This is a great story! I love the way things are so realistic instead of having an omnipotent 300IQ mc that always took the right step and never suffers properly(not that I really hate it but it's getting boring). I'd love to see how this will end, hopefully it ends in a good way instead of our mc dying in
some ditch. I'm looking forward to new chapters, keep up the good work author!
beautiful heartwarming just needed a happy ending second coming of Titanic π₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ίπ₯Ί
its one of the greatest fan_fic of harry potter series. i like the fact that Mc is not Overpowerd before he even start the school. it has a natural fkow and i know author has all figure it out how the story will end.
Really good story which stalls around the middle part due to a little slice of life. Author does a good job at crushing your dreams about a character :D
I recommend fiction as the characters are well described and the protagonist is not omnipotent. Other than that, this fiction is really well written.
It has major flaws.
1) The best chapters were the non-canon ones. In short, the protagonist's school years.
The first two canon years are very good and from the third year it starts to get worse.
2) Voldemort has a son..............................................................................
3) I'm glad the protagonist doesn't solve every situation, but lately he's not doing anything. Now the protagonists are the children!
4) Dumbledore is not Dumbledore. His behavior is too different from the real character, at least in the last few chapters.
A really great hp story!
Love the angle you chose, very different kind.
NIce progression and the characters feel true to how i would Imagine. cant wait for more
Definetely a recommended read!
Writing Quality- Very good, barely any mistakes.
Stability of Updates- Perfect.
Story Development- Barely any plot holes, and story plot is very good.
Character Design- Amazing, you can see him progress a lot.
World Background- It's Harry Potter. Barely any plot holes. And the story concept is intriguing. Also author is not afraid to make to make it AU.
This one of the best Wizarding World Fan-fics I have ever read. It is also the 2nd best Marauders Era fan fic I have read. The grammar may not be perfect but the plot line is. It is also one of the only books which deals with emotional loss at an early age and talks about the First Wizarding War.
Great battle scene.
Now i am hoping that sirius gets freed now.
Great battle scene.
Now i am hoping that sirius gets freed now.Great battle scene.
Now i am hoping that sirius gets freed now.
best book ever
get him to find Hocruces
and destroy bol
then in the end when he is very old use time turner and save olivia from death eaters and i know just go with the flow
DoesnΒ΄t harry just needs to spend 2 weeks in privet drive to recharge the wards?
He should spend 2 weeks there and then live with him for remaining six weeks.
Over all this is one of the better Harry Potter fanfiction i have read. the only problems i have of it right now is of how the story will develop from now on. An example is, will it strictly or loosely follow canon, whats gonna happen with the ministry of magic towards Aurora because of her gridelwald inheritance.
i cant wait to see how the author develops this story further
Really good chapter.
Loving the story so far.
Excited to read more of the chapters.Really good chapter.
Loving the story so far.
Excited to read more of the chapters.
At least I am hoping that sirius is going to be freed after 3rd year.At least I am hoping that sirius is going to be freed after 3rd year.At least I am hoping that sirius is going to be freed after 3rd year.
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