Reviews of Max: Fate Breaker by mugen95 - Webnovel

you can understand this novel (but it has 0 development), the author does not know how to write fights and unnecessarily prolongs them (he killed a cyclops in 2 paragraphs, but 1 full cap to just hit the fury) and that when he had trained for 2 YEARS ... 2,8 stars

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Still pretty hooked, makes sense since i read through it in less than 2 hours. Cant wait for new chaps. This is just here to fill the 140 character limit.

this is a good story with progression being made at a decent pace though I feel mc should be able to use his powers on monsters like minotaur and nemean lion and such otherwise I'd say keep going but if you break up the mc with his girl for some dome reason the story goes to 3 stars

Let me be honest, this is one of the few fanfics I read that weren't overrated. the story development is kind of fast but it is an awesome story nonetheless. what I suggest is trying to add some chapters following his small quests as well. the author does well with the main plot. however he can improve his book by doing something like the original author. I mean the original author forces alot on all the quests and character development while this author skips over the small quests. it was kind of stunning how quickly the main character grew strong enough to lift up the sky while only showing disconfort and dread in not being able to move. I mean, come on, percy and annabeth weren't able to hold it too long without losing all strength. however, I still believe this fanfic is awesome in it's own right. I mean, he literally added in some extra demigod powers that were not seen before. the author was abrupt though when Max met the Roman's. didn't expect that inclusion. glad there is another percy Jackson fan.

I lost brain cells reading this... I literally got a headache from reading this. The author is a child He breaks the fourth wall a lot witch is annoying after you do it 4 times The author writes like the annoying at school that just wont shut up and will keep talking to himself if no one is listening to him. I was honestly surprised that so many people actually didn't talk about that. I guess I'm one of the only people that read this fanfic and got annoyed at how childish this is. I don't know the author so I'm not going to say anything about him but I am going to say to him to please stop with the annoying commentary it's annoying and cringe.

🌹💎 🌹💎 🌹💎 Has this been dropped?

Plz keep writing this I luv the Percy Jackson series and I love the character you made and his powers and how you made pan a very interesting character with a backstory to why he’s lost so to speak also love the romance with him and thalia don’t ever want him or her to split up though or he has a harem I feel like it’ll ruin it if either of them cheat or break up for me

I really like the story and is definitely one of the better op Percy Jackson fanfics. I like the original-ness of the story and that it veers from the original timeline as well

Best Percy Jackson fanfic I’ve seen so far. Recommend reading not gonna lie sometimes confusing at times but it usually pretty clear and well written hope it continues

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So amazing love reading this book! Keep going and give us more chapters!!! The plot is amazing, the way that the author added more things to the story is amazing!!

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The grammar and readability of the work is passing with few to no errors. The updates are reasonable but it won't be as frequent as some light novels published on webnovel. The story development is decent but to some it might be too slow. The main character seems too powerful that it feels like there is not much character development but I can see some with the emotional aspect. The world background is not often used on webnovel so I think it is an excellent to add variety.

Hey guys! Author here. Figured I'd give myself a review. So here goes. The story is about a reincarnator who is now the son of the lost god Pan. He is normal at first but becomes really OP in the future. Hope you readers have a fun time reading it. Oh, almost forgot. The story progress slowly, but faster than the original. Enjoy. Cheers guy. Mugen Out!!

Love the book only reason 4.8 stars is because I wish authors could do at least 1-2 chapters daily but life happens and not always possible keep up the great work author. 👍

I’ve been reading this for a bit now, and it’s only been getting better and better. It’s has a really cool concept, and it’s just overall a good fan fic. 10/10 would recommend. It’s also a similar idea I had for an English Project once, which is cool.

It is a great Fan Fiction and is well worth a read. 👍👍👍👍🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃🙃👍🙃👍

GIVE IT A TRY AND DON'T DROP IT! The overall quality of this novel gradually gets better from chapter to chapter. The story has always been solid from the beginning, but some may say the writing is confusing at times. Don't worry though, because it gets better later on! All I want to say is to give it a try!

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Idea was a cool one. Powers of the wild.and nature was neat. Then we get the weirdest let me fk you sh*t out of nowhere. And I do mean nowhere. Just all of a sudden the two characters want each other so bad they might as well be hent*i characters. Needless to say that killed it for me.

It's really good. I love this fanfic hope you update more chapters. I'm craving for Percy Jackson fanfic nowadays. I remember those time when I finished the series. Hope you make crossovers with other Rick Riordan novels. Good job.

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Do not leave Ana, please, I was waiting so long to read a Good Percy Jackson Fanfic, just to see her, not with the stupid protagonist of the film, it made me angry. It would also be super interesting to see Persy and Lukas, red with envy for the MC. (Use translator from Latin Spanish to English)

Honestly quite good, the only thing that I don't like is the author notes/puns/fatass in the middle of the chapters . . . . ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................,..............,,..........................

Well it is a good thing. I like it. That is basically all. Review is here to motivate author. Might even get him a bit more people, who throw power stones.

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Really good chapter and the story. The pace of update is also good. Overall a really good story. Keep updating please. Really good chapter and the story. The pace of update is also good. Overall a really good story. Keep updating please.

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