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Nicola_mreno
Wahaha este es un fanfiction muy bueno de School of Zombies. Con su docis caliente de Snu snu. Y no dude en conseguir mujeres y matarlas si es necesario. La historia mejora a medida que avanza
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Frizepize
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BigNovelBigDream
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
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origin_seth
is this still up ?
hope you dont drop it...
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Tupan
Nice fanfic. Although i am not a big fan of fanfic that change worlds this one is great. Love the way the system works but the harem is getting a bit excessive. I know you HAVE TO FED THE HAREM but at one point is just too much.
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jeanpierregerardo
more chapters.
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sinful_life
let me tell you whats wrong not only is the writing quality is mediocre at best which can overlooked as a new author but:
1-in the start MC is shown as stupid and shallow as it apears from the 3rd wish but to know some women for less than two weeks make them fall in love with you in same time lose his v****ty card with all of them at same time even h**tai protagonist can't do this let alone normal transmigration person
2- a person doesn't share every secret in his normal life to people even if they are his lovers or even his most trusted confident let alone secrets to his own transmigration ,systems,super powerand his other abilities and that to people he only knew for less than 2 weeks not only that but he gave them powers and items like snap and share it
3- the world is seriously under developed as it seems all the world security can't stop a single house elf from stealing all he wants from the world's Banks and every woman and man is seriously one dimensional in character (seriously even 2d women in dating games have much more character and reality to them)
___ the previous was about what caused my head to nearly overload __
(but the overall idea about the MC , his harem's women , the world he is in and will travel to , his 1st & 2nd wishes are good)
seriously couldn't you have transmigrated the mc a few years before anything allowing him some time to seriously adapt and think about his possibilities as a transmigrator .
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DarkArcanist
The idea's there, the only real problem I have is the writing quality, it's really hard to try and navigate who is speaking, you could try to separate some parts from others such as your author notes, you could separate them from the text, and please don't use so many caps, it's hard to tell if that's the start of a new sentence or that you're shouting.
Again it's not a bad idea, just keep practicing your writing, and watch your spacing.
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jeanpierregerardo
good.
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omnigamergt
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jeanpierregerardo
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abyss_of_darkness
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Jelly_Red_Kuma
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no need fixed 😑 only need moar chapter, action, bashing, thrashing and moar moar moar chapter and words .. thats all 😌
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jeanpierregerardo
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jeanpierregerardo
good.
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jeanpierregerardo
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jeanpierregerardo
good.
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Ryuu23
The work has its drawbacks, but overall I like it. Just decided to give a good review.
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Decimation
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jeanpierregerardo
more chapters.
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Fadly22
Continue!
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