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Ergon_Tempest
Will MC gain magic somewhere in the story? Otherwise itâs boring for me. I want to enjoy reading some magic and stuff.
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Tunic01
It was good until Anya joined, everything just went downhill from there. There weren't really jokes anymore the Mc is constantly stalked by her were ever minute of his daily life is spent with her except when he goes to sleep which is extremely annoying and the second after he met her his and Hermiones relationship just disappeared. Like they used to spend a ton of time together, now I don't think they ever talked alone once in like the entire 3rd year... also there flirting just completely disappeared, so after that is just got dull. I'm not really a fan of the plot so I stayed for the comedy and the romance which the Author butchered after the annoying stalker. Yeah he character is good, but the way she was brought in and her purpose in the story so far is absolutely awful. She should've just been another student and she become part of the Golden trio...
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Rizki_Caturianto
One of the best Harry Potter fanfiction I ever read.. There's not many HP fanfic whose MC is muggle, but can go to Hogwarts (there's not many subject MC/Vincent can learn).. So, I can say it's new, fresh, interesting story line... I really really really love it ððð
Can't wait to see next chapter ððððð
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djmistry621994
good book totally different kind from normal good book totally different kind from normal good book totally different kind from normal good book totally different kind from normal
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RedArts78
ððððððððððððððððððððððððððððâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļâĪïļðððððððððððððððððððððððððððð
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RoseAmber
ðđð PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE!!!!! I love this story.ð Please update and continue. NEED MORE
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Suuper
One of the best Harry Potter FF I've read. Would be given a 10/10 is not for the slow updates. Hilarious to the extreme................................
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AQUi
nice story author, I was thinking of giving 5 star because I really really like this. but I settled with 4.8 cause your last update was last month. it's ok considering that each chapter was long.
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Daoist423242
Please donât drop this novel author samaaa ðĨšðĨš.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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Daoist423242
It is really good ððððð[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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nateduck989
Absolutely love this story so far i just ask that what ever you do with the story please just dont drop it i wish to see this story completed
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Kathleen_Reed
love the story plus i had alot of laughs but ik vincent won't give up on making a potion or gem like stone to keep dementors away i think the horn of unicorn, tears and phoniex blood would work in the potion one pure plus maybe the song sung over the potion just like how nyx helps speed up the potion just idea though but please give credit to me since its my idea but its the author decision to put it in the next chapter or not. can't wait for more
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RoseAmber
Great story. One of the best I've read so far. Please continue with your story. I can't wait to read the next chapter. MORE MORE MORE
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TromJH2424
You shouldnât waste your time eith this story, though Iâm probably just too used to the quality of the content on Royal Road. xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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Viccoe_2001
First time writing a review but this book really makes me want to write it cause this book is really good. Never stop writing cause you are really good at it.
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TippierHalo
Good job author hope you continue your endeavour!!!!!!!!!!!exp is hard to get sorry Imma just!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!thanks for the exp keep going
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creepycatisawesone
I am lazy . so tell me if the mc . knows about the Harry Potter or he has no idea about the story
Anyway I gave 5 stars in advance for your answer author san
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taoistchirimoya
solo quiero saber una cosa, tiene romance la novela o solo es MC neutral? solo eso,............................................................
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Gods_Mistake
This Is one of the best HP fanfics ive ever read<3 <3
I Love the plot, the characters,but mainly the different relationship dynamics between characters
Keep up the good work {^_^}
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maganam
This is bloody brilliant. Made me laugh many times. This novel is an ideal mix of light-hearted and serious story. It's a pity that we have so little chapters :(
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_Shiro_Neko_
Great story! An interesting idea of putting a muggle into the world of wizards. There is a lot of humor and great storytelling, following the original plot but changing it at the same time. Amazing story!
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Archonstine
This is one of the best and most satisfying harry potter fan fiction I have ever had the pleasure to read. It is also the only one which has a mughe for an MC. And the dragon, ice and walking willows,etc experiments are completely hilarious. Sometimes I just visit the first 10 chapters to read his interaction with Snape and Malfoy so that I can have a good laugh.
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NarutoSO
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RoseAmber
ðđð ð Dear Author San please don't forget about us. We miss you. It's been over 2 months. Please update. We're dying here. I need to know what happens next.
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LilNightinGale
I love the way that Vincent gets into trouble and his relationship with Snape. Itâs just so heartwarming! Also, when Vincent interacts with other characters he is just so nice. I really want to learn more about his tragic backstory. What was with the orphanage that he left flowers at? His old one? Who is the King? Thank you for this amazing novel!
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