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4.33

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KairoValentine
Keep at it. Need more poke fanfics just don’t drop it in middle of the good parts and u got my support 💋💜
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Regulus_Dragneel
This author has taken an really interesting approach to the Pokémon world I really feel like the chapter's are gonna be amazing.✌️✌️✌️🔥 Good work dude.
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mohi_ahm
This is one of the best Pokemon stories with regular updates... So keep updating keep updating keep updating keep updating keep updating keep updating
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Ricardo_Cortez_9828
Una excelente historia en mi humilde opinión, todo bien redactado y nada forzado al menos yo no ví nada por el estilo, envió mis más sinceros agradecimientos al autor
2mth
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000911
It's pretty good to read from time to time...Only problem is that it have many grammatical and writing mistakes...Like sometimes, there are no use of comma, and sometimes the placement and use of words are not right... But it is good specially since there are many types of things that differentiate it from other pokemon ff and also has its own characteristics of things...The storyline for example, is really great and same with the pace of the story...My only problem is that the chapters are too short...I mean even if its in the 500+ chapters, i wouldn't be satisfied if each chapter are too short itself...Like, I would be satisfied and also always wait for the updates even if its 3 ch a week as long as its long...Like, 1000/1500/2000 word count
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Asdrendor
Who was the waifu of the series? Or is harem?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????
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_ZypHer_
For a fanfic with such consistent updates and quality chapters, it's sad to see that this is quite low on the rankings which definitely deserves more..Bruhh let the author cook🔥 pretty sure he's planning something for them..
4mth
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Kiran_Kanwar_7207
Bro the novel is great and I just can't get enough of it but I am not trying to criticise you I am just telling you to upload more chapters please. I am just in love with the novel. Please improve the speed at whuch you upload chapters like 12 chaps a week or atleast 10 a week please bro It's a heartfelt request. Love From Nepal
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Kiran_Kanwar_7207
Hey Author I request you to please write a few more chapters every week because the novel is too good and I wanted to Ask what novels are your favourite pokemon novels please mentions. keep up the good work and good luck in your future endeavours
4mth
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Srivastavashubham
One of the best Pokemon based novel that I have read, everything about this novel is best I only have one issue please update more chapters
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Shadow_Zero100
It's a regular adaptation, have more chinese fic than Pokemon traditional story, is good, but is heavy read 30 caps about Venu Family and Axel travel in this, MC is a Good Guy, and nothing more, i feel the history has potential but. Sometimes the point of being a "Realistic" story is lost by creating concepts, stories, etc., it is not at the level of a 12 year old on Wattpad, but I feel that there are things that can be developed or written better, I will still read this thing, but because I want to know who Brine is, anyway, I give it a 6/10, it's better than Master of Tactics in my opinion, but please, don't put so many things or references from chinese culture novels.
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Uzumaki_Kushina_21
I think this is a mtl and he edited considering how it follows Chinese cliche like he joins families [clans] and catches bug Pokemons and how he use those 100 years 10000 years items and other things but author said its original and it's also similar to mtl how it drags story and chapters just for indigo league i read upto 350 yet he won 2 badges and buy 3 badges and also he follows a crack that leads to another dimension similar to Chinese cultivation novel where mc get powerup in those cracks [similar to solo leveling gates]
4mth
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Lost_Heaven
One of the best Pokemón fanfiction so far... Love this fic, it's amazing🤩🤩
5mth
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Zromak
my experience as a reader:numbers: Just ignore them. They have never made sense, and there is no consistency he will say billion trillion million, honestly kind of funny.pokemon: cool, interesting choices. WAY TO MUCH TIME SPENT on pokemon and training them, there should be a focus more on the story. IMO the best part of this story as of was your charizard/darmanitian island: cool lore, fast progression, great gains.pokemon moves: your move lists are longer then your fights, and I don't think I've read many of your pokemons moves as it just doesn't matter. not sure if it's just for an inflated word count but I've never read more then one of the move sets that are a block long, they are also not in any order what so ever.worth a read but there is a lot of stuff that has you scratching your head, 3 out of 5
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jjsjsjshxhf
it was good at the start Kinda boring with The system system basically controlling his fate right now with punishment and the creator lol. then Everyone knowing he's a transmuter kinda boring. then story foreshadowing other People with system is trash. well others knowing his reincarnated then getting punished by a creator is trash plot then oak knowing trash again
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Gacha_Zerik
I love it everything is extremely well done. I hope at some point in the future he gets an Agron
5mth
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000911
This story is great. It is fun to read and also exciting to see the mc journey through many adventures. I wish to see this be completed, with him going to all regions and to all kinds of journey. It is really fun to watch, I recommend it, try it. Even if you don't want to atleast read upto 150-200 chaps
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Ramses_The_Third
I gave this a shot, despite the summary ticking off so many red-flags. "Realistic" fics all that tend to throw themselves into the angst and never really leave for no freaking reason. While this isn't quite that bad, it does (as other reviewers have said) have an excessive level of cultivation elements (and while I enjoy the occassional cultivation fic, I'm not reading Pokemon fics for that). Not to say that there aren't those who will enjoy some of the things that are offered, but it just didn't reach the bar of quality for me to enjoy.
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Lordmoonlight
tbh its good most if not all if the system use are force so i got to take a point from that but yea otherwise from that an the fact the side chapters werent done properly it an ok fic im a 200 at this review
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SudoSu
The best pokemon fanfic I have ever read. (Have read till chapter 400 approx) World building, creativity, storyline is all very very good. There are a few moments when I felt that mc is acting dumb but that was for plot so no prob. But other than that mc is logical but not cold and cruel. His pokemon dont become op from start and he trains them properly. Although the system gives him an edge over others, it does not mean he is very strong very fast. Overall best pokemon fanfic for me especially due to world building. Also there seems to be no romance till now so that is a plus point for me but dont know bout others. Update consistency is also decently good. Writing quality is also good.
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Jausl47
The name of this FF is quite ironic as it butchers through the world design of Pokemon implementing the author's own world rules (Chinese pill system, clans[fck venu family arc], Pokemon core, etc.) this is nothing but unreal from the Pokemon world's point of view. The author makes a grave mistake by removing the freedom of the Poke world, there are way too many conditions for a lot of things that don't exist in the original Pokemon world like the restrictions to get an egg. It's quite disappointing, to be honest.
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RodrigoEB41
Me re encanto la historia es muy interesante y muy divertida________________ [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
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BrandonGT
Buenísimo 💯/10 , tiene una buena trama , buen desarrollo de la historia como tambien del personaje, es una de las pocas historias que mantiene tan entretenido
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Deeptesh_Dey
I would honestly say this is one of the best pokemon fan fics out there due to its consistent update and genuinely decent plot. I don't understand the obsession of some people to start of with extremely strong pokemon because I love the development and relative skill he shows. And for child-like character, not every character needs to be dark to be adulty. I like that Mc loses and just doesn't keep winning.
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TheSilverPrince
Hey, Author here. I have an important announcement so I thought to write in the reviews too. I have a Special Offer on my pat-reon channel. The Offer would only be up to 6th August 2023, so only 7 days are left. The Offer is of Side story of Bruno Welts. Most of you have said to not include the story of Bruno Welts (The rival), in the real novel chapters but I feel that some of you are still interested to know about him. So, I have written a side story of Bruno. What happened to him when Axel had gone so far? Would Bruno be able to catch up to Axel? A lot of things are answered. Do remember that this would only be a one time offer, so, you would never get access to it after 6th August. There would be around 30 chapters. All of them would be sent through email to pat-rons who are in 'League trainer' tier and 'Elite 4 tier'. So, what are you waiting for? Subscribe to my pat-reon channel to get exclusive updates with Bruno's story and around 35+ advanced chapters.
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jjsjsjshxhf
yo what happened to chapter 133 it's just a copy of Chapter 132 you cut it Off
9mth
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Zeremy_York
I want to give thanks to the author for this wonderful fanfic and I urge the author to update quickly as I am really addicted. I don't have any problem what I mean is zero mistakes or something that can make the readers bored for no reason. Every Pokemon fight is really well written and the way the plots go is really making the story interesting. The way trainers' strength distribution is perfect and I like the way of MC is trying to make his Pokemons reach the next level of strength. ALL IN ALL, THIS IS REALLY ADDICTING.
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GoatMan
There are several major issues with this novel. First, how can it be called a 'realistic take on Pokemon when he has a system? (don't believe the description is a major focus in the novel). Second, the MC has crazy luck his first Pokemon has high talent despite being a 'random' selection it even has strong egg moves. Third, the MC's Pokemon find it easy to learn moves despite him doing nothing special with their training. Fourth, the MC was supposably a researcher for a lab when he was a kid, surely he would've been given a sponsorship by them if he was such a genius. Fifth, the MC acts like a child despite having memories of reincarnation. Sixth, at times there is wuxia and xianxia style writing which feels out of place, e.g. he was called a country bumpkin and crowds commentate fights with pointless and unrealistic dialogue. Look I know it's just fanfic and this is Webnovel so as a reader you're not exactly looking for gold but even the name of it is misleading so would not recommend it.
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The_old_ngl_one
HE IS TOOO NAIVE HE IS ALWAYS Roped (ch 92)
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matfig
I'm in love with this story. I'm literally addicted to it. Cant't wait for next chapters, keep up the great job.
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