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loved ,the Harry Potter calmly reference

Inside, the four monsters which were sitting looked at Corey and Corey looked at them calmly.

Single Wish: Rise Of The Omniscient Paragon

Single Wish: Rise Of The Omniscient Paragon

Fantasy · Anon22

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REVISED VERSION SPIRIT NAME --- GORE CHILD INT -2 ADAPTibility -3 ( can be used with other design spirit) ABIlity DIVERSITY- 2 ability POWER ---- 3 ABILITY NAME -------- SPIRITUAL IMMERSION BASIC IDEA -------------------- you told i the novel deeper the man machine neural connection better the reaction time and stronger performance in war 1) hence my idea is a design spirit that provides this connection but via spiritual means (eg the women achieved 100% connection in Ves mastery experience) you also pointed out higher level neural interface are dangerous to mech pilot as damage to mech translated to damage to the mech pilot. 2 ) so the second ability of the design spirit is to shield the mech pilots mind from the injury due to deeper immersion in battles \3) over time the design spirit heals the damage done to the mech pilot( if ves grandfather uses the mech his injuries could he healed but the time will be more than 40 years due to his injuries ) but or example MELKOR uses it his neural injuries can be fixed in few years this lengthens the mech pilots carrier/ use full years HOW IT WORKS THE design spirit has the fragment of unending one so it absorbs the spiritual remnant to the dead mech pilots(killed by the mech) and converts it to provide the shield to the mech pilot.( so mech pilots are not injured like benjamin larikso0n) NOTE this increases life of mech pilots as well as expert mech pilots conditions to the ability------------------- the design only allows the deeper man machine connection that it can perfectly shield its mech pilot from additional damage due to deeper connection. the power comes from killing so more the mech pilot kills stronger the power the design spirit can hold for the mech and use it to shield the mech pilot . MECH PILOT can also trigger 100^% man machine connection if he conserves the converted power ( if the power is lower than necessary then the damage to the mech pilot will be there but lower due to design spirits contribution) ADVANTAGE----- works well with other design spirits as u mention higher immersion better effect of other design spirits INGREDIENTS -------------------------VES + QILANXO(attribute that protects mech pilot) + fragment of ALEXIA TRUMP + JOSHUA + UNDYING ONE( WHALE ONE) ATTRIBUTE DEVOURING STORY IN A black market Ves finds salvage /broken first class mechwith broken neural interface but it''s price is very high ( half the rate of a new 1st class mech). this intrigues Ves so he examines it . There he finds a very strong spiritual presence in it (fragment of its mech designer) . So VES talks with it spiritually there he finds it is a Master Mech designed by a first class Senior mech designer ALEXIA TRUMP. The mech reached 100% neural connection with the mech pilot in a battle but they lost the life of th mech pilot in a ambush and the salvage was sold in the black market . He research the mech designers name and finds the mech designer is still alive but the mech was from 30 years ago.And the DESIGN PHILOPOHY of the mech designer is DEEP IMMERSION CONNECTION WITH LESSER INJURY TO MECH PILOT.so ves use the fragment of the design philosophy to create Grore child. as the mech designer is alive a portion of its power is supplied to the design spirit. to increase its power.
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SPIRIT NAME --- GORE CHILD (FEMALE) keeps gloriana happy INT -2 ADAPT-3 ABI DIVERSITY- 2 POWER ---- 3 ABILITY NAME -------- SPRITUAL IMMERSION More the rate of killing in a mech fight by the mech pilot more deeper MAN MACHINE connection becomes (spiritual connection works like a neural connection ) BUT MENTIONED I THE STORY HIGHER THE CONNECT HIGHER THE INJURY TO THE MECH PILOT IF THE MECH IS DAMAGED SO the design spirit negates this damage to the mech pilot( takes injury on itself) NOTE---------- the jury that can be handled by design spirit and the immersion is balanced by the GORECHILD. If the mech receives injury the immersion level drops which can the then regained with time if rate of killing is same. ( if higher immersion neural interface used in the mech then the rate of killing needed decreases to achieve the same level of immersion / connection in connection to the neural interface type used) NOTE @????_______------ very high immersion with very high damage will reach mech pilot but decreased to a grater extent so the a limit of immersion is advised. Good for sniper mechs CONDITION ----------- rate of killing must be continuous higher rate of killing higher man machine connection ADVANTAGE----- works well with other design spirits as u mention higher immersion better effect of other design spirits INGREDIENTS -------------------------VES + QILANXO(attribute that protects mech pilot) + fragment of ALEXIA TRUMP + UNDYING ONE( WHALE ONE) ATTRIBUTE DEVOURING STORY IN A black market Ves finds salvage /broken first class mech but neural interface is broken and it is sprice is very high ( half of a new 1st class mech). this intrigues Ves so he examines it . There he finds a very strong spiritual presence in it fragment of the creator . Ans VES connects with it he finds it is a Master Mech designed by a first class Senior mech designer ALEXIA TRUMP. The mech reached 100% neural connection with the mech pilot but they lost in a ambush and the salvage was sold in the blach market He research the mech designer and finds the mech designer is still alive but the mech was name 30 years ago.And the DESIGN PHILOPOHY of the mech designer is DEEP IMMERSION CONNECTION WITH LESSER INJURY TO MECH PILOT.so use the fragment to create Grore child
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SPIRIT NAME --- GORE CHILD (FEMALE) keeps gloriana happy INT -2 ADAPT-3 ABI DIVERSITY- 2 POWER ---- 3 ABILITY NAME -------- SPRITUAL IMMERSION More the rate of killing in a mech fight by the mech pilot more deeper MAN MACHINE connection becomes (spiritual connection works like a neural connection ) BUT MENTIONED I THE STORY HIGHER THE CONNECT HIGHER THE INJURY TO THE MECH PILOT IF THE MECH IS DAMAGED SO the design spirit negates this damage to the mech pilot( takes injury on itself) NOTE---------- the jury that can be handled by design spirit and the immersion is balanced by the GORECHILD. If the mech receives injury the immersion level drops which can the then regained with time if rate of killing is same. ( if higher immersion neural interface used in the mech then the rate of killing needed decreases to achieve the same level of immersion / connection in connection to the neural interface type used) NOTE @????_______------ very high immersion with very high damage will reach mech pilot but decreased to a grater extent so the a limit of immersion is advised. Good for sniper mechs CONDITION ----------- rate of killing must be continuous higher rate of killing higher man machine connection ADVANTAGE----- works well with other design spirits as u mention higher immersion better effect of other design spirits INGREDIENTS -------------------------VES + QILANXO(attribute that protects mech pilot) + fragment of ALEXIA TRUMP + UNDYING ONE( WHALE ONE) ATTRIBUTE DEVOURING STORY IN A black market Ves finds salvage /broken first class mech but neural interface is broken and it is sprice is very high ( half of a new 1st class mech). this intrigues Ves so he examines it . There he finds a very strong spiritual presence in it fragment of the creator . Ans VES connects with it he finds it is a Master Mech designed by a first class Senior mech designer ALEXIA TRUMP. The mech reached 100% neural connection with the mech pilot but they lost in a ambush and the salvage was sold in the blach market He research the mech designer and finds the mech designer is still alive but the mech was name 30 years ago.And the DESIGN PHILOPOHY of the mech designer is DEEP IMMERSION CONNECTION WITH LESSER INJURY TO MECH PILOT.so use the fragment to create Grore child
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TIRESEAS - battle spirit name intelligence - 2 adaptibility-2 ability diversity 1 ability power 5 special ability - future preservation vision 3 conditions (imp) gives the mech pilot vision or data of events 5 second in futureif there is 10% or more damage in the upcoming 5 seconds CONDITION 1 10% damage- shows the part of the mech that would be damaged ( in 3 colors i.e. red , yellow, orange if there is in multiple parts to show intensity / quantify the damage) Mech Pilot can the the data to find the trajectory of attack . CONDITION 2 20% damage --- mech pilot gets data regarding the type of injury suffered the part of the mech . More damage to the part more detailed the data shown . Mech Pilots can use the knowledge of the injury to anticipate the type of attach eg is it laser damage or damage by kinetic weapons or by spear/ sword the angle of cut to find the direction of sword attack , the entry direction of kinetic /laser bullet detail of data depends on the damage to the part . CONDITION 3 80% damage----- mech pilots gets vision of the next 5 seconds ( if overpowered) THEN the last 1 second from a 3rd point of view OR the fist second so the mech plot can choose to not move like the vision or take those steps TO prevent the future . DISDVANTAGE---------1) data if very big and detailed so the ability is very difficult to use 2) high learning curve 3) only highly trained mech pilots can use it works best for Expert pilots or above ADDITIONAL FACT - can help a mech pilot to become a expert pilot with resonance/ or ability in this field i.e. very high battle instinct to save life and future sight ( time related powers) USAGE ------ Good for skirmish mech /Light mechs (TUsa or Glorianas brother) STAR DANCER INGREDIENTS- VES ,YANNIE(mech spirit of transcender) provides boost in future sight +JANUS + OPTIONAL if u want to explain data shown better a Fragment of sentient AI( Ves can also use a part in the mech to translate the spiritual data to the mech pilot in physical form hence the name of mech spirit read the atena incedent) JANUS can be 1 a Deity stature a alien race prays to 2 an exobeast the paragon of its planet /society . rumors are of it being unkillable . VES attacks its after stuying its battles were a bio doctor( the new bio mech designer girl) tells ves that the exobeast changes its body a midst a action taken by it ( example if it is jumoing it changes its position/ movement mid air as if dodging a invisible attack) before any major attacks by the mech pilots . ie it changes it action abrupty while its muscles shows it going to move differently,
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