This story has so far been among the best webnovel has to offer. It would certainly be a shame if you were to drop this story so please continue to do your best. This story was solidly 5 stars until you got truck kuned of the face of the Earth.
This is a Very well composed story. The mc is smart and cautios. He is also very dIligent with his training as he doesnt have any super cheat. the only downside to this ,Is how good the sTory is. I literally Started and caught up to the lastest chapTer in lIke 2 daYs
Me gusta mucho el atributo del chakra de aire no se por que no lo utilizan los fan fics ,espero que siga siendo así de bueno, lo que si me molesta es que tenga que esconderse tanto ya espero que deje de hacerlo
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Aku cukup banyak tertawa setelah Fujin masuk ke dalam tim. Tim mereka menyenangkan, walaupun cukup menyedihkan ketika di singgung bahwa Mieko tidak akan hidup lagi. Ada lagi fakta bahwa Senju masih tetap ada dan tidak hanya Tsunade yang tersisa. Adanya anggota klan lain seperti Hatake dan Shimura juga ide yang baik.
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5/5 ⭐! Well written, well thought out, good direction! You are doing brilliant! Keep it up author, love your work! 👍
I read comments based on too much detailing in your fic or slow pacing, lemme tell you not to worry about that, there are many stories which take the character from 0 to 100 in 2 years🙄... You are doing it right!
Overall one of the best naruto fanfictions. I really like the pacing. The MC is strong but not ridiculously overpowered. No instant level up here. MC works for his skills and is willing to learn from others ( ask for help). If you like natutp fanfiction this should be on your reading list .[img=recommend][img=update]
Definitely one of the best Naruto Fanfics of this site, I love the fact that the mc doesn't have any kind of plot armor and has to work to the bones to achieve what he current have, the pace couldn't be better as well, this kind of story can't be rushed... I only wish to inform the author that your novel is in the list of original novels which is A LOT more competitive( the readers give a lot more of PS for these novels) than the list of fanfic novels, if you change to the FF list you could have a lot more of exposition and a higher rank
I really really like the technical aspects and all the grinding. if I have anything to complain about is the lack of dialogue and meaningful interactions between the MC and his peers. but I suppose that it will come when he gets attached to his brothers in arms.
all in all, a very good fic.
Everything is perfect for a fanfiction quality.
I like the characters and happy that some side characters get a background instead of being only MC background. Update stability is great and the world background is fine as nothing much happened yet.
Very Minor negatives:
need a bit of improvement in the writing quality, I think proofreading would be a good suggestion.
Story development is too slow in some chapters because of the long explanations and practising jutsu chapters. It's still fine, you can skim read through them.
As of chapter 39, nothing much happened but this fanfic has a lot of potential, so keep up the work Author ✌️
Really solid 5star fanfiction. As others have said your writing is very good, i like that we also get others perspective not only MCs, for me pace is good but i am afraid you will get burned out by your storytelling pace and please do not make this about harem or romance.
(Google-Translate) - I am evaluating it as 5 ⭐, it may not be the best Naruto story on this site, but it is the most consistent and well elaborated. The author managed to make the MC strong but not someone who will be 11 at the kage level as there are so many stories out there.
In short, the author has put the level of power at the right point where the MC is not weak but not strong enough to be on top of the ninja world in a few years, the progression of power and what most attracted me to this fanfic and the author so far it is to be congratulated on this point.
The only thing I think the author can try to improve is the social relationships of the MC, as he seems a little lonely along with that to add more dialogue to the story.
And now and only one request to the author: Could you specify the appearance of the MC? I don't remember you detailing that.