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RockyMasters
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Kutu
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Kutu

I bet Author got mind-raped and loves getting gang-banged by his fat slavesw. #this.author.is.a.sicko @everyone #this.author.is.a.sicko @everyone #this.author.is.a.sicko @everyone #this.author.is.a.sicko @everyone
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ailar
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ailar

Author, please get raped!!! aghsdfolaikuegfholiauefhzajklzhsgvawegzfiazuweef7uazhifwelaiweufuizhlawerfuihgzjagujikbhlerwsfdvaweruijedurfghbse
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UncleMoneyMan
I love it its amazing 9/10 ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿคฃ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡๐Ÿ˜‡
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Darkviga
this makes me sick to my stomach just looking at the title i can imagine what this is .................................................................
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Cosmicanalog
๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€
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SaeedKH
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SaeedKH

Dude, you better find an editor. Lol๐Ÿ˜‚. Also i liked the starting point of the story and the pesonality of the MC, But you urgently need someone that has at least studied english course for 6 months. I realy liked your writing but u have alot of spelling mistakes, and u need to better organize ur writing. ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜”โœ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘
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Cosmicanalog
๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿคฉ๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜€๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ™‚๐Ÿ˜‚
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Cosmicanalog
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Sagewolf1975
โœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒโœŒ
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Cliff_01
i may not be a good writer or not really fond of literature but this kind of story is really a waste of time...this thing sucks from the tiltle until the content
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innmortal
estaba interesante pero no entendi porque que do incocluso lllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll
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Chance_Findler
Disgusting djsjrjfjcjdjeskskedjfjfjfjeiwoedidkdkdskekdkfdkdkekfkfkdkerkfkfiejrkekejfjfejdkfkfjfktjfjrjrjcjfj
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The_Master_Zen
Author has 3 books.. each one of them contains rape. Dude, you are sick in the head and need help. You say you don't support rape or whatever.. but you wrote 52 chapters of this shit, of a rapist doing what his title involves. There's no justification for this, you clearly have an interest in rape and it's disgusting. Surely you're on an FBI watchlist or something. You can't just write 3 different books on rape and say 'Oh it's fine, I don't support rape.' Sigh, maybe I should just quit this site and go to wuxia world or royal road or something. They would absolutely not put up with something this blatant.
3yr
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Zen_Ryuga
Didn't even read it, but I hate it, Rape is bad, you suck, where the help is the fbi? You've got serous mental problems and needs to see a therapist or something. I hate almost everything about this, the only thing that so liked were the world's you went to, everything else is trash, seriously I know this might sound repetitive but go see a therapist, you have issues.
3yr
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PUERKO_Senpai
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Uncle_Sheogorath
The story is beyond trash. Firstly it's written extremely poorly, moreover, I doubt someone who calls their story 'immortal rapist' will have any standards. Shame/shame shame shame shame shame shame!
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Daoist034655
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Zeroland_Guide
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘Ž๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
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Zeroland_Guide
Complicated too complicated but what can I say doing Tim pass is good enough................................................................
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rufusfuccu
! แ–ฑโœบ โ„ตโœบั‚ ั‚โ„!โ„ตะบ ! ส†!ะบแธ™ ั‚โ„!แนง โ™ญโœบโœบะบ แนฝแธ™ิปโ‘‚ ีŠแนณแธ‰โ„ โ‘‚โ„แพฐโ„ตะบโ‘‚โœบแนณ แพฐโ„ตแ–ฑ โกโœบโœบแ–ฑโ™ญโ‘‚แธ™. โกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกโกแนงีŠีŠโ„จแนฝโœ˜โœ˜โœ˜โ™ญ๊’ปแ–ฑโ™ญแ–ฑ๊’ปแธŸโ„จโœ˜โœ˜โœ˜โœ˜แพฐโ„วญ!แธ™โกแธŸ!แ–ฑโ‘‚แพฐโ™ญแธŸะบแนฝโœบแนงแนฝแธŸะบโก๊’ปแธ‰โ™ญแ–ฑะบแธŸโ„แธ‰๊’ปแ–ฑโœบแธŸแธ‰๊’ปแ–ฑโ„แธŸ๊’ปแธ‰ะบแธŸโ™ญแธŸะบแธ‰๊’ปแ–ฑแธŸ๊’ปแธŸโ™ญแธŸ๊’ปแ–ฑโ™ญแธŸะบแธŸโ™ญแธŸะบแธŸโ™ญแธŸะบิปโ™ญแธŸะบแธŸโ™ญแธŸแธŸโœบ๊’ปแธŸะบโ„˜ะบแนงะบโ„˜แธŸโ™ญแธŸโกโ™ญแธŸะบแธŸแธŸแธŸโ„ตแธŸแธŸแธŸแธŸ๊’ป แ–ฑ๊’ปิปิปแธŸ! แธŸแนณิป ิปแนณิป แธŸแนณิป แ–ฑ๊’ปแธ™ ั‚!แธ™ แธŸ๊’ปิป
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Alpha_Sage_Gemini
I really like this story.if the grammar and details where more it would been great.im am only giving 5 stars because I like the story and idea wish it hand more details๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ข๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช๐Ÿคช๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ˜ˆ๐Ÿ‘น๐Ÿ‘น๐Ÿ‘น๐Ÿ‘บ๐Ÿ‘บ๐Ÿ‘บ๐Ÿ’ฉ๐Ÿ’ฉ๐Ÿ’ฉโ˜ ๏ธโ˜ ๏ธโ˜ ๏ธ๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ’€๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ‘ป๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ๐Ÿ—ฃ๏ธ
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Silver_Epsilon
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Caio_Bernardo
I didnโ€™t even read this but just fot the title I know this shit is Sick... just like people who like rape ...............................................................................................................
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Demonic_Ogre
as an avid reader of this book ( I read one chapter ) and a man of a variety of cultures, I have seen many of the same genre as this and I simply can't find anything that great. Ignoring the blatantly obvious r*pe in the book. The book itself really doesn't have any details or any real substance to keep the already sinking ship afloat. Its as if you made a computer write a a "plot' filled book but limited its ability to a 10 year old. I regret to say that this book doesn't have a bright future ahead. to put it simply, it sucks
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Ali_Makles
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User280
Leave your evaluation, some criticism or preference, about the novel: I write and publish, so I don't know what can come out in the next chapter ksksk
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Oppai_Dragon_3633
Immortal Rapist.....Yun Che?
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Falbium
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Falbium

Yo just want to tell you that if you use google translate maybe you should do editing so your novel can be readable and not confuse the reader (especially for me). And when I see this I got the hype about this idea, but when I read it I think that there is no rape vibe in this story and I think a story like this has a big potential in NTR genre, so maybe you can be considered about my thought about your story.
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