the best written "Chaotic Neutral" (refer : <a href="https://i.imgur.com/gVMl8tS.png">to the DnD alignment chart</a>) character I have seen. He is selfish to the core. He has a strong will and acts very rationally. He is intelligent and has no "principles" holding him back. The story as it progresses offers a transactional view of relationships and deconstructs the institutions of tribe/sect in terms of how it offers a moral way to accumulate benefits for the ones at the top. His ideas are not that original, others have talked about it before. "Steal a little and they throw you in jail; steal a lot and they make you king." --Bob Dylan "Kill one man, and you are a murderer. Kill millions of men, and you are a conqueror. Kill them all, and you are a god." -- Jean Rostand But he does present them in an accessible way. Many people can resonate with this since they can see how evil people often hide behind the garb of respectability. You can do a lot of harm at scale when you work within the rules, taking advantage of it. This makes it clear what morality really is - a useful tool to ensure social stability. These dangerous but true ideas are why they banned this book in China. The author was so close to finishing it too! So you will be able to enjoy 95% or more of the complete story by the time you reach the latest chapter. The story itself has plot device that lets you travel back a short while in time. So this brings in the aspect of time travel in a unique way. But that happens rarely and overall it still rides on the traditional single jump back in time trope where the mc uses his knowledge of the future to have advantages throughout the novel. But because the mc can go back and retry, this novel allows the mc to fail. That brings a fresh look to this genre because we are so used to the mc able to basically deal with anything that happens. Even failures are just temporary setbacks, we don't see a complete defeat where the mc falls into an intricate trap set up equally smart enemies. So other than the philosophy, the strong character building, this book also has a great world development. This word has a complete power system, well defined. It has the traditional idea of Dao or paths - regarding different aspects of nature. The idea of Heaven path being nature - which tries to bring balance (entropy, potential differences try to equalize, osmosis) is well developed here and later they expound on how the Human path is the one that opposes nature, seeking to bring order, accumulate benefits. This relates to the idea of how human cells <a href="https://saylordotorg.github.io/text_general-chemistry-principles-patterns-and-applications-v1.0/s22-08-thermodynamics-and-life.html#averill_1.0-ch18_s08_s04_p14:~:text=Cells%20maintain%20a%20low%2Dentropy%20state%20by%20increasing%20the%20entropy%20of%20their%20surroundings.">reduce entropy internally</a> by increasing entropy externally. This also reminds me of my <a href="https://***.quantamagazine.org/a-new-thermodynamics-theory-of-the-origin-of-life-20140122/#component-602ccf6a47f35:~:text=The%20overall%20entropy%20of%20the%20universe,by%20maintaining%20an%20orderly%20internal%20structure.">favorite theory</a> of life. Unlike other Chinese novels, there is the luck path in this novel and fate which is great because while the author did not reveal any deep ideas relating to them, I appreciate that he at least made us think about it. The way he conceptualized it was in terms of uncertainties, fate was everything that was deterministically causally connected while causal connections with uncertain or probabilistic outcomes could be influenced much in the same way the game master could force the computer to sample from a more favorable distribution when running the random number generator. But reality seems to always have uncertainties and free will does not lie in what we cannot control. So overall it is rightfully a gem among the genre of Chinese cultivation novels. I would recommend it for anyone looking for a ruthless intelligent mc in a cultivation world.
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I mean.. .. duh? did he think Jake wouldn't help. he should have atleast tried asking jake as soon as he found out. what's with him moping around?

It was the first time Jake had ever made a promise like that, but it brought Kyle almost magical relief. He was still the same fearful Playboy, but a huge burden had been lifted from him. His face was much more serene.

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yeah I mean it's believable he gave up when he was killed in that trial. it's more unbelievable how everyone expect him managed to not fail just that single round where you kept dying.

As for Kyle's character, it was true that the former Playboy was fearful, idle and had once had a misplaced ego, but he wasn't without redeeming qualities either. The mere fact that he dared to participate in these Ordeals despite his terror demanded incredible courage.

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.... "it's cool and all but don't kill yourself for face buddy"

"Since Riva's atmosphere has become unbearable, fruits have been genetically modified to better withstand radiation. "He finally explained in a hesitant tone. "Their skin is supposed to be almost impenetrable, but that's not really the problem. Their role is to stop radiation and toxins, and as a result the skin contains huge amounts of radiation and toxins, especially in the surface layer. For your health, it's best to stop this while you still can."

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big jugs

In fact, he loathed those who did so. If Sarah persisted, she would ruin the good opinion he had of her.

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The only way to solve this problem is to **** her hard. 😂 but the emotions is a good point and weird how the MC has it so easy. cool as a cucumber.

[ Give her a chance. ] Xi whispered gently to him. [ Like Kyle, the Myrmidian bloodline negatively influences her emotions, but it will calm down when she realizes that she's acting like an idiot and that you're not her enemy. Remember that by refusing her overt advances, you have hurt her ego. If she was your woman, taking advantage of you wouldn't be as embarrassing. Not everyone has a pragmatic view of the world like Will. If you want to solve the problem once and for all, you need to man the fuck up. That's what she wants.]

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periods is always the answer.

Whether she had an inferiority complex about him, saw him as a rival, a potential sexual partner, or was menstruating, she was wrong if she thought she could hook him by playing hard to get and behaving obnoxiously.

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this is good. it's too trite when there is peace and cooperation within the team

Inside, Jake was seething with rage, but he repressed the emotion. He may have been antisocial, but he certainly wasn't fooled. With Xi's constructive remarks, he had a good understanding of Sarah's conduct.

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maybe the gremlin species have no gender concept? or he is talking about his disciples collectively.

"All right, if they can instantly cast an Aether Spell I'll take them under my wing and start their training."

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it's never really free. you do favours to build trust, to have someone to rely on.

"I understand the principle. "He answered after a while. "But there's nothing stopping them from paying me back one day if it's so important to them. It's silly to refuse free help."

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this is true... I think it's weird to sexualize mouth to mouth. she is unconscious, it's like rape. not that fun even to do.

He felt like one of those losers kissing and groping drunk and semi-conscious girls in nightclubs and deep inside he didn't feel good at all. But every emergency had its extenuating circumstances.

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this might have to be rewritten for clarity. guys what this is saying is that he might have forgiven her if she was actually sorry about what she did. but she was just resentful for being forced to apologize. her eyes showed her true feelings.

These surface negative emotions almost overflowed, but these were not the only nuances these blue, amethyst eyes held. Alas, he was not able to interpret them correctly and had no intention of doing so.

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