Reviews of Endless Journey: Infinite Realms by kcgrabin - Webnovel

Alrighty, Before I start this amazing review I want to say I binged read this in like 5 days. Verrry Good book, one of the better ones on Webnovel to me anyway. Writing Quality - 4 The writing is fairly good, there are spelling mistakes here and there. Though, I can understand people make mistakes here and there. The mistakes aren't huge and you can easily figure out what the author was trying to say. The chapters are a perfect length, from what I can see they are thought through very well. Your storytelling is quite unique for some reason I fucking love the way you write. For example, the first world, to me was the best. Stability of Updates - 5 From what I can see, you have been uploading 1-2 chapters daily for around 3 months. I completely understand how hard it is to post daily, I tried at a time with my novel and was only able to post 1,500 words at the most each day. Though, it got very tiring after awhile. Story Development - 5 I'm not trying to make out that your book is a godsend, but it's quite good and deserves 5 stars for story development. The first volume was well described and very easy to understand. For me, I was easily able to follow the story of a traveler and the Esper's world as a whole. The second volume kept up with Alex exploring the world and finding new companions. No time throughout volume two was I confused, I just wanted to keep reading. Finally, Volume three. A fucking world filled with superhumans, who wouldn't want to keep reading. One of the greatest things that I enjoy about this book is the way it's set up. Alex goes to a new world each volume, meaning the author is able to create new exciting adventures without getting tired of one single world. Character Design - 4.5 The character Design in this book is quite good. Though me personally I dislike the way the fairy acts and how clueless and oblivious Alex is. Alex is starting to become less oblivious but he's still pretty clueless about his surroundings. World Background - 5 As I stated countless times throughout the review thus far, Moving around to different worlds is amazing. I'm enjoying the author's different worlds too much. Each of the world's that Alex goes to is well described before the volume starts. You may be confused at first but once the story develops more you go "Oh!" and understand everything that is going on. Ending (Overall 4.6) Overall, the book is fucking amazing. The author did a very good job of creating a complex and unique storyline. I don't understand why your book as so little reviews and or views. Not enough people are reading this masterpiece. P.S Author we are all waiting for Alex to get fucking laid. When is that going to happen?

I think that this is well written and it is a shame the author is stuggling with motivation to write this is one of my favorite lightnovels.

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I would say that the theme has potential since it's not one of the most used ones. In the beginning instead of meeting Truck-kun we met Storm-sama wich failed to do her work miserably and our mc was saved and teleported to a new world to participate in "quests". My first problem with this novel is the under-developed characters (we seem to get one more companion in each world he goes to, companions that I personally don't give a damn about, except Alina cuz she was the first and the main female protagonist, but under-developed nontheless). Second big problem is the fact that the start and ending of all 4 volumes that I read till now are pretty bad, instead of exploring the world with the protagonist we get 2-3 chapters in the POV of a random character wich we don't know nothing about and get some useless info dump, wich is pretty bad in my opinion I would prefer to see the protagonist view and not some random guy, while in the ending of a volume the protagonist doesn't have time to do anything after completing the main mission he and his companions are instantly teleported to another world, wich in my opinion is a big problem since we can't see any progression in the MC's relationship with his companions cuz they're always in the missions, a 1-2 days vacation after the main mission end would be really appreciated as we could use that time to digest some information about the world that the protagonist is about to leave and get some character development... The Fairy is a problem as well since she doesn't seem to like her work that much, fairies in novels usually have a mischievous personality, this one has one too, instead of giving the information that she needs to give as a Guide she always seems to be giving the information after it's useless or a during a situation that it can become usefull, wich is pretty annoying to me since it gets boring really fast and it's not really a good way to make character development. All that said I'm still enjoying the novel and will probably continue reading it for some time, might come back to change to review if I see it getting better or worse, really hope a few of these points change in the future. **: Since i'm not a native english speaker and it's been a while since I had to write a big text I would like to apologize to the readers for problems with past/present/future situations and other things. PS2: These are my opinions and as such no1 needs to take it at face value :P Ty for reading this if you did and Goodbye =)