This fanfic is amazing. The main character is also so much better than the original one.
If you can, you should make a fanfic on the tv series The 100. Itβs a good tv series overall, but there are a few aspects that bother me.
hmm, mediocre author but I guess it's good so check it out. Also, the man has to update more like common twice a week but anyway I think it's good so check it out
Great history, a little slow but good.
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IF i had to pick what stands out the more to me in this novel would be the story development and character design, it's quite amazing, and the interaction between all characters feel natural. Each person in this novel has their own personality and characteristic which makes them unique. THe author has added a lot of original characters to blue exorcists and made the whole thing better. So i enjoyed a lot what he has written. I read all current 50 or so chapters in a few days but now I'm really sad about the possibilities of author either not updating for many months or dropping this amazing novel.
This novel has the problem of very irregular updates with an average of 1-2 chapters per month and the biggest gap between chapters being almost 8 months with no word from the author. This is a huge con about this novel as we don't know at all If the author will go missing again with no word for a year or not.
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Grammar is alright, stability is good, story development is good, character design is lacking, world background is alright.
Character design is the only thing you really need to work on, describe your character early on in the fic, even if they're a known character.
Keep mentioning physical traits of the charater as the story progresses.
Even something simple like, 'I ran my hair through my blue hair'
It's good, not very descriptive but good.
Script-style writing doesn't lend itself to descriptions, so that's fine.
I would hope to see some descriptions in your future works.
Ex: "Goddammit, script is for plays and movies!" The reviewer shook his fist angrily, cursing the author with all the anger he could muster.
"You monster! I need something other than dialogue to get lost in the story!" Feeling unsatisfied, the reviewer shook his head and dived headfirst into a wood chipper, scaring a family of five forever and painting the surroundings red.
It's an interesting take on blue exorcist, with new characters, which include: new villains, new heroes, new comrades, new rivals and an hillarious new slew of girls for the MC
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I like it I really do The world story isnβt bad I like the character development along with hell rain seems to be getting more demonic I want him to go down that path awakening his inner demon fuising with it which I hope will occur I donβt want him to be a good game the Saints or even a hero it should be more like second sunsβs anarchy thing out is infamousοΏΌ
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Good novel and all, but my only problem is the stability of continuous uploads. Yes, I know you have school, and yes, it is hard to come up with ideas. But, Sj, upload every month instead of every decade?! π
Iβm kidding, man, take your time!
Itβs not good. Learn to use fucking proper grammatical dialogue structure it isnβt hard. βWay to go,β says reviewer-Chan. Next paragraph. Author-kin smiles and exclaims, βThanks for appreciating my work!β
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Therefore, we come up with a list of pretty good if not better than 95% trash novel litterred everywhere.
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I remember that i have unfortunately found something where there's a certain MC who're up to now hasn't killed any one I mean every time he fights someone they run away and he is stronger than them practically all the time.
They always come back but he never kills them he says he's going to but he never does.
Its been the same people trying to kill him over and over again and the list just keeps getting bigger but he still doesn't kill them.
He lets them walk away then when they attack him again he says I will kill you but then just lets them leave.
I'm not even kidding he literally lets them walk away and says do not chase after them just let them go? They don't even use treasures to get away they just walk away snort and say I will kill you next time.
That type of MC is cringe a.f.
Obviously we will not include that type of MC to our list.
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There's a fanfic where Meh. Mc can't cultivate what will he do there sightseeing? π€ I'm sure this will be like the original that Mc is always getting underestimated then Mc will prove them that they are all wrong!! ππ
and author actually says that Mc is not OP!! ****ing hell the original Mc is SO OP but you ****ing say you won't make him op???Seriously? Looks like this author is masochist that likes useless Mc that always gets push around but always getting saved by his cheats or plot armors
If I'm only there on your side I already strangle you to death and then let you eat horse p*ss, horse sh*ts ,dog sh*ts and every sh*ts in the world then I will just flush your body on your toilet
That type of thing. Haha, anyway we will continue our research so good luck.
It is better than I thought it be. I hope the author does not drop it though as I have really come to enjoy this novel and the most fav. Part is the slice of life genre in the novel. Hope you keep up the good work!
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I read it to chapter 10 before I got bored. Well donβt know about others but I read fanfic to get something different than the original which in this novel is so minor that I donβt see the difference, probably in future chapter he might change but thereβs no excitement for me to stay to find out.. if you are someone who didnβt read or watch BE give it a go.
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