Really amazing and unique story, MC is 2 years older(same age as Cederic) and has his own storyline. Really interesting with how MC changes the already known canon. Sadly there hasn't been an update for sometime but there's always hope!
Very very good story. Excellent in terms of cannon and stand alone story. Author has done a very good job on both counts. Very entertaining, engaging and funny too. Definitely definitely worth the read.
Its REALLLY BORING. What I mean is that it gets very mundane very fast. The mc dosnt really do anything other than hang out with his family and considering I expected to read about an mc learning magic I was very disappointed. Also mc is supposedly talented but learning anything takes an extremedy long time which I would have been okay with if he hadnt mentioned how talented he was before.
Pretty good fanfiction. Has the standard wish fulfillment aspect that most reincarnated HP fics have, but it has a plot and purpose instead of the aimless powerjerk. MC is pretty cool, and doesn't literally only study magic. There are relationships between characters original and canon, and more plot than the books without deviating from canon. He has his own things to do and canon doesn't really concern him. Overall good fic.
This is one of the best(if not best) harry potter fanfic I have ever read. It has all the things; great character design, world Background and a proper story development which does not necassary go with the canon. All in All it is 5/5 for me if not for updating stability.
Overall it is probably the best fan-fic I have ever read and might be the best I ever will read. I hope the author continues to write this amazing story to its completion. I loike many people love the pace and the struggle the MC has to go through to gain power and even have the MC be knocked down off their pedestal a few time to keep them in check. I also like that the author didn't go the route of making the MC the heir to dozens of houses out of nowhere for no real needed reason. I also enjoy the dynamic between the MC and his main 3 friends as I believe it gives a good balance in the story to keep the MC grounded so that he doesn't all of a sudden become this powerful wizard that Noone can beat and the few times he does go against some professional wizards it has always been with him with the advantage to show that if he wasn't able to trick them then he probably would not have succeeded or have him targeted any more competent wizards or witched then he also would have probably failed. The final thing I will mention is the new main plot as how I view it with this huge almost 2nd war that os being waged between uncle John and Declan that I can't wait to see happen in the future and what new spells that the MC will create to help his uncle prepare for the coming conflict. There are few more points I would like to mention but at this point whoever os reading this should just read the book already and write a review of their own.
I'm loving the story.
From few HP fanfic I've read they are always so simlar heir to multiple houses or their so powerful that they can use fiendfyre or protego diabolica and control at perfectly in 3 year of Hogwarts which was decently fun to read but it gets boring quite quickly when everyone is writing HP fanfic like that.
While Alex is OP for his age group I don't think he can fight ***** wizard trained for combat like auror unlike other fanfic which I find refreshing and realistic for a HP universe.
I also like the fact that MC has only read up to book 5 and is friend with Cedric who dies in the book forces him to be careful when interfering book events unlike other fanfic that take over Harry's prophecy or manifest destiny their own goal when their are very young which is not so realistic.
I read this on RoyalRoad and it's the best HP fan fiction have read so I decided to pop here for review since I saw it here. Probably best fan fiction of any series actually. Mc is extremely competent and smart, but is not some "op" character with cheats. Story also feels like it 100% meshes into HP universe. Characters are also fun and three dimensional.
Overall I can't find any faults and it's just extremely fun read. Grammar is also really good.
This has every thing a harry potter Fanfic needs. Its good that the mc has his own adventures with his own friends instead of leechin on Harry's. It's funny and it bring lots of different and unique ideas plus it is more towards the books than the movies. I also like the family dynamic it always makes me laugh and it was interesting to see how mcs family interacts with the wizarding world and other Nobel families
I've been reading only on chapter 6 and so far this is one of the best HP novels in this site. the world building is very believable and the one where the author explains how voldy rose to power is very very believable, probably because of how it resembles in real history. I don't know whether the characterization of the main character would be as good but I'm really liking this fic so far.
Well, i'm not an expert in writing, but ! And it's the first time I'll said that on Webnovel. If you finish this book and make it in a hardback format, I would genuinely buy it ! Finding this story among all those Harry Potter Fanfic is like finding Emma Watson among a bunch of old hag.
This is one of the best Harry Potter fanfics ever and I love MCs family every one of em plus mc doesn't get op as hell from the start u can see him training and struggling and he seems human compared to other MCs cause of his arrogant personality even though it is not too much and I hope more people enjoy just as much I enjoy it .
Peace out 🖖🖖
OH M G. I got hooked by this story. I gotta say that I was never planning to read any harry potter fanfic but when I saw that it was close to a hundred chapters I had to at least check it out. I LOVE IT it was a great experience, chapter after chaps. and I would even say that if it were not for the fact that it was a fan fiction it could even be a stand alone like be a real fantasy book (BTW this is a compliment) I would love love love to have more.
p.s at the end of the update it left me thirsty for more so I found another such book you know a fan fic of potterverse(Yeah I know i'm a b!!!!) It was just not the same so I'm just gonna have to wait. lots of love. hehe