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Jozan
OMG! 😭😭😭 THIS AMAZING! The crime fighting romantic duo, dead parents avenger metal dude, corrupt politicians and police force, nice power scaling and PERFECT transitions of scene as well as the EUPHORIC description of (fight and flirt) scenes. My two fav scenes were the fight club battle (SO GOOD! 😭🙌) and the when llara teased lover boy into making him go back on his promise about no *** (I started blushing) Llara is best girl without a doubt!!🙄💅🥵💕 Author-sama congrats on 100k viewers keep up the AMAZINGLY GREAT work (I'm on chap 13 btw🤪 I'm loving so much) To anyone who is reading this review.... PLEASE!! Give this a read or at least at it to collections. 🙏🙏🙏 If it helps. you can use this app's audio feature to listen to the story while you do something else and still enjoy how great this novel is 😃👍🥰🥰🤩
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Zuxian
Are you willing to have a great experience of the super powers and extreme fantasy? Why don't you pick an interest in this book. I bet, you would love it .
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pen_inker
This book is. Hmm...Breathtaking. It is the action for me. the author is well versed at active storytelling. He successfully glue the reader to the stories. I'm more than impressed with the character development. keep up the good work. also I love the rate of update.
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Samcrowned00
@R_F_T_S Going through your book, I remembered I have once reviewed it before. But it wouldn't hurt to review again.
You have used a technique which is beautiful especially when you are describing the fighting scenes. What can I say, I admire your bold step in writting a book even out of your own culture. This Signaled to me that you have really done a lot of research to come up with this great work.
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MITCHIEWilliams
This is a very interesting book. The plot is interesting. The characters are also well developed. The author did a good work with the discription, it draws readers in. I really enjoyed reading this book
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Gnaipafe
There's a lot of intrigue specially in politics in this story, and totally action overload that definitely was described well. The action mixed with love story makes it really great.
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RiniStella
Very intriguing. The arc of the story is very well written and the stability of the characters is also steady. Looking forward to reading more!
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The_Procrastinator
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Diamond_Air
Naisu! Naisu! Naisu! I'd say these three words only buh this is a review sooo
I wuv this novel! Everything's great! Characters, plot and all. Heck, those fight scenes keep me tied to it. 👀 Who knows, I may borrow your writing style.
Welll, novel's great and I'm sticking with it! Keep up the good work author XD
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Fluffy_Fluffle
Action scenes are quite good and well written, character interactions are good too and the plot is quite mysterious. Those not used to anime style will find it a little difficult to adapt but I'm glad I ain't a part of them lol. Overall a good work and recommended read.
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notsosure
The character build up is awesome. The characters are very realistic and I like the pace of the book. I'm looking forward to more chapters.👍👍👍👍
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R_F_T_S
Shameless author review here, this is my first novel and I see great things coming out of it. So read and leave a review.
I'm open to constructive criticism so lay it on me coz I know that my work ain't perfect in the slightest 😅
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Uzochukwu_John
this book is noice, but there is no major romantic conflict between the three main characters, a love triangle to clarify,[img=update] romantic conflict
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Half_Boiled_Man
This a lightning fast, engaging action piece of a novel. While the writing is at times clumsy. With its grammar misha** and far too wordy lines. It's fun to read regardless. Characters are interesting despite how fast the story around them moves. Which in turn leads to not losing anytime with the storytelling. Props to the author writing this, will keep reading for sure.
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JdCreates
Book is great, has plenty of variety and overall has a good plot. Keep it up! I only have a few complaints, but they are minor and don't ruin the book.
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SomeoneBad
Overall, a fast-paced action story that unwinds rather quickly around the few key characters. The actions and combat are adequately portrayed, but the structure of paragraphs with intertwining dialogues and action could be a little more spaced out, giving each individual piece of content some room to breathe.
The story transitions from scene to scene like a tv show, shifting in tone, story beats, atmosphere swiftly, though the exposition at times can be a little heavy.
A story with a lot of potential, and with time, the rough edges could be trimmed off, revealing the true gem behind it.
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Zanyyy
I haven't really gotten far in reading this book but from what I've read I can tell that the author put a lot of work on the characters. The action is really too notch and I can't wait to read more!💯
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GeorgeOfTheCity
Would love to read more. Good work with developing the characters. If you're new here and love books with a lot of action, this is the book for you.
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Raeven_Black
First of all, I like how you build your characters! They all have personalities that make them unique to each other. The fighting scenes are cool as well and written in a way that makes you imagine the whole thing. Kind of have an issue with the way the paragraphs are spliced but it's cool. It could be worked on.
Anyway, great work!
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Alanala
The Prologue was a lil' bit of an info dump, but it's alright, probably.
Grammar can improve, I already saw the author's comment on it- I won't fault :pensive: Otherwise, the story is so far- heating up, great setting, ez collection
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priya012
This book is fantastic, and I can't wait for the next chapters to come out. Excellent work, author. You should be proud of yourself and the
work you put in.
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AJPaturde
I liked this book, cool setting, and storyline.
I have reviewed this book I hope the author comes and does it to mine also, lol kidding.
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wild_imaginatorII
I ****en love the starting line of your book!
Nice writing style,
Unique story line,
Not clichè,
What more could I want in a book?
This is a recommended read!!!!!!!
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Jimpaly
First of all, I’m going to point out that this story is around 70% action and 30% mystery. If you’re looking for action-packed scenes and descriptive fights, then this story’s for you.
Other than that, I love the world-building you did in the beginning and as the story continues.
The plot is eventful and interesting, but it feels like a lot of the mystery is already spoiled since it tells you who the bad guy is (but idk there might be more to the story that hadn’t been revealed yet).
The supernatural abilities are placed well in the combat, though it might be nice to see them used outside of fights.
The characters have nice interactions and there is a strong female lead, but you could give them clearer and more distinct personalities.
The major issue is probably that you should work on your punctuation, sentencing, and paragraphing. Your word choice is great but there’s a lot you can improve.
But overall, I love where the story’s going and I can’t wait for more!
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asdgvcxz
A very solid webnovel in it's current state. There are a few things that should be worked on such as punctuations and whatnot but the overall story is quite engaging, I like the world building and the characters aren't all that bad. The character design really doing it for but maybe that's cause I lack imagination.
Overall has a great story and plot, looking forward to future chapters and what's to come.
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Jacket_Josh
The story and characters are really nice, and pretty well written, besides a small abundance of grammatical issues. It's excusable though, since I assume it is not a born English author writing this. The world building sometimes falls into the background, and I wish the story took some times to actually develop things and let the story slow down a bit, but if that was added into later chapters, this will be a really nice read!
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OrgasmsxanxBruises
I like that the author gave the readers background in the prologue and I love that it was so detailed. The imagery is great. I think the book needs some work with grammar and punctuation, but outside of that, I think it's great. This book can go really far! Good work Author.
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Caleb_Egberibo
I think it's going good for a start..
Keep up the work and I can't wait to see the animation progress.
I think the write up is going somewhere
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