Reviews of The Villainess and her Victim by _VA_ - Webnovel

I had to give it a 5. Like damn. Been a while since I've been this impressed with a book. Writing quality: Pretty much awesome. I just love how the novel's being narrated. First pov is cool on it's own, but, this novel somehow made me feel more close to Asura. Maybe it's all her stuttering and tsun-tsun behaviour. Author has a berry nice vocab, ngl. I couldn't point out much mistakes, there were hardly one or two glaring ones. Great job on the narration! And the descriptions too, so we'll written! Stability of updates: From what I can see, author's been updating it regularly, so of course, I'll give a five for this as well. *But I will say, PLEASE UPDATE MORE!!!* Story development: Honestly, it was just a bit slow in the beginning. But that was because the Author took time to make us understand Asura's backstory. She also clarified what Asura felt, and dropped some good hints, letting our imagination run wild~~ Sometimes they turned out as expected, and other times.. Very different XD Was always a pleasant surprise to me though. Anyway, the execution of plot is very smooth, and I quite look forward to what's gonna happen next! (currently on ch 19 and the cliffy is killlingggg meeeee) Character design: If there was a 10 star option, I would've given that. MIND-BLOWING work. Author made me speechless with the work she's done on character designing. At first glance it seems a bit clichéd, but then the depth provided by Asura and Lancera's backstory... (though Lancera's backstory hasn't been elaborated on yet, I assume it'll be made clear in the future). It just helped me imagine them better. Especially the part where Asura first got to know about her love for compliments. It was relatable, yet not. The turning point of her life, I'd say. Also, so far, Asura's character is a bit hard to decipher. Is she an otaku? An ojou-sama? A tsundere? An egoist? Or all of the above? **: Lancera sounds like a potential yandere, I agree with Asura on this. World Background: Aight. This was well described from the first chapter itself. Starting with the description of classes, to the society's hierarchical system, to their prejudice for gay love. World building isn't slow, but it's not rapid either. More of a go with the flow type. I'm enjoying it. Small details being unraveled here and there. Though.. I'm not sure whether to call it modern or medieval since they got tech but still have this monarch system. With this, I end my review. I never expected to find such a gem. Support the author 100%.Will vote when I get my ** lol. Thank you for the chapters! And looking forward for more!~ I'll probably binge read the next 10 chaps Mhm. ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥