Reviews of The Story of Dusk by jikanyotomare - Webnovel

The beginning was ok but then it got confusing, not satisfying at all. Like is it about Senja or Luna? if Luna, then why start with Senjas sad backstory?

I really liked this book! It has a driving story and a lot of intrigie. There is also a bit of magic and a lot of twisting plot lines. It’s an addicting story line and this author is a new fund and I will read more of his works for sure.

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I liked the plot but still I will stick with senja nd XT. I was not going to read this but I thought I may get fee chps of senja n XT with their children. Also the bday celebration of XM that senja promised him n their bonding 😝 So please author give use few bonus chpts with them🙏🙏

Reading this because of the event. This would get a higher review from me if it had a decent editor. Translation is hard, writing is hard. But an editor would help fix all the grammar mistakes. They are so frequent that it is a distraction trying to read the story. If I didn't need minutes read for the event I wouldn't have continued as far in as I have.

5 stars definitely....it is one of the best novel I read.The story of this novel is very interesting.It captives your attention till the end.All the characters are well written and I must say one should try it .

I was just trying out another story by the same author of ‘The love of a Lycan’. This story is amazing! The author is very creative and imaginative in writing out the characters. I enjoy this story as much as the other. Thank you!!

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So far i love the story. Quinaro is been focused and is lovely story. Quinaro knows that she loves Jun whatever he is .let her give him cold shoulder. This love hate relationship is best 😅

**JUST READ IT** it has become my second favorite after the same author's another one. Check it out too. These kind of story is hard to come by. I really like the bond between xiao brothers, especially qianru. I love how the relationship develops with jun and qianru ❤❤❤ Thank you author.. Im really glad that i found your stories.. I mean it ..

Plot background is good. After reading Senja I was happy. If I compare both Senja story is best. Also SS cost is very high in story of dusk. Please reduce the SS for unlocking the chapters. About Story of dusk, slow pacing romantic plot. But still it's good.

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I actually really like the concept. It has a uniqueness that attracts, and a plot that keeps the readers attention at all times. It’s a splendid story.

No matter how good the writing and story i don't like the feeling reading their love story since i love SENJA more... It's feel like he cheating on her 😅 plus i already know the ending.

Xiao tianhao and senja is the best, no one else. So I don't want to read this story of their past where xiao and Luna were together. Thou there love might be true I wnt read it.

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saya hanya suka membaca. banyak membaca itu menyenangkan. menyenangkan sekali. apakah sudah 140 kata. entahlah. intinya suka membaca. dan terimakasih untuk capternya

Beautifully story, and capture your interest from the very first chapter. Overall a very good book and leaves you wanting more. HIGHLY RECOMMEND!

I’ve been putting this book on the shelf, however never got mood to read it until recently. And.... unbelievebly very good plot and kept me hooked and I read all the chapters at one from chpter 1 until 45. I ship Xiao Jun and Senja at first, but I like Luna character as well. I hope the author keeps updating the story.. I am waiting and will vote you everyday

Interesting and very sad story. I feel the characters' pain too as well. The story the story also keeps one interested in what will happen next as the story goes on. Nice story Author

Wow!This is great. I love the story very much it really captures my interest in reading. Kudos to the author. Though this is just a fiction but I would like to read this until the end.

I read your other books and I love them all... I hope once the purple dawn is finished, you will update this regularly... love you dear author!

The novels is good, hope you keep the updates i vote all my stones for you.. hope you can maintain the stability update. I read your other novel too.... keep it up the good work!

This is the prequel to Purple Dawn Till Dusk, which I have not read yet, though I understand it should be able to stand on its own. Due to my personality if there is a sequel or set of stories, I prefer to start from the beginning or prequel to get an idea as what story the author wants to tell its reader/s. So for now after reading 9 chapters, I can give it a 4 as it introduces key characters which is likely to have impact on Senja's future. I like what I'm reading so far, but got a little bit confused in some parts of it. What I'm concerned about it is the transitioning of one story to the next, how will that happen?

After I've read the author other works...It truly makes me to give off a great impression that this would be another fun and great novel to read without getting out of boredom. It truly amaze me and the same time thrilled on how the story plot develop connecting to the other latest novel in the other hand...It simply do amaze and excite me to read it more......Thanks for this lovely work, author-sama...Keep up your good work...💞💞💞💞👍👍👍👍👍💖💖💖

I am not super adept at reviews, but I shall do my best. This novel is related to Purple Dawn till Dusk, pretty much like a prequel except that it gives the readers an understanding and a background to the former Senja. Purple Dawn brings up events that is not explained in the novel, so I am hoping that this one would explain it, especially the "saving the Kingdom three years ago" event. 😅 Also, I want to know what happened to Senja in that one year disappearance. ^^ The author's writing slowly improves because if you read PD till Dusk, you would see how much the author improves in word usage and grammar. It isn't perfect and still has some issue with word usage, but it's the author's way of getting better. Updates are at one chapter a day. I am still confused about the world background and I still need some insight in the characters especially the main ones. :) But well, give the novel a try and hope you enjoy.

Updates: 5 Writing and World: 4 each Story and Character: 3 each Overall: 3.8 The writing is understandable, but there are still frequent grammatical errors that mess up the flow of reading for me. So, I suggest getting a proofreader that’s knowledgeable about proper sentence and verb construction. I had some difficulty grasping the world and the feuds that were currently going on. Some background passages on what’s happening in this world would clear this up greatly. The world info bits are currently scattered through these first three chapters, but they don’t connect/flow in an easy, coherent big picture. Way too many characters in the beginning. I couldn’t keep up unfortunately nor could I connect or grasp any of them very well individually. I’d say stick to no more than 3 characters for the first 3 chapters, and then you can add more. If you need all of them, then again with the background passages mentioned earlier, explain how they all fit into the current events and their relationships to one another beforehand. Once a solid foundation is established, then continue this piece by piece info bit strategy. But for the beginning chapters, this strategy makes it confusing actually. Lastly, this’ll also help the visualization of the action scenes which were interrupted by info bits on their relationship or current struggle in the world. In short, this just needs some grammar brush ups, organization and trimming, and then the story is good to go!