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Daoist198784
Here mc is super dumb, he is an OP, but he is still afraid of everything, and does not want to do anything to know the future. He is already there, he has already changed the future. Such a coward, although he is OP
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MilkGod
What a shame the author dropped it, and I was actually expecting the MC to go to different worlds.
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Flawless_Saber_Dao
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LionWannabe
This novel is very phenomenal ones. Great fanfic with the right pace, and enjoyable story so far. Go ahead and read it, it will be BOOM-ing your head
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Reaper_Souls
Great book but slow releases... Which causes it to be forgotten by supporter's and readers . But its a great book regardless of what haters or people say !!!
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HolyMaidenZero
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loki1717
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Ghoul1357957913
Heh our mc is quite not broken yet. Make him a sadist cos the way i look at other stories i find them as a nag and masochist also give him a skill that forces him to stay calm that way he will be a broken human with God like strength though he doesn't have it now
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READERAkuma
i dont se the poit its just harem novel with easy growth no f training eksplained the mc gets stronger by time with noexplain and have thr haracter of a vergin anime otaku, its anoying
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Space_Fox
I put 5 stars because the novel is sincerly fantastic, moreover the author is really interactive with the users and their ideas :D
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The_One_Above_You
can't wait when you reach tournament arc and tartaros arc ..... the best arcs , and how powerful the MC will be in them
i think you should make him find a cat too
and buy another dragon slayer magic like ( plasma ...)
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Fawkes
F U man, You gave many big names so I thought I will get to read something new, and you started with fairy tale. Man there are many books on fairy tale............... ........ Ggcddrgbji. Fyhv rtygd gyuvdr
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Manniac
nice
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My_Surname
5 star. That is all. <all that I write bellow is a joke. >
Oh, this contains spoiler because author is secretly in to guys ! And a lolicon. Isn't that spoiler eoungh ?
Jk. Im just kidding...... Im not !
Source : his editor. Ask him !
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xelita007x
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35890
I have only two words: Linley World.
Also this book is pretty good I haven't gotten that far but I'm already liking it, you don't need to know the premise of the world going in either, at least not the first one, but I'd still recommend watching the first episode just so some stuff with ppl other than mc is consistent to you.
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LelouchViBrittania
Okay Chenglei as I'm a gentleman I'll give you a free five stars review. You better write those chapters or else π‘π π hmmph...................................................................................................................
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Kyruu
good story so far, there isn't much to comment about, well, there's, the spam of E.N are annoying and i would prefer if it was only used on serious things not to spam bad jokes, but generally , i like the story (for now~)
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Slacott3
I don't know what happened didn't you say you'll mass release after like a month dude don't forget or you're fanfic will go down dude I'll try and start donating my stones to you from now on until you're back
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HeartFire2
Un novel avec un grand potentiel !!
Vivement la suite.
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Kunnandi
The author and editor are funny people always contesting one another and the novel it's pretty good in my opinion haha **. I was only here because this seems like it has some potential.
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demon_cook
Thanks for this book I really enjoy reading it and hope you keep writing don't you dare drop it or I will hunt you down and kill you.... Maybe...... Probably not....
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Jojo775
This is a light hearthed fic about generic system transmigration. What makes it special is that it's actually about AN vs EN(author notes vs editor notes), it's funny and the only thing that makes this worth reading if you're looking to give your mind a break. Some chunni's will not like these frequent notes which they think interrupt the story, their immersion, well who cares about the half assed plot and 0 character design and interaction, or chunni's opinion for that matter.
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francom
Writing quality:
Not that bad considering itβs just a fanfic but there are a couple spelling errors and grammar mistake that take me out of the story while reading.
Stability of updates:
He has done a very good job with the updates and I noticed he did update at least once a day.
Story Development:
This is unfortunately where everything goes wrong. He starts off with the regular premise of having amnesia so he just uses that as an excuse to explain all the crazy things he can do. The other thing that bothered me was how the other characters interacted with the mc. Just a random kid goes into the fairytale guild and is just adopted immediately then when he shows that he has crazy strong magic and people start asking question about how he got that magic the only answer the mc can give them is βI donβt knowβ and everyone is like ok cool. And all that happened just a couple days after entering the guild. Sorry I just couldnβt keep reading after that.
Character Design:
He doesnβt go into great lengths as to fully describe how the mc looks but just describes himself to be incredibly handsome.
World Background:
I read until ch 10 and didnβt really get a sense of how big the world is or any clear descriptions of his surroundings.
Overall:
I first want to say that I really like the premise of an mc that is not just stuck in one world but has the ability to travel wherever he wishes including back to his original world. I just didnβt like how everything just sort of worked out for the mc without him having to really do anything. Even when he didnβt have enough points to buy an item from the system shop it was just handed to him, sure he had a time limit of paying back the points but I didnβt really like that everything the mc needed or wanted was just given to him without having to work for it. In the end this is a story for those who donβt really care how the mc becomes op but just starts out as op.
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CyrusBlack
You have 5 second of your life reading if your not dumb but you can gain 5 days of life vy readibg this novel about an author and a editor lol
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Oniichan_Thickskin
Oh oh me like the synopsis! going into novel as well as movies! yes yes yes! ....funny how I didn't read this yet but already giving it a five stars....but what can I say? my skin is quite thick.
lol~ anything within the Unlimited Genre...I like it!
recommend author putting in the tag "Unlimited" for this novel, help promoting a new genre of fanfiction?!
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SanXan
Its really good i just hope when he leavs βfairy tail world β and goes to the next world he brings erza/others with him . And i know time will probebly slow down at βfairy tale worldβ too but it would be better with his harem on a diffrent world. But its up to you and you are doing a great job i think and hope you will countine to do a good job .
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You deserve to be in top ten :)
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Melshan
Muito bom a novel recomendo Γ todos a acompanhar nΓ£o vΓ£o se arrepender.
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DoBeDo
Just the start of the novel was great as unlike some novels where the system is a big conspiracy or just a part of the mc or even just disappears when the mc is too strong this one is literally just gods plan . not only that it also explains that god actually made the fictional world and didn't just completely ignore the issue of there just being worlds that are identical to human fiction . this just has great potential just keep up the steady rhythm
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