i read your novel three times and in the three times i reached the same conclusion that your novel can be very much better i think your novel with the good foundation in the start may reach near thousand
The beginning of the story to the central portion of this book was interesting and filled with adventure but as it continue to the end game was trash. I was impressed at first but now dissatisfied and disappointed on the book. The latter part of this book is beyond boring because the storyline didn't as it used to be at the beginning so I rate it a 2star. Thanks for the book and hardwork
Do you know there is a LitRPG writing contest? You might be a competitive participant and take the chance to win up to $3,000! Please Google LUTAW_writing_contest or Supreme Me Fiction Writing Contest to find out more!
This contest is free entry and open to any writer at any country. If you had any query, please feel free to contact firstname.lastname@example.org
Good luck for writing!
Why did you have to choose human which atomically makes me drop the damn story since it’ll be hella boring. You should have never given Demons, Dragons or fairies as a option since it only shows the reader that the author could’ve made a interesting and cool character but instead opted for a human...
Translation is like its generated by machinenovel
And story is just dumb
He is literally playing a game
He is another world but his previous world knowledge is the best......WTF
And that scene when he was in the cave with the girl ..it was like she was waiting for him to sleep with her... like he just touched her once and she pulled her clothes open for him to do her....WTF
this novel is just waste of time!!
Most people are commenting about later on i got to chapter 5 but feel like I have missed about 100 nothing makes sense or it does to the me but not to the reader as nothing is explained and I mean nothing he dies and is told he will reincarnate to a world and that world will be random and he will get a power, does he check to see what his power is no because apparently he will lose his memories(not sure when we are told that but ok) then he choses the worst world to go to because of a reason he knows. Yep he chose it because we just ignore the fact that the world is meant to be random oh and if he loses his memories he won't even know why he should of chosen that world but OK, skip to him landing on the new world it works like a game he knows it acts like a game and thinks that's normal , wait what the actual **** is this story writing I got to him pulling some magic out of his ass and getting a transforming wolf girl dog thing before I gave up don't even bother trying if your actually after a story
Honestly this book isn't the worst and it certainly starts getting better the further in. The one thing that kills me is that their is just too much going on. Like he has how many different girls to the point where it's hard to keep up not to mention the special items you never hear about again from the beginning like the book. It literally just gets to a point where so much old stuff is just ignored and just more stuff piles on adding to the confusion that's already going on.
The number of times that the words "envy, jealousy, activity (means sex), ass, breast," repeating each paragraph makes me crazy, it never always changes the same speech, always the same thing we know that the hero is good at sex we understood, we clearly understood after 100 chapter with the same thing develop a MC level power instead of stagnating everything, ****!
Everything sucks as if your first fifty chapters suck than how in the world are you gonna get readers. Writing style sucks, word arrangement sucks, don't know english, don't know how to or whete to use prepositions. Total **** story.
"A relationship is not created overnight, it takes time, an example of this would be a man and a woman meet, at first they are only known, but the two spent several years together traveling, in the middle of the way the two fall in love ".
These what the MC said to the girl he saved during the test, damn he makes fun of the world he ****ed xiao xi in chapter 10 while he not even some day, he saved her, and the **** the same day and he has the face to say something like sa😔 I'm speechless hat low author
Well, a harem from the start to the end. Not many thrilling scene here, the mc seldom trapped in the difficulties. I would said this is an adventure to collect a harem rather than cultivation or game elements.