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The Chronicles of Tomas Ash Von-Kade · C2
MikeyBoy: Yeah, it'll be a single aspect of the story. But it'll still be a pretty big thing for Michael. It's his character growth, after all.
He won't kill an innocent person. Get close to it? Yeah. But actually do it? No. He'd never be able to forgive himself if he did.Marvel: The Living Vampire · C4
SorcererCat: "If i can get stronger i will forsake my humanity" Interesting. Seems there is a good chance ill be dropping this LN. Forsaking humanity is no different than becoming a viscous snake and no better than bandits or many of these nobles. Seems this MC will fit right in with that group of scum if this way of thinking continues.Birth of the Demonic Sword
The Original Caïn · C1
Mustanges: Yay, a stupid MC who’s willing to kill himself for a stranger. Hero protagonists are already boring, suicidal ones are just plain stupid.
The tags claimed the mc was cold and ruthless, seems like a lie to me.Rise of the Eternal King · C6
The Most OP'est Titan (AOT fanfic) · C3
The Strongest Saiyan God (An ATG Fanfic) · C44
Ryuu23: I understand that the hero has to do different tricks in order to survive. But I really don't like to look at a weak hero. And I even forgot what he has besides hypnosis. I mean, the camera and other functions of the smartphone seem useless, albeit a little convenient. I am not saying that this is bad. I just want to see a strong hero soon. Yes, and frankly, I do not really understand his "cunning" plans.Smartphone+hypnosis+ATG (Yes, this is that 'parody') · C12
Felthat: Alright, so I rated this a bit low due to grammar and world building. Mainly the grammar. Pronouns seem to be used completely at random, word order is confused in a bunch of locations, and word choice needs some help in places. The names of some techniques change from one chapter to the next and some paragraphs have to be skipped through because they are so scrambled as to be gibberish. Though this is a rare occurrence.
World building....well I am 60 odd chapters in and still have no idea how big the world is, how many continents, distance between cities..etc. no real description of the environments or reactions to environments besides some vague stuff about pressure when underground. Or being in trees when in a forest.
Other than these issues, characters are engaging, interaction is done extremely well, and the best part, to me, is how power levels are described and used without resorting to the dao of numbers, and comprehension and enlightenment are actually described in more depth than just "a state of enlightenment".
Overall good story marred by serious grammar and not quite so serious world building issues.Ascension of God
Arkszero: Hey guys, this is the rewrite of the fanfic The Devourer. Though the title and a few of the concepts will be different, it will still be an Eastern fantasy genre. There will be harem, and I'll slowly introduce the previous harem members into the story. Before the rewrite, everything was fast paced and quite messed up as well, but I intend on correcting that mistake in this rewrite.
Anyway, I'll try my best to make this better. Please support me.Omni Skill System
Pripriri: ANOTHER MC WHERE HE DOESNT USE HIS EXTRA STATS. System. Eh haha😂😂 TOO MANY QUEST USELESS WISHES USELESS REWARDS... GOODIE PERSONALITY 💎💎💎💎💎💎🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄🙄..........................Entering the World of HSDxD
Jaykay2307: Toxin I love you bruh but this, this is not it chief, first your underestimating Gaara's strength in canon, like In cannon he was able to take hits directly from Lee in fourth/fifth gate if only for a short amount of time, and in canon he didn't train with a taijutsu prodigy, also his chakra, should be so so much higher the facts are that jinchuriki all have ridiculous amounts of chakra, he should not only have Low jonin rank chakra levels, also all his stats in canon for chunin exams were Mid chunin+ Otherwise how else would you expect him to take over the Kate position essentially just afterwards, not only that but in canon he never went to the academy and was in fact a genin for a few years before the chunin exams, your character said he didn't want to graduate early because it would screw up the timeline, well news flash he already did in multiple places, like it seems that you couldn't come up with ideas for missions so you just had him stay in the academy for the purpose of you knowing that the academy's are supposed to be boring, also even with shukaku we've seen Tailed Beasts come to respect or even bond with their jinchuriki the fact that shukaku still wants to take him over makes no sense, it really seems that you didn't know where to take this book after chapter one are just winging it until the chunin exams where you're gonna have essentially the same thing happen, even though it really shouldn't as canon gaara would bend over this one and roughly f*** him from behind when it comes to their difference in power, also, the apparently best thing about his novel according to your reviews, your system. I am something who would call themselves a system lover but the reason I love systems is the reason I hate yours, the normal "problem'" with systems is that the allow people to buy bloodlines and the like, I'd argue the main problem with systems is that the author makes a deus ex machina so that no matter what the mc gets that bloodline just in the nick of time or something similar, I see no problem with op things in the store as long as the author doesn't do something to immediately give it to them, a good example of this is within the "Anime power/world System" on this website it goes about the op system in a good way I personally think, now onto another point with the system the exp and the boost to power it's meant to give which I'd argue in this novel does the exact opposite I've already talked about how underpowered compared to the canon Gaara but also the eight year timeskip, within all that time were supposed to expect the mc just go about his daily cycle with out trying to get more powerful through other means, that's than a bit stupid if you ask me, for example in "limitless eternity" a fate fanfic with an oc and with the gamer system, the mc in that goes around destroy ant super colonies gaining loads of xp from it, the reason? Because there were loads of op people he would have to meet but couldn't beat currently. Similar to our main character, tell me if you knew that op beings like Juubito, sage of six paths madara and KAGUYA were to come back/become a thing surely you'd train your fucking ass of trying any cheaty way to get more powerful so that when those beings do arrive you're more than capable to deal with them.
Tldr; The authors being stupid about the mcs power and his motivations to do certain things, also making other characters have no character development even though they should just to make it less complicated for him, in conclusion just read uchihas tale it's much better than this.Gaara
DarkSchneider: Follow this if you want to read about a hypocritical MC advocate of justice who repeatedly reaffirms his grandiose moral and bottom line. He is the typical protagonist with hero complex who loves saving people left and right. Oh, and rest assured, if you want to read about an MC who uses his head and is rational, get out of here immediately.Reborn: Evolving From Nothing
Profane Prince of Domination · C460
Firebowle: Im honestly disappointed with this novel. Beginning with a clishe in die first chapter and in the second you can already see where the story will develope to. His opinion about big mum is that shes beautiful.....Another One piece fanfic
Syed649: Here is an honest review of my own novel, i cant promise to update everyday and would soon have exams to deal with, but i would at-least try to post a chapter once a weekEthan; A story untold (hxh fanfic)
Peace12345: Well that's ****ed up. You just screwed over the entire Naruto verse. If Hashirama and Mito do not get together then there will be no nine tails seailng, as well as no Tsunade and her relatives. You cant just make him have kids with her and have the same decendents, he is not Hashirama. Plus Mito was the only woman Hashirama ever fell in love with, you are taking his soul mate from him.The Uchiha-Senju Immortal · C15
One Piece: Immortal Psycho · C7
Meew: OMG. Really? Thanks man. I would've wasted my precious moments if not for your comments. Weak MC despite having the cheat since birth. Even weaker than the harem. I might still read it but hearing that he shares his secrets I no longer has any fucking interest in this novelDouluo Dalu System
Loli_in_Disguise: True dat brother, a thousand gratitude for warning me about this landmine. I also want to thank you for your sacrifice in scouting through the burning hot mess.Ultimate Fruit
matja1: I think that this novel is probably going to be one of the best that I have read as long as you keep working on it and update more chapters ----------------------------------------------------------------------------MGA : The Legend of Chu Xuan
God_of_Perverts: Antihero is better. A antihero won't go out of their way to harm a innocent person but can easily kill their enemies. A villain would just kill whoever.Namikaze Naruto · C16
Pripriri: If you like wannabe smart mc and likes to save everyone from anime even it is villains or dogs then this is for you..
I stop reading in chap 7 I think where he get ban immortality from lottery.
And first thing he ask is. can I give this to others?
That's amazing hahahaiFanfic: just another common fanfic with a system.(currently in Naruto)
harem4life: Honestly I don’t mind the story the only thing is. There is was no reason stated why he was uncaring. I couldn’t get anything from first chap. There isn’t any back story that points out the MC heartlessness. In the end as real as this novel tries to be, their are somethings it ain’t getting right. I think that their should be an excuse for many moments as MC is logical not one of those ****tard sociopath MCs. The story is good so far but there are many limiting factor. I’m gonna read ahead see if anything is explained. I just hope that the author shows how MC copes with the so called theory of the more time you spend with people the more you will subconsciously care about them. I mean he has to care about his ninken dog.Naruto: Dream to immortality · C22
Swiftwolfbeta: Would you give an evil person the chance and ability to come after you in the future?Power Manipulator in Dxd · C1
Swiftwolfbeta: Because gods arent stupid enough to give asswholes power or a second chancePower Manipulator in Dxd · C1
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