Reviews of Seven Deadly Sins System: The Technology Emperor by HotRedFlaming - Webnovel

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didn't read it but why mc is a chad? also expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp [img=exp]

No kingdom building so far And I got bored. But okay story. Was hoping for the tag to be real early on, but its not and doesn't look like it, post 100 ch

Great book. An interesting story, a good grammar and word choice. Being unique in its own way, the story depicts exciting scenes where as a reader, you will feel general excitement. There is no flaw I could see for now as both the character and the world development is good. The stability of the updates is also good and although you could see some days the author doesn't update, it's not much and is a rare occurrence. Recommend for people.

Shameless review by the author, sorry if the first part of my mc is that he is not someone great. But I will build him up as the chapters go on. Also the abilities of the MC will rely on future technology like laser guns, robots, mechs, ships and stuff. So be patient if he starts weak and hopeless on the first beginning chapters. I hope you give my story a try and my story is pseudo harem. Which means he will have only have one romantic interest but he wont win all the girls feelings they will just be a companion or ally.

I really like it so far! The grammar is good, and I really enjoy this author's prose and writing style. I can relate to the main character and I'm looking forward to seeing his character development. All in all, good job :)

Nice work, so far! Sorry it took me so long to get to reading. I'm on CH. 6 so far, and I like how you're slowly building the story, the characters, and the world. Keep dropping those teases and I think your story is going to be amazing! Don't let the nay-sayers get you down, as you've got so much potential, and I look forward to your success! I think my only real critique is focus a bit more attention on grammar, and that would get you to a full 5 star review from me, as well!

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So what I got from the synopsis is that the mc was a simp and got betrayed by his queen then got edgy and got a machine builder thing.

This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say... Shameless Promotion: Check out my novel: Crowning Cruel Crow. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/crowning-cruel-crow_18100192205265505

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The best story need more chapter More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More More

Interesting. This is gonna be a big project with the plot's promise. Are you writing as you go or do you have an outline already? Looking forward for your win

Some grammar errors but readable so far. Good amount of chapters so author must have been prepared for this contest. Best of luck to you and the other competitors.