Writing Quality- Very good, barely any mistakes.
Stability of Updates- Perfect.
Story Development- Barely any plot holes, and story plot is very good.
Character Design- Amazing, you can see him progress a lot.
World Background- It's Harry Potter. Barely any plot holes. And the story concept is intriguing. Also author is not afraid to make to make it AU.
This one of the best Wizarding World Fan-fics I have ever read. It is also the 2nd best Marauders Era fan fic I have read. The grammar may not be perfect but the plot line is. It is also one of the only books which deals with emotional loss at an early age and talks about the First Wizarding War.
Over all this is one of the better Harry Potter fanfiction i have read. the only problems i have of it right now is of how the story will develop from now on. An example is, will it strictly or loosely follow canon, whats gonna happen with the ministry of magic towards Aurora because of her gridelwald inheritance.
i cant wait to see how the author develops this story further
At least I am hoping that sirius is going to be freed after 3rd year.At least I am hoping that sirius is going to be freed after 3rd year.At least I am hoping that sirius is going to be freed after 3rd year.
Overall a good book, despite some errors in timeline (which most people don't put a great importance on) its pretty good. It's fast paced and some changes that everyone wanted to happen except somethings didn't change.
one of the best fanfic on harry potter if not the best i have ever read
i love the mc he is ruthless, determinate, human ,strong but not op and the author have let the magic do like in rowling book and have not modified it like other fanfic whose mc didn't need to attend school because they have better method (like overpowered intend and will) than the teacher.
thank for work awesome story
incrível, simplesmente incrível, você sabe o que é começar a ler o capitulo com frio na barriga e expectativa no auge por não fazer ideia do que vai acontecer? não é aquelas historias que por mais que a pessoa tente modificar e deixar mais original você meio que já sabe o que vai acontecer, mas essa, me sinto como quando assisti game of thrones pela primeira vez sem ideia nenhuma do que vai acontecer ou o próximo que vai morrer, esse escritor devia ganhar um premio!!!!
eu tenho vontade de um dia escrever uma historia fan fic de harry potter, se um dia eu conseguir fazer metade do esse autor minha vida terá valido a pena.
Story was great until the The mc girl got the Cruciatus curse and then the story went downhill. he went to grindlewald to for help and then instead of the mc getting hos legacy she will. he beat belletrix early in the novel and was shown to be wayyyyy ahead of everyone but later in the novel he gets super nerfed lol honestly the story was a 5/5 before the girl got messed up. Its a remove from the lirbrary for me now