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Great storyline and characters. The story is easy to understand and follow and I havenβt gotten bored of it in the slightest. Definitely recommend to friends or whoever is reading this.
I really liked the story, but it's impossible to read with all these grammar errors and poor editing. I feel it would be an easier fix than just having a bad story. I hope the author looks into getting either a better editor or get a programm checking the grammar
This book is simply amazing, the story is very gripping and one chapter leads the other! I'm always waiting for the next one to come out. The story is really gripping and everything is really clear despite the very elaborate plot, characters introduction is really well made and doesn't take too much time so the reader is immidiately involved into the events. Really consistent characters who never do something against their real nature, and talking about the background you will surely notice how well made it is, there are many true mythical/historical references which make everything even better.
Highly recommended, it will be well spent time.
Honestly grammar is pretty bad, and could use better spacing, but overall it's pretty good. I would recommend this only if you're bored because it's kinda cliche tho.
This novel has a ton of potential but sadly is held back by a ton of grammar issues that makes it look like it was translated by a machine. If the novel was rewritten with proper grammar and some of the sentences were revised to flow more easily then this would be a 5 star book. Another problem is that dialogue comes in the middle of paragraphs and is not separated when different people start talking making it hard to follow. The sex scenes are terrible and impossible to understand while having an unnecessary amount of cussing.
I gave this story two tries and I just couldnβt read through. The character relationships are rushed and make no sense. How can you gain a sibling bond in a couple of hours? I mean how?
Then I do not mind that this is R-18 but even that is rushed and makes little sense. I saw so much potential for the this story but alas it fell short for me personally.
amazing novel i really enjoyed it so much and big thanks for the author for making this you are amazing ccccccccccccccccccooooooooooooooooolllllllllllll
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