Reviews of Prince of Heaven and Hell by Crazy_Beast - Webnovel

So, Beast here. I am posting a newer review of this story. The grammar may be wonky, and I am trying to fix it, but I need time. Daily updates, but can't say it for sure. I might miss one or two. Story is too fast-paced, I know it. I am fixing it. A ton of info dumps. I am working on it, to make it more appealing. Ton of World Background packed into a very few chapters. I am rewriting the damned thing again. So, please bear with it.

I love the concept, but the grammar I find is just unreadable. I would recommend getting a translator. Wether that means a friends, a payed worker, or even a app like grammarly. It would make the story so much better. Also I love the yandere, there the only reason I keep reading

it has a high potential if not for the fact that the info or background of anything is isn't too little i can just get the gist of it and the other parts aren't explained well. it's fine if you don't explain too deeply but, like explain when the game started and when he entered the game.

Ugh... I haven't started reading it...but multiple Yandere waifus?! I'm sold ❤️ ...................... ..................... ................... .....

the author tries to be overly mysterious with his broken grammer which results in rubbish where one cannot make out what the **** is happening. 60 chapters in and we still cannot make out what the **** is this about. dont try to make sense of it ur just wasting ur time

I enjoyed what I have read so far. The writing is clean and grammatically sound. I would like to see a bit more description in the beginning chapter. I want to feel like I'm standing right there with the MC as he is entering the video game. Overall, good writing and a neat premise. Keep up the good work.

it doesn't make sense, it's a complete mess with no plot and no fixed structure. A waste of time Obs:Chapter:61 ..........................................................

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It's the author supporting his own book. I will be honest to review it. Why you should read this? Our MC is a creator of Oasis, a VRMMORPG. He is reincarnated kinda into Oasis. The story is good and interesting while Glitch is OP but surely fails many times. His failures make him OP. The updates are frequent, 1 chapter per day. Grammar may be a bit rusty, I still lack it. The world-building is great too as Oasis has a sheer amount of places with an intertwined history.

great character development characters feel alive descriptions are great writing quality is beyond good updates regular keeps you on the edge love it keep it up

I love the story. Few errors but it’s all good! I hope you put a book cover so the book will caught many people’s eyes. Highly recommended,!..

It's a pretty interesting story! I haven't read a lot of LITRPGs, but this one has definitely peaked my interest! One thing that was confusing was discerning thought from speech, but only at first. You put the MC mumbling in single quotations, so I was under the impression that speech was in single quotations and was very confused when characters actually did begin to speak. But that is my only complaint! Other than that, well done.

An interesting read! This story made me feel like I was in an actual video game. The naming of the characters are cool and I’m interested in learning more about each of them! Though it’s still early, I recommend this story for isekai’d adventure gameplay lovers!

I love the story already. The pacing is already better than my stories and I love to see that you rewrote it just to have this awesome pacing. I can't wait for more updates!

The writing is awesome, and I love the detail with which everything is described. I love the protagonist, and the plot sounds really interesting! Would definitely recommend this!

This is overall really interesting. Reminds me a lot of SAO or Solo Leveling in a lot of ways. Glitch sounds like he’ll probably be a really cool character when he continues and I can’t wait for it!

as one of higheset level player in my guild at black desert online. i can seriously freaking related with the man, and i love how detailed this author could made that made me reminds myself to when im firstly create an account in black desert online. haha

The idea of this story is really unique! The title really got me flustered it! Got to add this on my recommendations list, 💕💞 HIGHLY RECOMMENDED for everyone

Even though this is not my cup of tea novel, I can say that its well written and one of the better ones here on webnovel, the grammar is good for a original novel and I can say that it would do well after its discovered. Any other comments on the novel? Well I read only two chapters before I stopped because I don't really like the genre buttt It looks good for the ones who enjoy this type of novel, I would recommend you to read it.

We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) (Ooh) Never gonna give, never gonna give (Give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry Never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up Never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry

The idea is unique and the plot was refreshing. The synopsis was nicely plotted and it has a cute vibe specially, Eve. I have read the few chapters and I like to read more. I added it to my library. Happy reading ❤

Intro well explained. Those AI really fits in the story well tho I really like it. Keep it up, Author! More chapters please~ Keep it up, Author! More chapters please~ Keep it up, Author! More chapters please~ Keep it up, Author! More chapters please~ Keep it up, Author! More chapters please~ Keep it up, Author! More chapters please~ Keep it up, Author! More chapters please~

It is a really good and interesting novel. The characters are quite mysterious and cute at the same time. Events are describe really well and explained deeply. Overall I would recommend this to all:)