Shameless self review to get he book noticed so I can advance quicker! I plan to write a long series spanning at least a couple hundred chapters, and that there will be a lot of outlining. Seriously, a lot of outlining. I have papers taped to my room's wall that takes up half the wall. That's just the first arc and character sheets.
A prologue that hooks you up fast and nicely. The rest of the story is quite binge worthy as well as being a good exemple for a good background building.
Also the meta bits lighten this overall somehow dark novel, nice touch from a power-stone hungry author ;)
This is a really good book, pretty good grammar, nice communication between readers and the author and THE PUNS!!! Luv them. The author updates regularly 👍 Grammar is 4⭐️ Which is pretty good and this story has an interesting plot. Right now, it’s really intriguing albeit a few bumps here and there with the change in writing style and the author trying out some things. GIVE THE AUTHOR SOME POWER STONES!!!!
It's a good novel, the story is interesting. It's not my favorite novel but I don't why I don't love it. It miss something. Maybe, I have the impression that the story doesn't advance. The hero alway makes the same mistakes and the story is a little cliche nothing really new.
There's some typos here and there and some strange phrasing occasionally, but this is a great story that will occasionally break the 4th wall to ease some tension.
it's got puns and dumb jokes and asides to help break the near constant struggle, and it's balanced perfectly.
I love the story and find the character development, interaction, and fighting and weapon research to be very thorough.
the feeling of struggle and of a definite goal throughout, even when goals are questioned or pillars shaken, the reactions always feel in character, or at the least believable reactions.
If anything else... I'll just say this... I've been reading on this site for a little over a year, and .of the dozens of books I've read, this is the first book to actually get me to buy coins.
This is hands down the best free book I have ever read in my goddamn life. Nothing even comes close. It's better than most published books and when the series ends I will be consumed by the sobbing of bittersweet tears because ut will mean a small very important part of my life will come to a glorious end. Thank you for gracing us with this and God send. Power Stones Forever!
Well if you are bored congratulation because you will never get bored again after reading this wonderful novel.
Plus if you like novels like: Supreme Magus, Birth Of The Demonic Sword, Tales Of Herding Gods, Kingdom's Bloodline, Lord Of The Mysteries, Sword Of Dawnbreaker and The Great Demon System then you will get the same feeling of wanting to read more, believe me and the Author..... 100%.
So far this book is the best I have read on Webnovel. Our mc, Doevm makes a couple friends and Ticks just about everyone else off while on his mission to learn to do cool flips an stuff, and punch his best buddy in the face without magic. It is amazing.
The humor, drama, fight scenes and darker moments are well done and refreshing, the magic and power system is explained organically throughout the novel and not spoonfed to the audience. I don't think there's a single character that isn't well developed either.
This book is a gem.
Great story! I love how the author takes the usual "Reincarnated" trope and flips it.
instead of someone from the modern world finding themselves in a new world its a person Reincarnating back into there own world decades later. The only real criticism I can give are 2 things 1. Some minor grammar issues in the earlier chapters. 2. (this one is way less significant) The author is coming up with more ideas of the world as the story evolves, which I personally actually like but I can see some people not.
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There's lots of free chapters, 118 IIRC, so this is an ideal read for non-paying users for its quality. The grammar and world building can be slightly shoddy at times. Updates are pretty stable. Overall 7.5/10.
From the first page I was compleatly in love with this book.The story, the charachters, evrything is great. I really like Doevm. I will deffinty follow the story to the end. Thank you author for a great story.
Not a typical novel I usually see in the internet. There's something on the way the author writes it that I rarely find on some good stories I've read previously and I'm pretty much loving it.
No unreasonable events in my opinion, the author provides an explanation and others are self explanatory. The story....is dark as heck. No rainbows, knights in shining armors and whatnot. Goddess I got nearly creep out during the first few chapters. On the other side you'll find some humor from time to time, unusual or not had earned some series of laughter from me.
Btw special mention on the author's uuuuuhh.."creative" way of asking for power stones lol. Yar a clever writer I give ya that🤣
Hey there author and future readers! Even though I won’t likely be able to unlock any future chapters, I did enjoy reading those provided to me freely. I hope you readers have as much satisfaction as I did and the author continues this book for a long time. Thank you and farewell! I enjoyed my journey here...