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xiaohai_23
Wow, read it all in one go!
The first chapters tell about the first revenge of the MC. I think the author made a good choice, with a "small boss" before developing the plot further, so that the readers get used to the style of writing.
I found some grammar errors, and a couple of times I had problems understanding what the author meant. Overall, I understand what's happening, so I guess it's not such a big issue.
The MC is the tough type, she takes her fate in her hands, and that's another positive point.
Also, it's the first story I read with "Spanish" names, so it's kind of refreshing. Here people usually use german names when writing about nobility, so I needed like three seconds to adjust. The character names are easy to discern (which is not always the case, so another plus!).
I'd like to know more about the ML, but I guess I'll have to wait :(
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MistressUnderworld
Awesome characters. Another unique approach to time jump and dialogue. I love the names in this book. I hope to be reading more of it. I'm glad you're not one to shy away from extreme scenes. Hope to see more chapters soon.
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Seth_Baham
Noooo! You havenβt posted in a few and you have to keep going![img=faceslap]Your writing is very clean and extremely smart. Like, youβre good yo. And you write the tough stuff that people wouldnt event want to acknowledge in their books, which i do as well and love to see you nail it. You should be proud.[img=recommend]
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Chaitzzz
I declare this book to be intriguing. I wasn't able to stop reading. There it goes to my library. I can relate to how Heidi changed as she grew up, her personality changed completely. I know that Lucas's was corrupted but can't help hating him, anyways the book is good. Just go for it!
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xAlexiax
Promising start, I read it all in one go π
The synopsis had me intrigued and by the end I wanted more.
The fl seems to be a strong character and who I think is the male lead is pure evil.... but then again he might nt be the ml...
world background is innovative and creative.
keep up the good work author!
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Sailow_Sanchez
Read the synopsis and the book is something new compared to the books usually read. I like that it doesn't reveal much on what is happening on the inside. I'm definitely going to read this and I hope your grow with the rest of us at Writers Anonymous and we grow and learn from one another.
who knows, I might get better at writing about revenge. my villains are too nice.
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miu_hozuki
Well, the writing quality does deserve a five, if not for the sprinkled Spanish. However, the way scene is built makes up a great deal. On top of that, author does seem to loose the habit of too much Spanish.
Over all, well written and makes one anticipate to read the next chapter..
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Lexi_Roberson
Amazing! I recommend this to everyone! I absolutely adored the characters! Good job author, you are doing great, keep it up! I recommend grammar and checking it. Many authors struggle with this, good luck!
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Jinfiction
Ah, the tale of sweet revenge.
A woman's tears will set fire to the land and this story showcases agony, perfectly.
The author has used Spanish History and words etc and has provided translations at the end, which are rather helpful.
The strength in the plot lies in the character development, witchery and well thought out scenes.
The author calls themselves a novice and yet their minimal grammatical errors and appropriate use of 'commas' or even just 'exclamations' are timely, never taking away from the plot.
A slow burner but will definitely intrigue you.
Good stuff!
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oyslyness
I was so interested in reading the book that I didn't know when I reached the last chapter.
why?
BECAUSE IT'S SO GOOD AND CAPTIVATING!!
Can't wait for the next update.
keep it up!!!
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ForeverPupa
Not gonna lie, I L O V E the writing of this novel.
it's really grim, detailled, and the world building is amazing!
I support you author, good job!
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Cozma
I-I don't know what to say about this. The story is intriguing, the characters feel real, no grammar mistakes from what I know and the sentances are easy to read. The only downside is that it leaves you wanting more..
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Septic_Red
Great idea, King! This idea of a novel includes so many things about spanish vocabulary, culture, and also some great characters that I find really interesting
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Xin_Guan
Amazing writing style and also your's words, I have got no words to express how I felt reading your book....
It was amazing, exciting and fabulous...
Keep updating....
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Rida908
Really good boooooooooooooook man honestly so deep and it makes u want to read more, really good, so much emotion and detail in the book makes you want to keep reading
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inflict
Nice story!!! I added this to my library and follow the progress of the lead... hope to see more.......
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Queen_Of_Alchemy
I... Book.. So... Good!!!!!!!!! I love it so far. How the book is developing is pretty darn good. Since I have nothing else to say to fill up the post, I will say lots of words that describe the book.
Great. Fantastic. Lovely. Funny. Amazing.
Your welcome, cya!
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Jo_J
Nicely written! Big plus for the fact that at the beginning you explained about the backgound and all author's notes. An Interesting storyline and expressive characters.
Well done!
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shaeshang
I read some chapters and I can tell the story is well-written. The plot is good and the way the author gives their soul in describing everything is beyond perfect. The female lead is always my beloved genre. Thank you for the good story. Hope for more π€
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NoahSky
I like how you describe how your Mc feels. so far what I read is a pretty good story. keep up the good work! This story ha alot if potential.
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Listening_heart
I have only read begging chapters of this novel . and it really is interesting with strong female lead who is vengeful enough to tear her enemies and authors description of scenes are good and you can see that in the synopsis itself i feel.
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LoveJoy
First time I read a female lead novel and I love how sharp and vengeful woman can be when their tail is stepped on. Good read keep it up Author!
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ssun_ara
Hello, dear author! I just wanna tell you that you have a great story and it really hooked me in since the first chapter. Background and characters explanation was clear and that is just what everyone needs! Great job, author. Keep writing! πβ¨
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Hua_Li_An
"Reborn the Childe's Consort" is a good novel with the ever-loved Reincarnation theme. I have seen how the author had admitted to being a novice writer (and I wholly agree that we become better as we write on), so I cannot comment much on the grammatical issues and the flow of the story, but I can see potential in the plot itself. It is filled with drama, revenge, and a bit of humor, so I can see it becoming a great read for many readers.
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midnight_bloom
Great synopsis and premise. I was taken aback by the gory stuff lol as I was not ready for it (did not expect). Yet, the descriptions were so vivid that I shuddered just by reading them because I could see it in my head. LOL. This work has lots of potential. Maybe just a little bit more polishing but I can see it going to great heights. Keep on writing, author. π
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Tony_LaRocca
Interesting beginning of a story about a young aristocratic girl who wishes to study magic, and her dubious relationship with her servant. Very interested to see where this will lead.
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IzannahFrame
This is a very interesting read! It's been so long since I haven't read one of this kind of books. Guess this is a new start for me. I like it that the MC is playful. She's adorable. Great description too author. Keep it up!ππππ
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