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Hello, I recently read your story and truly enjoyed it. I find your writing style very impressive. May I ask how long you have been writing?
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Ok when I see trans stuff being pushed before chapter 1 is even over I’m out
An interesting comic. The drawing is good, most of the characters are interesting and it was funny in several places. There were a few places where it felt like some information was skipped and I'll see if there's a related novel. Also: squirrel! 🐿🐿
I really don't get all those positive reviews here... I read till chapter 28 of 36 chapters. Because it's so short I tried to persist till the end but eventually failed. The story starts interesting and light hearted. It never had many details but it felt like a relaxing read, nothing complicated. This started to change after chapter 10. Plot holes and big missing chunks of information started to trouble me. New characters and even situations started to appear that made no sense. Suddenly everything was rushed and just happened without rhyme or reason and caused confusion. Keep in mind each chapter is only 1 fast pass / ca. 13 coins worth, so quite short. I thought this would be something good but the story's shortness didn't allow it to fit the whole plot the author had in mind. It wasn't worth my time and fast passes / coins and the rating of 2.3 for my review happens only because I can't find fault with the drawing quality and gave it 5 stars.
This story is alright but take my advice and don't read it for a web novel in DND. the only similarities I've seen do far are the class names ... it's disappointing.
good story whith good drawing. overall good material but a little too fast paced. Good work author, you are promising.
this manwha is trash, the developement of the story is ... i don't know how people can read this kind of stuff.. its not something i want to recomment to read..
The drawing is great, the story is light hearted and doesnt stray from its intended humorous short story frame. I personally like the character design a lot, and lastly this story is hilarious although its regretfully short. I wouldve liked reading more about it and getting deeper into the world, but I also think if it was much longer it would have become boring, so all in all I would say its perfect as it is and it isnt lacking in any one compartment.
over all content is good story was too short it was a shame that it ended so soon
well the story up to now is pretty fun and got some very nice comedial takes, i laughed pretty hard at some scenes, so thats a good one. It's easy to read and got a good art style, is pretty short so if u just want to pass some time it will definitly raise your mood 👍
I absolutely loved the development of the story and characters. I reakky hope to see a second installment or continuation of any kind for thIs series.
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At the beginning there are some really funny parts but later on it gets a bit dull. And his setting as a shameless mage is rarely brought up. It seems like just a side note to the rest of the events. Also it is NOT complete. It ends abruptly and the major plot points aren't resolved. On that note, the plot is all over the place. I'm not sure who half of the people are. Like, some new character shows up and they're instantly friends? No background or depth. I think it had potential but failed on the execution. Still an enjoyable read but it could've been even better.
I was skeptical when I first read the title but to my surprise it was really good and has some nice atory telling in my opinion totally worth reading
I like the funny parts but the ending seems rushed. The storyline also seems unplanned. Characters have ni depth. All-in-all this is another relaxing read.
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The story was good for a generic read for the genre, but the ending was way too rushed.