Reviews of Systems Collides

10 Reviews

4.48

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reboot23
This novel is on the rough side, its good but still on the rough side. Why? because this novel barely tells you anything about the world, the background description has not been touch the story development is rushed the character description isn't really is rough l mean...I don't even know the Mc's eye color it only says "black hair and average face".. l mean wtf? The writing quality well there isn't really anything wrong with But the worst thing is that this damn novel hasn't been updated form AUGUST. I don't even know if this novel will even continue because the author said nothing.. whelp no use crying over spilt milk. overall novel good but don't get your hopes up. Later
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Ghost_Phantom_8503
История хорошая спасибо!!!было бы более здорово если обновление было бы часто. Я только сегодня начал читать если обновления часто или недавно загрузили свою работу то тогда извините и все!!!!.
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TheDeadScientist
Really like whats going on and want more! PLEASE! ok ... ok... 😢 ok well if you insist on waiting.... 👉🏻😈🍆🥶🥵👋🏻👉🏻👌🏻 sorry its got to happen to the new goddess if no new chapters 😘
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WaebioLoile
Well everything's fine for me but it would be better if you can makes him/her less of an airhead. Great job, please keep up the work! Thank you for your hard work.
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DaoistOverdead
I have always love gender bender novels and fics. A very interesting take when it comes to system and VR. I would love to read more. >................
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omnigamergt
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Leonard_Leonard
It's an extraordinary, exciting and unique story of it's own with a mix of reality and fantasy but I do hope that the author still continues with this piece of art!
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Harold_Hoesmad
high expectations, usually this type of novel ends up being left in half so please continue, I want to simp to the mc scooby dooby do where are you
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5mth
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Kenneth_Campbell
Interesting take on the whole gender bender genre. I wonder if he/she would be surprised when she/he gets out of the game. I would like to read more so please don't give up, the book really has my attention. I just wish you could have posted this book/ come up with the idea of this book sooner so I could enjoy it years earlier. If you continue with writing this book it will be a good hit with the vr/gender bender/ god/goddess/higher power genre and, if what I am reading is right then maybe a calamity or apocalypse or a alien/monster/demon war/world takeover/anailation. So please keep up the good work author!!!
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