Chapter comments on the chapter Derail 7! of the book Dragonball X: The Ultimate System [Different Path]

My expectations are dashed. I was hoping for serious novel, its not bad but very childish. Plot wise, MC asks for being born to train and spends 4 years sleeping. MC wastes 3 years instead of training, he could have purchased a training manual, Ki sense, etc. Bad story or stupid MC? unsure. He tries learning kamhemaha and all he has to do is hold his hands and say it? How simple minded and stupid is that? Even in a world like HP were things appear very simple you need some understanding to cast spells and here were it involves literal manipulation of power you made it so simple and brain dead to train? Disappointing. Like I said, its not bad but far to simple, easy and wish fulfillment for a good read unless you are a new reader on this site.

maybe he can get together with bulma vegeta was as bad a husband as chichi was a wife i think she was prejudiced think about it before she knew goku was an alien she was loving and understanding afterward goku was a worthless holigan and gohan had to study constantly so he wouldnt be as worthless as his father according to her he looked back on himself years later with horror and begged picolo to help get him back in shape

He should have been meditating instead of sleeping, at least on the journey from Vegeta. Heck, any practice would be logical even Ki sensing or manipulating.

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This will prbably take 5 ir 6 years of Kayn to get to Earth huh

Man you really wasted so much of his time. With his system he should have brought some kind control training and martial arts manual. Whats the use of the system if he isn't even using it properly

didnt he had 10,000 points?

Thanks for the great chapter! 😄

At what point in the plot is the mc gonna arrive on earth, before or after vegeta?

Thanks for the chapter on a good story

Where goku??

Why doesn't he take his scouter apart to get rid of the tracker?

Thanks for the chapter! I’m interested in how you’re gonna slot him into the main story line and when, can’t wait

Thanks

I hope you do

thanks

massacre LOl 😆

good job thus far. keep up good work. hope kayne comes across some stuff to help bump his power fast lol