One thing I can say about this novel is that the release is slow. It is so slow that sometimes you think that it’s dropped or on hiatus. When I see authors like this, I wonder if they are inspired by MadSnail cause they basically release once a month
This novel was my second ever light novel I've ever read and I got more nostalgia memories with this novel than my first someone liked a random comment and I got reminded of the marvelous writing and captivating story (even though it's just from my memories and I doubt this) it's still a great novel saddened a bit that it stopped updating if it continued I might have reread
A summary of the first chapter by GPT if you are unsure whether to read this book or not. Either way, I highly recommend reading this book as it is a gem.
Side note: Just read the first chapter becuase the summary ruins the immersion.
Spoilers below!!!!
Ed wakes up in complete darkness, unable to feel his body or surroundings. He gradually regains his sense of self but struggles to remember anything about his identity, except for his name, Ed. He suddenly receives a message that states: "Summoning Dungeon Champion" and gets sucked into a mysterious vacuum, only to find himself in a dimly lit dungeon corridor as a pristine skeleton.
A message commands him to "Kill trespassers," but he has no combat skills and is unsure of his role. Ed speculates that he might be a floor boss and hears sounds of approaching trespassers. He debates whether to confront them or escape but ultimately decides to eliminate the intruder. He enters a room with fellow skeletons holding rusty weapons and tries to take one, but it doesn't work as expected. When another skeleton resists, Ed surprisingly dislocates its arm, realizing he might be stronger than he initially thought.
Ed now feels more confident about his chances of survival in this mysterious dungeon.
its good . you should give it a try...........................................................................................................................................................................................
I love the story, cool inventive ideas of a story, keeping up a awesome plot which keeps on gaining track at a steady pace, the chapter releases aren’t quick, but balanced, overall, a great novel.
Top tier WB, strongly recommend.
The idea of having more then one avatar is really good and give this sense of liberty to the history even when MAC is stuck in a dungeon. XD
All the characters have their own individuality, what is kind of hard to find in the similar WB of this site.
The only thing that may be lacking in the world details, maybe i just like this or is something that i expect but i fell like the surroundings is crudly spoken, making a lot of error margin in the imagination process.
I'm not gonna lie this is my favorite book on this website while there are many out there that are more popular but this one is just perfection. Everything about this book is great, first the system and skills are cool and different from any I've seen, second ed is just great he may not be the most exciting personality it just fits and he all around is just nice, and finally the thing that got me to truly adore this book is the amazing idea of him having a different body on each floor that has it's own skills and innate traits. I've always wanted is story where mc is a swordsman or magician to see what he would be if he had a different build following the same rules of the world and in stories when the mc is a jack of all trades it doesn't seem feel the same because it's just too op, but this glorious story was able to give me the thing I've longed for and keep it so the character doesn't seem to be too op. To rap this up this story is great and I hope we get to enjoy it for a long time.
he isn't op like most main characters but he's not weak either. has a nice progression for his abilities levels and how he get new ones. worth the read
On 164 right now, there are occasional typo
And the story start to get inconsistent, the mc who were rational just suddenly taken over by stupidity and emotions.
BUT before that, the story is fine and characters are interesting
Really enjoy this book. Like to join the discord and to know when the new chapter is released but the link has expired. Can you update the link please [img=recommend]?
This story is so good. He is a mob in a dungeon but still cool. It is fun to read and I had a good laugh when he interacts with his fellow mobs. Great job, author!
well i mean i don’t know what to say…i wrote this review just to ask the author to keep writing…?Please?tiny please?Is it the end of this volume that make you not write for 13 days or…?
Since I've been around and reading the web novel from the early 100's I figured it's high time I finally write a review. Honestly, the story is extremely enjoyable. Not only does the author know what he's aiming for in his novel, but he really cares for his work. There really isn't much for negatives except a couple story developments, but that's not important in the end. I only wish his work had more traction so he could make more money.
I am completed up to date. I find that the protagonist isn't just all powerful and actually has to put in a lot of work to get to his lvl of power. however there is still plenty of room to grow and I look forward to the next chapter.
A fun Quirky story. while some see it as frustrating, I like how the author changes with each new floor that they interface. While the early chapters were a bit hard to get through they were truly amusing till the point that they captivate you and draw you in without even noticing. Sround chapter 500 author took on a new writing style that is irksome and perfect. I find irksome just cause I want to know what happens and when I get involved in it and it changes scene's once more. Creating a brilliance of captivity.
The Story has a good flow with great and relatable characters with understandable relationships and the action scenes are interesting with excitement and flair.
A lot of restrictions on the starts and too many conflicts with everything on the start. It makes a good story after passing a few chapters ahead, average story progressing pace, lacking a bit on the bland background for a general amount of chapter,lacks the adventuring part.
All in all,bland background but an evolutionary type.
This book has a fascinating premise. Ed being forced into a new (un)life and being punished by the system for not performing is gripping stuff. I'd LOVE to see him figure out more loopholes and workarounds to 'game' the system.
Good soup... loving the story..........................................................................................................................
The chapter is interesting, the main character is unique, the storyline is good and fun, I really like this novel, I give it five stars, because I think I really like novels like this
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