I bet Author got mind-raped and loves getting gang-banged by his fat slavesw.
#this.author.is.a.sicko @everyone
#this.author.is.a.sicko @everyone
#this.author.is.a.sicko @everyone
#this.author.is.a.sicko @everyone
I love it its amazing
9/10
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this makes me sick to my stomach just looking at the title i can imagine what this is .................................................................
Dude, you better find an editor. Lol๐. Also i liked the starting point of the story and the pesonality of the MC, But you urgently need someone that has at least studied english course for 6 months.
I realy liked your writing but u have alot of spelling mistakes, and u need to better organize ur writing.
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i may not be a good writer or not really fond of literature but this kind of story is really a waste of time...this thing sucks from the tiltle until the content
estaba interesante pero no entendi porque que do incocluso
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Author has 3 books.. each one of them contains rape. Dude, you are sick in the head and need help. You say you don't support rape or whatever.. but you wrote 52 chapters of this shit, of a rapist doing what his title involves. There's no justification for this, you clearly have an interest in rape and it's disgusting. Surely you're on an FBI watchlist or something. You can't just write 3 different books on rape and say 'Oh it's fine, I don't support rape.'
Sigh, maybe I should just quit this site and go to wuxia world or royal road or something. They would absolutely not put up with something this blatant.
Didn't even read it, but I hate it, Rape is bad, you suck, where the help is the fbi? You've got serous mental problems and needs to see a therapist or something.
I hate almost everything about this, the only thing that so liked were the world's you went to, everything else is trash, seriously I know this might sound repetitive but go see a therapist, you have issues.
The story is beyond trash. Firstly it's written extremely poorly, moreover, I doubt someone who calls their story 'immortal rapist' will have any standards. Shame/shame shame shame shame shame shame!
I really like this story.if the grammar and details where more it would been great.im am only giving 5 stars because I like the story and idea wish it hand more details๐ญ๐ญ๐ญ๐ข๐ข๐ข๐ก๐ก๐ก๐ ๐ ๐ ๐คช๐คช๐คช๐๐๐๐น๐น๐น๐บ๐บ๐บ๐ฉ๐ฉ๐ฉโ ๏ธโ ๏ธโ ๏ธ๐๐๐๐ป๐ป๐ป๐ฃ๏ธ๐ฃ๏ธ๐ฃ๏ธ
I didnโt even read this but just fot the title I know this shit is Sick... just like people who like rape
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as an avid reader of this book ( I read one chapter ) and a man of a variety of cultures, I have seen many of the same genre as this and I simply can't find anything that great. Ignoring the blatantly obvious r*pe in the book.
The book itself really doesn't have any details or any real substance to keep the already sinking ship afloat.
Its as if you made a computer write a a "plot' filled book but limited its ability to a 10 year old. I regret to say that this book doesn't have a bright future ahead.
to put it simply, it sucks
Yo just want to tell you that if you use google translate maybe you should do editing so your novel can be readable and not confuse the reader (especially for me). And when I see this I got the hype about this idea, but when I read it I think that there is no rape vibe in this story and I think a story like this has a big potential in NTR genre, so maybe you can be considered about my thought about your story.
RockyMasters