Chapter comments on the chapter Prologue of the book a world without

Appreciate the research that went into this. Really well done there. Everything else is good too, just the research is the strongest point.

This chapter was something else. So I suppose the angel killed the president? Ah well, let me continue reading. 😉

Oh no, the president! I think I felt it too! Will continue to read :)

This is ... incredible, spectacular, amazing. I’m running out of words here, but the first chapter grabs your attention, and it’s immaculate to see and picture. 🤩🤩🤩🤩 10/10 right off the bat

im acc getting hooked here. WHY WAS THE PRESIDENT ASSSSSINATED???

Best first chapter ever written. On point. Makes me wish it could happen in real life. Good job.

Good chapter

A great introduction to the novel and the vocab is excellent as well

Off to a great start! 😌🍿

Whoa. That escalated quickly. I knew something was wrong about the microphone and something big would eventually arise and it did. The president was dead. I wanna commend your writing skills, your grammar is on point, your sentence construction is absolutely up to par. You’re good. Really good.

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Good chapter! The prologue can truly hook a reader's curiosity! 🖒

Wait what is happening!! Oh this really turned around at the last moment. I love it!

FIRST! ^_^

unknown creature appears,kills the most powerful man on earth, now we the angel gonna get hit with a proper murican style orbital strike, wasn't expecting such an easy death

dam!! really liked the description of presidents death. very well written

Honestly, I did not see that coming😅 But its something I enjoyed, it had the surprise factor which I love😄

Oh noo - finally he died, JOKE ! I- I love this so much ? I love how this related to what I'm taking now in college. I love the unknown words you use on your story that I have to search for it - it makes me learn something new. Well done, author ! I can't wait to continue reading the next chapter <3

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