A shameless man once attempted to be an author only to find himself dangling from a rope over a large mountain. He had a choice, cut the rope and become an author or get off the cliff. Well, I cut the rope and am still falling. Hope you read this story!
uhm. What the heck is going on here? I mean it's not really bad but what?
It's... it's just so god damn inconsistent. Characters ages change from one chapter to the next, descriptions change, like in one scene someone is described wearing XY and in the next scene which should be immediately after that they are wearing something else completely.
Sorry but it's just way to random for my tastes. And tbh I kinda wonder why there are only 4.5+ star reviews.
Oh and I forgot, obviously every girl is the pinnacle of beauty and peerless. Hate that cliché in webnovels.
Anyways you might enjoy it, just not for me.
Writing quality - 2.5/5
Character Design - 2/5
World Background - 2/5
This Novel is a hidden gem if you can ignore these three shortcomings.
I haven't read much of it but it's got me hooked though it's confusing and has somewhat bad grammar.
I have read it through 10 chaps.
There is nowhere mc mention revenge stuff about his parents about himself being tortured and not to mention he always behaves like he got brainwashed by the girl above the surface.
At first, one might think that this story is but a fanservice of peculiar tastes, but that suddenly changes. The story doesn't overwhelm you with unnecessary details. It is a creative, engaging, and fun plot where you never know what's going to happen next thanks to the main character's personality, his special ability of not dying, and his support characters.
Overall this is something lighthearted that you can't go wrong with. Good job author, keep on it.
This is my attempt at an honest review. This review is purely based on my personal opinion on the story. Everything I write within it is taken from my worldview, and cannot, and will not, try to convince others otherwise I was at chapter 23 when the review was written.
The writing style is rather straightforward and nonsuperfluous. It conveys what is happening in a pleasant manner. Although it is straightforward, it uses the right words at the right time, and I find it rather immersive to read.
The release speed is very good, a lot of chapters are being released from what I can see, and, as far as I have reached, the quality has not taken any hit because of it.
The story is different from what I usually read but I have thoroughly enjoyed it. While there are many novels where the main character is a test subject, this is done rather differently.
I would definitely suggest others to try out this story. It is definitely time well spent.
This is an interesting story, the first chapter will leave you asking for more. Although, cliche in a sense that it’s a demon story all over again but it’s reedeming quality is the story. Also, add the good writing, well-written scenarios and interesting plot.
This is a well thought out story that can make you craving for more. Would recommend to any reader out there.
When I layed my eyes on this book, it instantly caught my eyes. The plot is great, it's written in a very detailed way and I can't help getting excited everytime I move onto the next chapter! Keep up the Good work![img=update]
This story is fantastic, the idea that the protagonist must die every night, in order to reincarnate the next day is great, although a little painful for Howards. From my perspective, the way you narrate and describe everything is fine because you manage to convey the right emotions to the reader.
Keep it up, I hope your story goes far.
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Writing quality was splendid but I have seen few typos. You can use grammarly keyboard for the finishing touches. Story development was nice. The character design was also worthy of praise. I feel bad for the Mc for being mistreated but that was him being a potential badass in the future. Updating stability was, well ot has stopped so author please resume the story. Your readers were waiting for you. And last World background. You were detailed on it and I can imagine where he was and what is his surroundings. Over all nice job. I hope it gets popular in the future because it deserves it.
BTW I hope you will review mine called "Waking Up In Undead World". I will wait for your response! See you!
Cool! The plot is really interesting and intriguing, the characters are all uniwue themselves, however the story is moving a bit too fast for me, maybe adding more details would be good, to build more emotions and tension.
But still, Good work Author! Keep it up!
So after going through all of the chapters here, I have to say that I enjoyed this very much!
The idea of stories where the characters go to a ceratin school to learn how to use a certain ability or magic, has always been my favourite type of story (what can I say I'm a otaku that grew up with those and I will guess that, the Author inspired himself on those, but if not I'm sorry for my remark)
But this one was good because of the idea that the MC reincarnates into a diffrent world and goes to one, is for me (at the very least) cool and original, the world is interesting and mystirious and the characters are both interesting and cool.
The only downside would be a few grammatical errors (but like I always say, it does not hinder a good story and can be fixed with time and ease)
Anyways I liked what we got here and I will be coming back for some more, so keep it going, Author!
Interesting concept! A lot of potential here. Anyway, to make this novel shine more, I kindly suggest for the author to dwell more on the character of Howard. Make me care about him - make them more alive. Keep it up, I'll watch this novel from the shadows. May the author: write more, edit more, learn more, and earn more!